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1 Another Magu Passive on Fri Oct 06, 2017 9:27 am

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I have decide my next passive for this skillset, and didn't want to put the entire skillset in limbo to wait for this approval so once this is approve I hope that yall just added it in to the link above.


Intense Heat {III}:Hiroko is able to increase the quality of magma out his body. To the point that the magma is highly concentrated reaching the maximum temperature of magma that is possible. This allow all of Hiroko magma base abilities by entire tier{+1 tier to all magma base abilities.}.



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2 Re: Another Magu Passive on Sat Oct 07, 2017 8:04 am

Ready for review


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3 Re: Another Magu Passive on Sun Oct 15, 2017 4:44 pm

Bump for review


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4 Re: Another Magu Passive on Mon Oct 16, 2017 4:38 am

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Increase the post count, the heat given from magma isnt enough to instantly effect normal human beings let alone those over the pinnacle of human powers. There shouldnt be any ill effect instantly [proven canonly by no one taking any damage from Akainu's "after heat". Prolonged heat exposure sure i can see, but it would need to be just that. Prolonged as effects are not instantaneous.

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5 Re: Another Magu Passive on Mon Oct 16, 2017 4:58 am

I increase the post count by 1 post.


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6 Re: Another Magu Passive on Tue Oct 17, 2017 7:21 am

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Move everything down a couple posts

1-2 posts = no major effect
3-4 posts = the effects you have in 1-2 and so forth

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7 Re: Another Magu Passive on Tue Oct 17, 2017 8:16 am

..All done


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8 Re: Another Magu Passive on Tue Oct 17, 2017 8:40 am

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9 Re: Another Magu Passive on Tue Oct 17, 2017 9:18 am

Hiroko Young wrote:*Primary Skill set Link*
I have decide my next passive for this skillset, and didn't want to put the entire skillset in limbo to wait for this approval so once this is approve I hope that yall just added it in to the link above.



  • Intense Heat {III}: Hiroko is able to imitate large amount of heat from any ignite part of his body or any other magma source given off by the user. The level of heat produce off from the user is dangerous as standard magma can reach as hot as 1300 °F to 2400 °F. Unfortunately this passive temperatures doesn't goes that high. But it still capable of burning thing that comes into range of this deadly passive. The given range of this passive is 15 meters Is the range of the heat of the magma? Is this the magma + Heat range? Please specifywith a 10 stamina per upkeep, and 15 stamina per use. The speed of this passive is instantly making it a very dangerous ability. This passive capped at tier 3.


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  • Post 1-2: No effects.

  • Post 3-4:The irritating of the eyes, dry skin, sweating, head aches and feeling nauseating .


  • Post 5-6:The irritating of the eyes to a degree that it hinder sight{-1 in perception},begin to sweat more, very dry skin that may turn red, you are feeling very sick vomiting, drizzle spells{-1 in speed}, and target begins to experience panting for each breath as well as seeing mirages.

  • 7-8 Everything above increase by another tier, and  Target loses consciousness due to the stress of the heat {7} or heat stroke{aka death at post 8}.

    Notes:To negate the effects, the opponent must spend three posts out of reach of Hiroko's heat passive or constant water source at hand.


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10 Re: Another Magu Passive on Tue Oct 17, 2017 9:29 am

I change the entire passive so I can get the maximum worth of a tier 3 passive that I should be allow to get since the prince of a tier 3 passive is 100,000 ep I want to feel like I am getting my money worth.


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11 Re: Another Magu Passive on Tue Oct 17, 2017 11:18 am

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Hiroko Young wrote:*Primary Skill set Link*
I have decide my next passive for this skillset, and didn't want to put the entire skillset in limbo to wait for this approval so once this is approve I hope that yall just added it in to the link above.


Intense Heat {III}:Hiroko is able to increase the quality of magma out his body. To the point that the magma is highly concrete This doesn't make sense, I assume you meant concentrated. Don't wanna get vague maniped because you put the wrong word. reaching the maximum temperature of magma that is possible. This allow all of Hiroko magma base abilities by entire tier. So in simple term even his weakness abilities would be more deadly if one not carefully. Get rid of this whole last sentence, it isn't needed and just sounds...bad tbh.{+1 tier to all magma base abilities.}

The +1 tier itself is fine, just make those edits to the wording so you don't get screwed.

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12 Re: Another Magu Passive on Tue Oct 17, 2017 11:23 am

all done kin thx for the fast reply.


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13 Re: Another Magu Passive on Tue Oct 17, 2017 11:25 am

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14 Re: Another Magu Passive on Tue Oct 17, 2017 1:58 pm

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