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Secondary Skill Set Name: The Negative Zone
Skill Set Class: Devil Fruit

Skill Set Information:

The major strength of the fruit, as demonstrated by Perona, is that it gives its user the ability to produce ghosts known as Hollows which they can control.These Hollows come in different forms,which are all immune to physical attacks. The most basic of these forms are the Negative Hollows; should a person have a Negative Hollow pass through them or vice versa, they will immediately fall on their knees and become very negative about themselves, sometimes to the point of wanting to commit suicide.Perona also uses the Negative Hollows to gather information from different areas.

Though the power of the Negative Hollows is seemingly impossible to overcome or resist no matter how hardened one's spirit is, it cannot affect anyone who is originally pessimistic about themselves; this was demonstrated when several of Perona's Negative Hollows passed through Usopp, who, due to being pessimistic about his own abilities, was completely unaffected by them. In fact, the third time Perona tried it on him, with four ghosts instead of one, Usopp's negativity caused their power to backfire on Perona and her Negative Hollows, resulting in them collapsing in negativity instead.

It should also be noted that the user of theNikyu Nikyu no Mi can use their power to push intangible materials as a defense against the ghosts produced by the Horo Horo no Mi, as shown by Perona's encounter with Bartholomew Kuma.

She can also produce small round ghosts called Mini Hollows or large round ghosts called Toku Hollows, which have the ability to create shockwave explosions.The strength of the explosions is directly proportional to the size of the ghost; the larger the ghost, the more powerful the explosion.

Should Perona wish to, she can link her consciousness to many Negative Hollows[19]in order to create her Ghost Network, which she uses to gather information about events occurring on Thriller Bark. She can also use this ability as a form of astral projection; Perona projects her own "hollow" or spirit which looks exactly like her, is impervious to physical attack,can summon ghosts,change size,fly, and is intangible. However, in order to use either of these abilities, Perona's physical body must remain limp and unconscious. While she is projecting her spirit, the only way to harm Perona is to injure her defenseless, unconscious body.


Passives: The user hollows have the abilty to intereact with objects like a poltergeist. The debuffs are enchated by .5 per tier

Skill Strengths: The main power of the hollows is once they made physical contact with there target(s).
They will become extremely negative and or depressed. To the point they will lose their will to fight. ( giving this is an rp they will lose stats points.)
Also the hollows can allow the user to see and here threw them.
The user can also make the hollows blow up as well.
Last but not least the hollows can come together to form a giant or small hologram of the user.

Skill Weaknesses: Haki based attacks could easily stop the hollows.
Trillion needs to have his ears and eyes closed to hear or see threw his hollows.
To use his full horo horo powers like form a giant hologram the user must be unconscious.
Elemental type attacks could also take out the hollows seeing as thought kuma in the anime was able to push them away.
If the target(s) are already depressed the horo horo main power is competely useless against them.

Notes: basic attacks like bullet fire punches and kicks will fade right threw the ghost seeing that they are hollow based. Haki is used to touch them at the least.

1:

Tier 1:
Completely Destroyed - Wood, Stone, and similar materials.
Partially Destroyed - 
Lightly Damaged - Iron 
Tier 2: 
Completely Destroyed - Wood, Stone, and similar materials.
Partially Destroyed - Iron
Lightly Damaged - Steel
Tier 3:
Completely Destroyed - Iron, Wood, Stone, and similar materials
Partially Destroyed - Steel
Lightly Damaged - N/A
Tier 4:
Completely Destroyed - Steel, Iron, Wood, Stone, and similar materials.
Partially Destroyed - 
Lightly Damaged -
Tier 5: 
Completely Destroyed - Steel, Iron, Wood, Stone, and similar materials.
Partially Destroyed -
Lightly Damaged -
Tier 6: 
Completely Destroyed - Seastone, Steel, Iron, Wood, Stone, and similar materials.
Partially Destroyed -
Lightly Damaged - N/A

Tier 1:

Speed: 1.0

Tier 1 Skill Name: hollow on the wall
Tier 1 Skill Type: Devil fruit
Tier 1 Skill Range: 20m
Tier 1 Skill Duration: 1
Tier 1 Skill Description: The user creates 1 hollow to go spy for him. The hollow is harmless but still has its horo horo depress power.

Tier 1 Skill Name: Super Hollow Ghost Attack
Tier 1 Skill Type: Devil Fruit
Tier 1 Skill Range: 15m
Tier 1 Skill Duration: 3
Tier 1 Skill Description: The user creates 7 Hollows with hurtful thoughts in mind. The hollows will follow the target(s) within its range when close to the target they will explode causing harm by using brute force from the explosion of the hollows.

Tier 1 Skill Name: Giant shot
Tier 1 Skill Type: Devil Fruit
Tier 1 Skill Range: 15m
Tier 1 Skill Duration: 2
Tier 1 Skill Description: The user creates a 5 foot wide 3 feet long hollow. The hollow then is sent at the target to do area based damge. The area damge will be no stronger then a full blast cannon fire. The hollow is like a cannon fire ball as seen in the manga.

Tier 1 Skill Name: negativity
Tier 1 Skill Type: Devil Fruit
Tier 1 Skill Range: 15m
Tier 1 Skill Duration: 5
Tier 1 Skill Description: The user creates up from 1 to 10 hollows each seeking out someone to go threw to caused them to have depression thus lowering thier stats by 0.5 if hit by 1 but 1.5 if hit by all 10 and 1 if hit by 4 to 9 of the hollows for 3 post.

Tier 1 Skill Name: Hologram Me
Tier 1 Skill Type: Devil Fruit
Tier 1 Skill Range:15m
Tier 1 Skill Duration: 7
Tier 1 Skill Description: By going unconscious the user could create a giant hollow hologram of him self by combining 30 hollows together the hologram is no stronger than the user normal body. The giant hologram size will be 20 feet. However if it gets destroyed all 30 hollows will come rushing out to both blow up and cause depression around the given area it was destroyed.Seeing that the hologram is made up of both negatives and explosive hollows. The size of the explosion is 15m

Tier 2:

Speed: (Give the average speed using our Speed Tier chart of the Skills of this Tier.)

Tier 2 Skill Name:
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Tier 4:

Speed: (Give the average speed using our Speed Tier chart of the Skills of this Tier.)

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Also it was oked that my Devil fruit could lower stats


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@RedHood wrote:Code:SELECT CONTENT just now starting
Secondary Skill Set Name: The Negative Zone
Skill Set Class: Devil Fruit

Skill Set Information: The hollow hollow no mi is a paramecia type devil fruit. The said fruit allows the users to summo, create and control hollows at will making the user a hollow human. The hollows can very well be deadly in thier on rights. The hollows can allow the user to see and hear threw there eyes and ears. So long as the user has one ear or eye or both closed. To greatly increased this the user must be unconcussion. The hollow can also come together to make the user appear as a giant size hologram of him self. But the two most use effects is its power to cause its target to think very negative about them self. To the point they lose most of thier will to fight. ( or rp based stat points speed ect). Also the user can blow up each hollow he creates or summon.

Honestly, i would post the canon description of the fruit tbh, its better worded and ahs each point laid out

Passives: The user hollows have the abilty to intereact with objects like a poltergeist. The devil fruit abilty could be used at its best when the user is unconcussion. As in he will be able to send his hollows out even more like in the anime.

So what does this passive do?

you get two passives, use your second passive to state debuffs are enhanced by .5 per tier, this lets your tier 1's have debuffing effects and your tier 2's to have a full tier, each rising by a full .5 like how the awa awa no mi was set out

Skill Strengths: The main power of the hollows is once they made physical contact with there target(s). They will become extremely negative and or depressed. To the point they will lose their will to fight. ( giving this is an rp they will lose stats points.) Also the hollows can allow the user to see and here threw them. The user can also make the hollows blow up as well. Last but not least the hollows can come together to form a giant or small hologram of the user.

seperate these strengths in to bullet points

Skill Weaknesses: Haki based attacks could easily stop the hollows.
Trillion needs to have his ears and eyes closed to hear or see threw his hollows.
To use his full horo horo powers like form a giant hologram the user must be unconcussion.
Elemental type attacks could also take out the hollows seeing as thought kuma in the anime was able to push them away. If the target(s) are already depressed the horo horo main power is competely useless against them.

Notes: basic attacks like bullet fire punches and kicks will fade right threw the ghost seeing that they are hollow based. Haki is used to touch them at the least.

1:

Tier 1:
Completely Destroyed - Wood, Stone, and similar materials.
Partially Destroyed - 
Lightly Damaged - Iron 
Tier 2: 
Completely Destroyed - Wood, Stone, and similar materials.
Partially Destroyed - Iron
Lightly Damaged - Steel
Tier 3:
Completely Destroyed - Iron, Wood, Stone, and similar materials
Partially Destroyed - Steel
Lightly Damaged - N/A
Tier 4:
Completely Destroyed - Steel, Iron, Wood, Stone, and similar materials.
Partially Destroyed - 
Lightly Damaged - Seastone
Tier 5: 
Completely Destroyed - Steel, Iron, Wood, Stone, and similar materials.
Partially Destroyed - Seastone
Lightly Damaged - Diamond
Tier 6: 
Completely Destroyed - Seastone, Steel, Iron, Wood, Stone, and similar materials.
Partially Destroyed - Diamond
Lightly Damaged - N/A

fruit isnt powerful in physical sense, remove diamond and seastone from the list completely

Tier 1:

Speed: 1.0

Tier 1 Skill Name: hollow on the wall
Tier 1 Skill Type: Devil fruit
Tier 1 Skill Range: 15m because of the fruit, go 20m
Tier 1 Skill Duration: 1
Tier 1 Skill Description: The user creates 1 hollow to go spy for him. The hollow is harmless but still has its horo horo depress power.

Tier 1 Skill Name: Super Hollow Ghost Attack
Tier 1 Skill Type: Devil Fruit
Tier 1 Skill Range: 15m
Tier 1 Skill Duration: 3
Tier 1 Skill Description: The user creates 7 Hollows with hurtful thoughts in mind. The hollows will follow the target(s) within its range when close to the target they will expoled causing harm to the victim.

Tier 1 Skill Name: Giant shot
Tier 1 Skill Type: Devil Fruit
Tier 1 Skill Range: 15m
Tier 1 Skill Duration: 2
Tier 1 Skill Description: The user creates a 5 foot wide 3 feet long hollow. The hollow then is sent at the target to do area based damge.

[color=red]what is area based damage? how does it do damage?[/color[

Tier 1 Skill Name: negativity
Tier 1 Skill Type: Devil Fruit
Tier 1 Skill Range: 15m
Tier 1 Skill Duration: 5
Tier 1 Skill Description: The user creates up from 1 to 10 hollows each seeking out someone to go threw to caused them to have depression thus lowering thier stats by 0.5 if hit by 1 but 1.5 if hit by all 10 and 1 if hit by 4 to 9 of the hollows for 3 post.

Tier 1 Skill Name: Hologram Me
Tier 1 Skill Type: Devil Fruit
Tier 1 Skill Range:15m
Tier 1 Skill Duration: 7
Tier 1 Skill Description: By going unconcussion the user could create a giant hollow hologram of him self by combining 30 hollows together the hologram is no stronger than the user normal body however if it gets destroyed all 30 hollows will come rushing out to both blow up and cause depression around the given area it was destroyed.

give sizes an dinformtion on the hollows your using peronas where different sizes in terms of negativ ehollows and explosive hollows.

Tier 2:

Speed: (Give the average speed using our Speed Tier chart of the Skills of this Tier.)

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Tier 2 Skill Duration:
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Tier 2 Skill Name:
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Tier 2 Skill Range:
Tier 2 Skill Duration:
Tier 2 Skill Description: (Here you should explain every mechanic of the attack. The damage caused, may it be bruising, breaking, degree of burn, and what role each stat plays in the equation if multiple stats are used.)

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Tier 2 Skill Range:
Tier 2 Skill Duration:
Tier 2 Skill Description: (Here you should explain every mechanic of the attack. The damage caused, may it be bruising, breaking, degree of burn, and what role each stat plays in the equation if multiple stats are used.)

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Tier 2 Skill Duration:
Tier 2 Skill Description: (Here you should explain every mechanic of the attack. The damage caused, may it be bruising, breaking, degree of burn, and what role each stat plays in the equation if multiple stats are used.)


Tier 3:

Speed: (Give the average speed using our Speed Tier chart of the Skills of this Tier.)

Tier 3 Skill Name:
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Tier 3 Skill Duration:
Tier 3 Skill Description: (Here you should explain every mechanic of the attack. The damage caused, may it be bruising, breaking, degree of burn, and what role each stat plays in the equation if multiple stats are used.)

Tier 3 Skill Name:
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Tier 3 Skill Duration:
Tier 3 Skill Description: (Here you should explain every mechanic of the attack. The damage caused, may it be bruising, breaking, degree of burn, and what role each stat plays in the equation if multiple stats are used.)

Tier 3 Skill Name:
Tier 3 Skill Type: Fighting Stat(s) Involved
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Tier 3 Skill Duration:
Tier 3 Skill Description: (Here you should explain every mechanic of the attack. The damage caused, may it be bruising, breaking, degree of burn, and what role each stat plays in the equation if multiple stats are used.)

Tier 4:

Speed: (Give the average speed using our Speed Tier chart of the Skills of this Tier.)

Tier 4 Skill Name:
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Tier 4 Skill Range:
Tier 4 Skill Duration:
Tier 4 Skill Description: (Here you should explain every mechanic of the attack. The damage caused, may it be bruising, breaking, degree of burn, and what role each stat plays in the equation if multiple stats are used.)

Tier 4 Skill Name:
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@RedHood wrote:Code:SELECT CONTENT just now starting
Secondary Skill Set Name: The Negative Zone
Skill Set Class: Devil Fruit

Skill Set Information:

The major strength of the fruit, as demonstrated by Perona, is that it gives its user the ability to produce ghosts known as Hollows which they can control.These Hollows come in different forms,which are all immune to physical attacks. The most basic of these forms are the Negative Hollows; should a person have a Negative Hollow pass through them or vice versa, they will immediately fall on their knees and become very negative about themselves, sometimes to the point of wanting to commit suicide.Perona also uses the Negative Hollows to gather information from different areas.

Though the power of the Negative Hollows is seemingly impossible to overcome or resist no matter how hardened one's spirit is, it cannot affect anyone who is originally pessimistic about themselves; this was demonstrated when several of Perona's Negative Hollows passed through Usopp, who, due to being pessimistic about his own abilities, was completely unaffected by them. In fact, the third time Perona tried it on him, with four ghosts instead of one, Usopp's negativity caused their power to backfire on Perona and her Negative Hollows, resulting in them collapsing in negativity instead.

It should also be noted that the user of theNikyu Nikyu no Mi can use their power to push intangible materials as a defense against the ghosts produced by the Horo Horo no Mi, as shown by Perona's encounter with Bartholomew Kuma.

She can also produce small round ghosts called Mini Hollows or large round ghosts called Toku Hollows, which have the ability to create shockwave explosions.The strength of the explosions is directly proportional to the size of the ghost; the larger the ghost, the more powerful the explosion.

Should Perona wish to, she can link her consciousness to many Negative Hollows[19]in order to create her Ghost Network, which she uses to gather information about events occurring on Thriller Bark. She can also use this ability as a form of astral projection; Perona projects her own "hollow" or spirit which looks exactly like her, is impervious to physical attack,can summon ghosts,change size,fly, and is intangible. However, in order to use either of these abilities, Perona's physical body must remain limp and unconscious. While she is projecting her spirit, the only way to harm Perona is to injure her defenseless, unconscious body.


Passives: The user hollows have the abilty to intereact with objects like a poltergeist. The debuffs are enchated by .5 per tier

[Do ye not want another passive?]

Skill Strengths: The main power of the hollows is once they made physical contact with there target(s).
They will become extremely negative and or depressed. To the point they will lose their will to fight. ( giving this is an rp they will lose stats points.)
Also the hollows can allow the user to see and here threw them.
The user can also make the hollows blow up as well.
Last but not least the hollows can come together to form a giant or small hologram of the user.

Skill Weaknesses: Haki based attacks could easily stop the hollows.
Trillion needs to have his ears and eyes closed to hear or see threw his hollows.
To use his full horo horo powers like form a giant hologram the user must be unconcussion. Unconscious?
Elemental type attacks could also take out the hollows seeing as thought kuma in the anime was able to push them away.
If the target(s) are already depressed the horo horo main power is competely useless against them.

Notes: basic attacks like bullet fire punches and kicks will fade right threw the ghost seeing that they are hollow based. Haki is used to touch them at the least.

1:

Tier 1:
Completely Destroyed - Wood, Stone, and similar materials.
Partially Destroyed - 
Lightly Damaged - Iron 
Tier 2: 
Completely Destroyed - Wood, Stone, and similar materials.
Partially Destroyed - Iron
Lightly Damaged - Steel
Tier 3:
Completely Destroyed - Iron, Wood, Stone, and similar materials
Partially Destroyed - Steel
Lightly Damaged - N/A
Tier 4:
Completely Destroyed - Steel, Iron, Wood, Stone, and similar materials.
Partially Destroyed - 
Lightly Damaged -
Tier 5: 
Completely Destroyed - Steel, Iron, Wood, Stone, and similar materials.
Partially Destroyed -
Lightly Damaged -
Tier 6: 
Completely Destroyed - Seastone, Steel, Iron, Wood, Stone, and similar materials.
Partially Destroyed -
Lightly Damaged - N/A

Tier 1:

Speed: 1.0

Tier 1 Skill Name: hollow on the wall
Tier 1 Skill Type: Devil fruit
Tier 1 Skill Range: 20m
Tier 1 Skill Duration: 1
Tier 1 Skill Description: The user creates 1 hollow to go spy for him. The hollow is harmless but still has its horo horo depress power.

Tier 1 Skill Name: Super Hollow Ghost Attack
Tier 1 Skill Type: Devil Fruit
Tier 1 Skill Range: 15m
Tier 1 Skill Duration: 3
Tier 1 Skill Description: The user creates 7 Hollows with hurtful thoughts in mind. The hollows will follow the target(s) within its range when close to the target they will expoled explode? causing harm to the victim.

What kind of harm? I assuming blunt force if so please annotate that.

Tier 1 Skill Name: Giant shot
Tier 1 Skill Type: Devil Fruit
Tier 1 Skill Range: 15m
Tier 1 Skill Duration: 2
Tier 1 Skill Description: The user creates a 5 foot wide 3 feet long hollow. The hollow then is sent at the target to do area based damge. The area damge will be no stronger then a full blast connon fire. The hollow is like a connon fire ball as seen in the manga.

cannon fire'

Tier 1 Skill Name: negativity
Tier 1 Skill Type: Devil Fruit
Tier 1 Skill Range: 15m
Tier 1 Skill Duration: 5
Tier 1 Skill Description: The user creates up from 1 to 10 hollows each seeking out someone to go threw to caused them to have depression thus lowering thier stats by 0.5 if hit by 1 but 1.5 if hit by all 10 and 1 if hit by 4 to 9 of the hollows for 3 post.

Tier 1 Skill Name: Hologram Me
Tier 1 Skill Type: Devil Fruit
Tier 1 Skill Range:15m
Tier 1 Skill Duration: 7
Tier 1 Skill Description: By going unconcussion the user could create a giant hollow hologram of him self by combining 30 hollows together the hologram is no stronger than the user normal body. The giant hologram size will be 20 feet. However if it gets destroyed all 30 hollows will come rushing out to both blow up and cause depression around the given area it was destroyed.Seeing that the hologram is made up of both negatives and explosive hollows.

Spell check this please, also whats the size of the explosion in diameters?

Tier 2:

Speed: (Give the average speed using our Speed Tier chart of the Skills of this Tier.)

Tier 2 Skill Name:
Tier 2 Skill Type: Fighting Stat(s) Involved
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Tier 2 Skill Duration:
Tier 2 Skill Description: (Here you should explain every mechanic of the attack. The damage caused, may it be bruising, breaking, degree of burn, and what role each stat plays in the equation if multiple stats are used.)

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Tier 2 Skill Duration:
Tier 2 Skill Description: (Here you should explain every mechanic of the attack. The damage caused, may it be bruising, breaking, degree of burn, and what role each stat plays in the equation if multiple stats are used.)

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Tier 3 Skill Description: (Here you should explain every mechanic of the attack. The damage caused, may it be bruising, breaking, degree of burn, and what role each stat plays in the equation if multiple stats are used.)

Tier 3 Skill Name:
Tier 3 Skill Type: Fighting Stat(s) Involved
Tier 3 Skill Range:
Tier 3 Skill Duration:
Tier 3 Skill Description: (Here you should explain every mechanic of the attack. The damage caused, may it be bruising, breaking, degree of burn, and what role each stat plays in the equation if multiple stats are used.)

Tier 4:

Speed: (Give the average speed using our Speed Tier chart of the Skills of this Tier.)

Tier 4 Skill Name:
Tier 4 Skill Type: Fighting Stat(s) Involved
Tier 4 Skill Range:
Tier 4 Skill Duration:
Tier 4 Skill Description: (Here you should explain every mechanic of the attack. The damage caused, may it be bruising, breaking, degree of burn, and what role each stat plays in the equation if multiple stats are used.)

Tier 4 Skill Name:
Tier 4 Skill Type: Fighting Stat(s) Involved
Tier 4 Skill Range:
Tier 4 Skill Duration:
Tier 4 Skill Description: (Here you should explain every mechanic of the attack. The damage caused, may it be bruising, breaking, degree of burn, and what role each stat plays in the equation if multiple stats are used.)
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RedHood

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RedHood
Bump oh yeah


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RedHood

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RedHood
Bump again


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Burdmane

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Burdmane
You have to wait 48 hours to bump, man. And you bumped without letting us know if you obliged Sturm, either.

Please use spellcheck... You mean enhanced, not enchated. There are several other typos similar to this throughout the application. Did you meet all of Sturm's requirements? Do you not want a second passive?

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