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1Sheppard of Relentless Desire Empty Sheppard of Relentless Desire on Fri Jan 01, 2016 4:33 pm

Primary Skill Set Name: Sheppard of Relentless Desire
Skill Set Stat:  Melee Weaponry
Skill Set Information: 
The fighting style is very elegant and offensive it focuses more on speed and control over raw power Gaining advantage as a fight goes on, over single blows, though this is not to say the method is lacking in power.  The style is highly offensive and really focuses on turning the combat into Kichi personal playground.
Tapping into fox-fire style, she will infuse her blade with fire, and is able to cut it. All fire of this style is, blue

Passive: 
1.One using this style over a long amount of time can find themselves, becoming the most instinctive aspect of animalistic increasing their speed, when on the offensive. Increases speed by 0.5 tier for 2 posts every 5 posts under the condition of being aggressive. 

2. During a thread, the user may coat their blade in flames, to inflict 1 extra tier of damage for one attack every 3rd post
Skill Strengths: 

  1. Attacks can cause burns using the element of fire.
  2. Capable of creating medium ranged attacks, using fire sword strikes. Tier 2+
  3. Can cut ones fire, for potential multiple attacks or nullifying flames by cutting through them


Skill Weaknesses:

  1. Water attacks 1 tier below or stronger, negate all fire aspects
  2. Every 3 topics in which a fire skill is used t3+, the sword will lose 1 tier unless tier
  3. Heavy rain will negate the passive.

Notes: 
Tier 2 burns at 140 degrees
Tier 3 burns at 250 degrees
Tier 4 Burns at 500 degrees
Tier 5 burns at 700 degrees
Tier 6 burns at 1000 degrees
Tier 1:

Speed:

Tier 1 Skill Name: Ravita 1
Tier 1 Skill Type: Melee Weaponry
Tier 1 Skill Range: 5m
Tier 1 Skill Cooldown&Duration: 3 - Instant
Tier 1 Skill Description: Using her Katana like a Rapier, she rapidly thrusts forward with her blade; causing a gust of heat extending 5meters from the tip of the blade. 

Tier 1 Skill Name: Ravita Bombardment
Tier 1 Skill Type: Melee Weaponry
Tier 1 Skill Range: 3M
Tier 1 Skill Cooldown&Duration: 3 , 1
Tier 1 Skill Description: Using her Katana like a Rapier, she rapidly thrust forward multiple times[10] with her blade; causing gusts of heat extending 3 meters from the tip of the blade with each thrust


Tier 1 Skill Name: Number 10B
Tier 1 Skill Type: Melee Weaponry
Tier 1 Skill Range: Close
Tier 1 Skill Cooldown&Duration: 2, Instant
Tier 1 Skill Description: Defending an attack with her katana, placing a hand on the far flat end of the blade, to provide extra support to the block.

Tier 1 Skill Name: Roar Kaida
Tier 1 Skill Type: Melee Weaponry
Tier 1 Skill Range: 10m
Tier 1 Skill Cooldown&Duration: 3, instant
Tier 1 Skill Description: Being aggressive swingings ones blade 5 times, creating a whistle in the air sounding like a the wind. Ideal for coded messages.

Tier 1 Skill Name: Dragon Thinger
Tier 1 Skill Type: Melee Weaponry
Tier 1 Skill Range: Close
Tier 1 Skill Cooldown&Duration: 5, instant.
Tier 1 Skill Description: A quick strike intended to strike a muscle down the nerves. Very situational but could cause great pain, in a single limb leaving a burning cut.

Tier 2:

Speed: 2

Tier 2 Skill Name: Cutter
Tier 2 Skill Type: Melee Weaponry
Tier 2 Skill Range: Lenth of sword
Tier 2 Skill Cooldown&Duration: 3, Instant
Tier 2 Skill Description: A single simple swift strike supported by heat, capable of cutting plenty of different things

Tier 2 Skill Name: Foundation
Tier 2 Skill Type: Melee Weaponry
Tier 2 Skill Range: 0m
Tier 2 Skill Cooldown&Duration: 5, 1
Tier 2 Skill Description: Trusts tip of her sword into the ground, while grabbing the handle with two hands, and generating fire on the far side of the blade for a strong defensive ability.

Tier 2 Skill Name: Echo 1
Tier 2 Skill Type: Melee Weaponry
Tier 2 Skill Range:3m
Tier 2 Skill Cooldown&Duration: 3, 1
Tier 2 Skill Description: Flurry of sword attacks, which echo forward 3meters each with flames mimic the entire blade itself.  Burning cuts.

Tier 2 Skill Name: Rince 1
Tier 2 Skill Type: Melee Weaponry
Tier 2 Skill Range: 5M 
Tier 2 Skill Cooldown&Duration: 1, Instant
Tier 2 Skill Description: Trusts her sword downwards creating a faint drafting heat  pushing itself backwards with the user. allowing the user to reach a height withing a max distance of 5m.

Tier 3:

Speed: 3

Tier 3 Skill Name: Kaida takes flight
Tier 3 Skill Type:  Melee Weaponry
Tier 3 Skill Range: 20m
Tier 3 Skill Cooldown&Duration: 4 - 2
Tier 3 Skill Description: Launching a major slash of fire, 1m wide and 3m high. The fire will remain behind as an aftermath for 2 posts like a wall.  Inflicts t3 burning cut initially, and firewall burns at t2.

Tier 3 Skill Name: Playground Desire
Tier 3 Skill Type: Melee Weaponry
Tier 3 Skill Range: 20m
Tier 3 Skill Cooldown&Duration: 4 - instant.
Tier 3 Skill Description: Cuts a flame of tier 3 or lower either negating it or creating 2 attacks from the cut fire. [1 left, and 1 right] Burning at T3].
Breaking the fire in 2 two and pushing the two segments in opposite directions of each other, ending by falling over to a flat burning of the ground.
Dimensions: limited by original flame.
 
Tier 3 Skill Name: 
Tier 3 Skill Type: Melee Weaponry
Tier 3 Skill Range: 
Tier 3 Skill Cooldown&Duration: 
Tier 3 Skill Description:(Here you should explain every mechanic of the attack. The damage caused, may it be bruising, breaking, degree of burn, and what role each stat plays in the equation if multiple stats are used.)
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Tier 4:

Speed: 4

Tier 4 Skill Name:
Tier 4 Skill Type: Fighting Stat(s) Involved
Tier 4 Skill Range:
Tier 4 Skill Cooldown&Duration:
Tier 4 Skill Description: (Here you should explain every mechanic of the attack. The damage caused, may it be bruising, breaking, degree of burn, and what role each stat plays in the equation if multiple stats are used.)

Tier 4 Skill Name:
Tier 4 Skill Type: Fighting Stat(s) Involved
Tier 4 Skill Range:
Tier 4 Skill Cooldown&Duration:
Tier 4 Skill Description: (Here you should explain every mechanic of the attack. The damage caused, may it be bruising, breaking, degree of burn, and what role each stat plays in the equation if multiple stats are used.)

Tier 4 Skill Name:
Tier 4 Skill Type: Fighting Stat(s) Involved
Tier 4 Skill Range:
Tier 4 Skill Cooldown&Duration:
Tier 4 Skill Description: (Here you should explain every mechanic of the attack. The damage caused, may it be bruising, breaking, degree of burn, and what role each stat plays in the equation if multiple stats are used.)

Tier 5:

Speed: 5

Tier 5 Skill Name:
Tier 5 Skill Type: Fighting Stat(s) Involved
Tier 5 Skill Range:
Tier 5 Skill Cooldown&Duration:
Tier 5 Skill Description: (Here you should explain every mechanic of the attack. The damage caused, may it be bruising, breaking, degree of burn, and what role each stat plays in the equation if multiple stats are used.)

Tier 5 Skill Name:
Tier 5 Skill Type: Fighting Stat(s) Involved
Tier 5 Skill Range:
Tier 5 Skill Cooldown&Duration:
Tier 5 Skill Description: (Here you should explain every mechanic of the attack. The damage caused, may it be bruising, breaking, degree of burn, and what role each stat plays in the equation if multiple stats are used.)

Tier 6:

Speed: 6

Tier 6 Skill Name:
Tier 6 Skill Type: Fighting Stat(s) Involved
Tier 6 Skill Range:
Tier 6 Skill Cooldown&Duration:
Tier 6 Skill Description: (Here you should explain every mechanic of the attack. The damage caused, may it be bruising, breaking, degree of burn, and what role each stat plays in the equation if multiple stats are used.)



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2Sheppard of Relentless Desire Empty Re: Sheppard of Relentless Desire on Sat Jan 02, 2016 10:44 am

Rai Vertigo

Revolutionaries
Revolutionaries

Rai Vertigo
Overall I feel like you had your idea, but got so caught up in editing some of the sentences don't flow like they should.

@Kichi Kaida wrote:
Spoiler:
Primary Skill Set Name: Sheppard of Relentless Desire
Skill Set Stat:  Melee Weaponry
Skill Set Information: 
The fighting style is very elegant and offensive it focuses more on speed and control over raw power Gaining advantage as a fight goes on, over single blows, though this is not to say the method is lacking in power.  The style is highly offensive and really focuses on turning the combat into Kichi personal playground.
Tapping into fox-fire style, she will infuse her blade with fire, and is able to cut it. All fire of this style is, blue

Passive: 
1.One using this style over a long amount of time can find themselves, becoming the most instinctive aspect of animalistic increasing their speed, when on the offensive.

Ok, firstly increasing speed by how much and for how long?

2. During a thread, the user may coat their blade in flames, to inflict 1 extra tier of damage. Call down is 3 posts 
 Call down? Also how long does the blade stay coated in flames

Skill Strengths: 

  1. Attacks can cause burns using the element of fire.
  2. Capable of creating medium ranged attacks, using fire sword strikes. Tier 2+
  3. Can cut ones fire, for potential multiple attacks or nullifying,

    Ok, I feel that the last point isn't a complete thought. I get that you can cut fire finish the thought saying you can nullify flames by cutting through them? Write it out.
     

Skill Weaknesses:

  1. Water attacks 1 tier below or stronger, negate all fire aspects
  2. Every 3 topics in which a fire skill is used t3+, the sword will lose 1 tier Unless tier 1.
  3. Heavy rain will negate the passive.

Notes: 

Give me an outline of how hot her flames are at each tier.

Tier 1:

Speed:

Tier 1 Skill Name: Ravita 1
Tier 1 Skill Type: Melee Weaponry
Tier 1 Skill Range: 5m
Tier 1 Skill Cooldown&Duration: 1 - Instant
Tier 1 Skill Description: Using her Katana like a Rapier, she rapidly thrusts forward with her blade; causing a gust of heat extending 5meters from the tip of the blade. 

Tier 1 Skill Name: Ravita Bombardment
Tier 1 Skill Type: Melee Weaponry
Tier 1 Skill Range: 5M
Tier 1 Skill Cooldown&Duration: 2 , 1
Tier 1 Skill Description: Using her Katana like a Rapier, she rapidly thrust forward multiple times[10] with her blade; causing gusts of heat extending 5meters from the tip of the blade with each thrust

Lower the range, 5 meters is a bit to far on what is basically a better version of Ravita. Drop a meter. Also increase Cooldown to 3.

Tier 1 Skill Name: Number 10B
Tier 1 Skill Type: Melee Weaponry
Tier 1 Skill Range: Close
Tier 1 Skill Cooldown&Duration: 1, Instant
Tier 1 Skill Description: Defending an attack with her katana, placing a hand on the far flat end of the blade, to provide extra support to the block.

Make it a two post cooldown.

Tier 1 Skill Name: Roar Kaida
Tier 1 Skill Type: Melee Weaponry
Tier 1 Skill Range: 10m
Tier 1 Skill Cooldown&Duration: 3, instant
Tier 1 Skill Description: Being aggressive swingings ones blade 5 times, creating a whistle in the air sounding like a the wind. Ideal for coded messages.

Tier 1 Skill Name: Dragon Thinger
Tier 1 Skill Type: Melee Weaponry
Tier 1 Skill Range: Close
Tier 1 Skill Cooldown&Duration: 5, instant.
Tier 1 Skill Description: A quick strike intended to strike a muscle down the nerves. Very situational but could cause great pain, in a single limb leaving a burning cut.

Tier 2:

Speed: 1
Change Speed to 2

Tier 2 Skill Name: Cutter
Tier 2 Skill Type: Melee Weaponry
Tier 2 Skill Range:
Tier 2 Skill Cooldown&Duration:
Tier 2 Skill Description: A single simple swift strike supported by heat, capable of cutting plenty of different things

Needs Range which I imagine to be the length of the sword. Also needs duration and cooldown.

Tier 2 Skill Name: Foundation
Tier 2 Skill Type: Melee Weaponry
Tier 2 Skill Range: 0m
Tier 2 Skill Cooldown&Duration: 5, 1
Tier 2 Skill Description: Trusts tip of her sword into the ground, while grabbing the handle with two hands, and generating fire on the far side of the blade for a strong defensive ability.

Tier 2 Skill Name: Echo 1
Tier 2 Skill Type: Melee Weaponry
Tier 2 Skill Range:5m
Tier 2 Skill Cooldown&Duration: 2, 1
Tier 2 Skill Description:Flurry of sword attacks, which ecgo forward 5meters each with flames mimic the entire blade itself.  Burning cuts.

Cool down of 3 please

Tier 2 Skill Name: Rince 1
Tier 2 Skill Type: Melee Weaponry
Tier 2 Skill Range: 5M 
Tier 2 Skill Cooldown&Duration: 1, Instant
Tier 2 Skill Description: Trusts her sword downwards and uses the recoil to grant self-significant height, while lunging forward.

Ok, what? I don't understand how this one is supposed to work... she thrust her sword down... Any recoil isn't going to be enough to gain height.. It will either just bounce up a small amount, break the sword, or break whatever is under it... Or in case of dirt floor... just be stuck in it.

Tier 3:

Speed: (Give the average speed using our Speed Tier chart of the Skills of this Tier.)
You know you don't have to fill the entire sheet at once right? Also needs speed.
Tier 3 Skill Name: Kaida takes flight
Tier 3 Skill Type:  Melee Weaponry
Tier 3 Skill Range: 50m
Tier 3 Skill Cooldown&Duration: 4 - 2
Tier 3 Skill Description: Launching a major slash of fire, 1m wide and 3m high. The fire will remain behind as an aftermath for 2 posts like a wall.  Inflicts t3 burning cut initially, and firewall burns at t2.

50 is too far. Bring it down to 20.

Tier 3 Skill Name: Playground Desire
Tier 3 Skill Type: Melee Weaponry
Tier 3 Skill Range: 50m
Tier 3 Skill Cooldown&Duration: 4 - instant.
Tier 3 Skill Description: Cuts a flame of tier 3 or lower either negating it or creating 2 attacks from the cut fire. [1 left, and 1 right] Burning at T3].
This flame cut.

50 feet is too far... Bring it down, also you should probably finish this one

Tier 3 Skill Name: Goats Horns
Tier 3 Skill Type: Melee Weaponry
Tier 3 Skill Range: 20meters
Tier 3 Skill Cooldown&Duration: 5,1
Tier 3 Skill Description: Taking the stance similar to that of a goat, leaning forward as  if bowing, with her katana held from her waist. Kichi rushes forward. Trusting her blade constantly backwards and forward. launching lines of fire outwards directly in front of her. These flames will feel solid like a hammer burning.

Ok, the thrusting part makes no sense to me, I think you mean slashing. Also the hammer burning comment makes no sense. Are you saying these hot flames can cut things instead of engulfing a person in flames?

Tier 4:

Speed: (Give the average speed using our Speed Tier chart of the Skills of this Tier.)

Tier 4 Skill Name:
Tier 4 Skill Type: Fighting Stat(s) Involved
Tier 4 Skill Range:
Tier 4 Skill Cooldown&Duration:
Tier 4 Skill Description: (Here you should explain every mechanic of the attack. The damage caused, may it be bruising, breaking, degree of burn, and what role each stat plays in the equation if multiple stats are used.)

Tier 4 Skill Name:
Tier 4 Skill Type: Fighting Stat(s) Involved
Tier 4 Skill Range:
Tier 4 Skill Cooldown&Duration:
Tier 4 Skill Description: (Here you should explain every mechanic of the attack. The damage caused, may it be bruising, breaking, degree of burn, and what role each stat plays in the equation if multiple stats are used.)

Tier 4 Skill Name:
Tier 4 Skill Type: Fighting Stat(s) Involved
Tier 4 Skill Range:
Tier 4 Skill Cooldown&Duration:
Tier 4 Skill Description: (Here you should explain every mechanic of the attack. The damage caused, may it be bruising, breaking, degree of burn, and what role each stat plays in the equation if multiple stats are used.)

Tier 5:

Speed: (Give the average speed using our Speed Tier chart of the Skills of this Tier.)

Tier 5 Skill Name:
Tier 5 Skill Type: Fighting Stat(s) Involved
Tier 5 Skill Range:
Tier 5 Skill Cooldown&Duration:
Tier 5 Skill Description: (Here you should explain every mechanic of the attack. The damage caused, may it be bruising, breaking, degree of burn, and what role each stat plays in the equation if multiple stats are used.)

Tier 5 Skill Name:
Tier 5 Skill Type: Fighting Stat(s) Involved
Tier 5 Skill Range:
Tier 5 Skill Cooldown&Duration:
Tier 5 Skill Description: (Here you should explain every mechanic of the attack. The damage caused, may it be bruising, breaking, degree of burn, and what role each stat plays in the equation if multiple stats are used.)

Tier 6:

Speed: (Give the average speed using our Speed Tier chart of the Skills of this Tier.)

Tier 6 Skill Name:
Tier 6 Skill Type: Fighting Stat(s) Involved
Tier 6 Skill Range:
Tier 6 Skill Cooldown&Duration:
Tier 6 Skill Description: (Here you should explain every mechanic of the attack. The damage caused, may it be bruising, breaking, degree of burn, and what role each stat plays in the equation if multiple stats are used.)

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3Sheppard of Relentless Desire Empty Re: Sheppard of Relentless Desire on Sat Jan 02, 2016 11:37 am

All done.

  1. State, details added
  2. Notes: Added a guess of temperatures: figured burning through steel, at teir 3 would be a ok basis 
  3. Fixed the abbilites. 


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4Sheppard of Relentless Desire Empty Re: Sheppard of Relentless Desire on Sat Jan 02, 2016 1:32 pm

shootershoot

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shootershoot
@Kichi Kaida wrote:Primary Skill Set Name: Sheppard of Relentless Desire
Skill Set Stat:  Melee Weaponry
Skill Set Information: 
The fighting style is very elegant and offensive it focuses more on speed and control over raw power Gaining advantage as a fight goes on, over single blows, though this is not to say the method is lacking in power.  The style is highly offensive and really focuses on turning the combat into Kichi personal playground.
Tapping into fox-fire style, she will infuse her blade with fire, and is able to cut it. All fire of this style is, blue

Passive: 
1.One using this style over a long amount of time can find themselves, becoming the most instinctive aspect of animalistic increasing their speed, when on the offensive. Increases speed by 1 tier for 2 posts every 5 posts under the condition of being aggressive. try .5 speed

2. During a thread, the user may coat their blade in flames, to inflict 1 extra tier of damage for one attack every 3rd post
Skill Strengths: 

  1. Attacks can cause burns using the element of fire.
  2. Capable of creating medium ranged attacks, using fire sword strikes. Tier 2+
  3. Can cut ones fire, for potential multiple attacks or nullifying flames by cutting through them


Skill Weaknesses:

  1. Water attacks 1 tier below or stronger, negate all fire aspects
  2. Every 3 topics in which a fire skill is used t3+, the sword will lose 1 tier Unless tier 1.
  3. Heavy rain will negate the passive.

Notes: 
Tier 2  burns at  700  degrees
Tier 3 burns at  1400 degrees
Tier 4 Burns at 2000 degrees
Tier 5 burns at 2500 degrees
Tier 6 burns at 3000 degrees
Tier 1:

Speed:

Tier 1 Skill Name: Ravita 1
Tier 1 Skill Type: Melee Weaponry
Tier 1 Skill Range: 5m
Tier 1 Skill Cooldown&Duration: 1 - Instant 3 post cd
Tier 1 Skill Description: Using her Katana like a Rapier, she rapidly thrusts forward with her blade; causing a gust of heat extending 5meters from the tip of the blade. 

Tier 1 Skill Name: Ravita Bombardment
Tier 1 Skill Type: Melee Weaponry
Tier 1 Skill Range: 3M
Tier 1 Skill Cooldown&Duration: 3 , 1
Tier 1 Skill Description: Using her Katana like a Rapier, she rapidly thrust forward multiple times[10] with her blade; causing gusts of heat extending 3 meters from the tip of the blade with each thrust


Tier 1 Skill Name: Number 10B
Tier 1 Skill Type: Melee Weaponry
Tier 1 Skill Range: Close
Tier 1 Skill Cooldown&Duration: 2, Instant
Tier 1 Skill Description: Defending an attack with her katana, placing a hand on the far flat end of the blade, to provide extra support to the block.

Tier 1 Skill Name: Roar Kaida
Tier 1 Skill Type: Melee Weaponry
Tier 1 Skill Range: 10m
Tier 1 Skill Cooldown&Duration: 3, instant
Tier 1 Skill Description: Being aggressive swingings ones blade 5 times, creating a whistle in the air sounding like a the wind. Ideal for coded messages.

Tier 1 Skill Name: Dragon Thinger
Tier 1 Skill Type: Melee Weaponry
Tier 1 Skill Range: Close
Tier 1 Skill Cooldown&Duration: 5, instant.
Tier 1 Skill Description: A quick strike intended to strike a muscle down the nerves. Very situational but could cause great pain, in a single limb leaving a burning cut.

Tier 2:

Speed: 2

Tier 2 Skill Name: Cutter
Tier 2 Skill Type: Melee Weaponry
Tier 2 Skill Range: Lenth of sword
Tier 2 Skill Cooldown&Duration: 3, Instant
Tier 2 Skill Description: A single simple swift strike supported by heat, capable of cutting plenty of different things

Tier 2 Skill Name: Foundation
Tier 2 Skill Type: Melee Weaponry
Tier 2 Skill Range: 0m
Tier 2 Skill Cooldown&Duration: 5, 1
Tier 2 Skill Description: Trusts tip of her sword into the ground, while grabbing the handle with two hands, and generating fire on the far side of the blade for a strong defensive ability.

Tier 2 Skill Name: Echo 1
Tier 2 Skill Type: Melee Weaponry
Tier 2 Skill Range:5m 3m
Tier 2 Skill Cooldown&Duration: 3, 1
Tier 2 Skill Description:Flurry of sword attacks, which ecgo forward 5meters each with flames mimic the entire blade itself.  Burning cuts.

Tier 2 Skill Name: Rince 1
Tier 2 Skill Type: Melee Weaponry
Tier 2 Skill Range: 5M 
Tier 2 Skill Cooldown&Duration: 1, Instant
Tier 2 Skill Description: Trusts her sword downwards creating a faint drafting heat  pushing itself backwards with the user. allowing the user to reach a height withing a max distance of 5m.

Tier 3:

Speed: 3

Tier 3 Skill Name: Kaida takes flight
Tier 3 Skill Type:  Melee Weaponry
Tier 3 Skill Range: 20m
Tier 3 Skill Cooldown&Duration: 4 - 2
Tier 3 Skill Description: Launching a major slash of fire, 1m wide and 3m high. The fire will remain behind as an aftermath for 2 posts like a wall.  Inflicts t3 burning cut initially, and firewall burns at t2.

Tier 3 Skill Name: Playground Desire
Tier 3 Skill Type: Melee Weaponry
Tier 3 Skill Range: 20m
Tier 3 Skill Cooldown&Duration: 4 - instant.
Tier 3 Skill Description: Cuts a flame of tier 3 or lower either negating it or creating 2 attacks from the cut fire. [1 left, and 1 right] Burning at T3].
Breaking the fire in 2 two and pushing the two segments in opposite directions of each other, ending by falling over to a flat burning of the ground.
Dimensions: limited by original flame.
 
Tier 3 Skill Name: 
Tier 3 Skill Type: Melee Weaponry
Tier 3 Skill Range: 
Tier 3 Skill Cooldown&Duration: 
Tier 3 Skill Description:(Here you should explain every mechanic of the attack. The damage caused, may it be bruising, breaking, degree of burn, and what role each stat plays in the equation if multiple stats are used.)
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Tier 4:

Speed: 4

Tier 4 Skill Name:
Tier 4 Skill Type: Fighting Stat(s) Involved
Tier 4 Skill Range:
Tier 4 Skill Cooldown&Duration:
Tier 4 Skill Description: (Here you should explain every mechanic of the attack. The damage caused, may it be bruising, breaking, degree of burn, and what role each stat plays in the equation if multiple stats are used.)

Tier 4 Skill Name:
Tier 4 Skill Type: Fighting Stat(s) Involved
Tier 4 Skill Range:
Tier 4 Skill Cooldown&Duration:
Tier 4 Skill Description: (Here you should explain every mechanic of the attack. The damage caused, may it be bruising, breaking, degree of burn, and what role each stat plays in the equation if multiple stats are used.)

Tier 4 Skill Name:
Tier 4 Skill Type: Fighting Stat(s) Involved
Tier 4 Skill Range:
Tier 4 Skill Cooldown&Duration:
Tier 4 Skill Description: (Here you should explain every mechanic of the attack. The damage caused, may it be bruising, breaking, degree of burn, and what role each stat plays in the equation if multiple stats are used.)

Tier 5:

Speed: 5

Tier 5 Skill Name:
Tier 5 Skill Type: Fighting Stat(s) Involved
Tier 5 Skill Range:
Tier 5 Skill Cooldown&Duration:
Tier 5 Skill Description: (Here you should explain every mechanic of the attack. The damage caused, may it be bruising, breaking, degree of burn, and what role each stat plays in the equation if multiple stats are used.)

Tier 5 Skill Name:
Tier 5 Skill Type: Fighting Stat(s) Involved
Tier 5 Skill Range:
Tier 5 Skill Cooldown&Duration:
Tier 5 Skill Description: (Here you should explain every mechanic of the attack. The damage caused, may it be bruising, breaking, degree of burn, and what role each stat plays in the equation if multiple stats are used.)

Tier 6:

Speed: 6

Tier 6 Skill Name:
Tier 6 Skill Type: Fighting Stat(s) Involved
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Tier 6 Skill Cooldown&Duration:
Tier 6 Skill Description: (Here you should explain every mechanic of the attack. The damage caused, may it be bruising, breaking, degree of burn, and what role each stat plays in the equation if multiple stats are used.)

u can only have 1 tier 3 skill created. remove one, save it on a word pad, strike it, idc, just gotta go


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5Sheppard of Relentless Desire Empty Re: Sheppard of Relentless Desire on Sat Jan 02, 2016 2:01 pm

Done Smile thank yee for fass reply


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7Sheppard of Relentless Desire Empty Re: Sheppard of Relentless Desire on Sun Jan 03, 2016 7:44 am

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Your temperature, your tier 6 is literally double that of lava, Im going to say that its not hotter than lava and that it caps at 1k degrees. I mean if it were that hot you yourself would be damaging yourself due to the intense heat, even at 1k it would be the same tbh.

You can go a bit more.

Tier 2 burns at 50 degrees < Hot water is hotter than this, recomended heat for nice hot water is 12 degrees. So i mean at least 140.
Tier 3 burns at 200 degrees < 250
Tier 4 Burns at 500 degrees < 500
Tier 5 burns at 1400 degrees < 700
Tier 6 burns at 2400 degrees < 1000



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8Sheppard of Relentless Desire Empty Re: Sheppard of Relentless Desire on Sun Jan 03, 2016 8:18 am

Thank Yee, and done.


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