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1 Kichi Kaida [Done] on Wed Dec 30, 2015 11:24 pm


Name: Kichi Kaida
Alias/Epithet: Tau'ri The Tok'ra
Race: Human
Gender: Female,
Age: 20
Mode: Hard
Occupation: Main-Weapon Specialist  2nd-Navigator
Affiliation: Marine [Undercover as Pirate]
Tier:Tier 1



General Appearance:

A Delightful fully-grown curvaceous and well-endowed adult woman white slightly tanned skinned with long waving glaring blue hair and A crimson scar line that runs across her face.
Normally wearing a torn gown split into a skirt and a top, connected with a single strip across her abdomen, going bare feet.  This is only her relaxed and casual gear due to it having personal significance though she does have more empowering gear more fitted for battle, or high-class countries
.
Finally, she has a literal Skull Mask which often sits on her head and is only really worn in moments of needed to take something extremely serious. Her skull mask also differs slightly from a normal human skull; features appearing sharper with a pair of curved horns, but still missing some of its teeth somewhat giving hints of the Goat Zodiac.

Height: 180cm
Weight: 70kg
Crew Tattoo Placement: Palm of her Right Hand



Personality: Kichi Kaida is quite good natured with a very strong and healthy personality on her front; not letting any strong emotions come to the surface and controlling these emotions to drive herself further whether they be pits of despair or heights of happiness; despite this she is not above crying. When wearing her skull masked this all changes and she is able to put all her emotions to one side becoming an extremely cold weapon.
Calm collected with a strong emotional intelligence along has no problem laying her life down for a good cause; even if its simply letting a friend escape which creates the foundation of her strong moral code.

An appreciation and respect of life to be deadly in combat and yet so gentle and compassionate with children and the weak.
Defending those who can't defend those who can't defend themselves. As hard as rock or as flexible as the wind.....We are all unique as life itself. life for one and one for life... Decent of Self, With strive of Development.

Kichi has two general mentalities she brings to situations with her elegant, professional and somewhat sarcastic comedy or her more friendly childlike, playful, trusting and fun spreading joy when among friends. Can be quite a change to the unexpecting.
Additional Traits: Competitive, Logical Thinking, Outside of a serious situation is quite carefree on the outside, the deep thinker on the inside. Is very trustworthy to complete objects within reason which have been given to her.

Finally, Kichi Kaida has a weird mental council within her head, where 5 versions of herself watch through a single screen, discussing her reality all with a slightly different perception. This area is mostly dark with white seats curved around the screened in placement. This is s simply a mental state which feeds into her logical thinking though over a long period of time this could cause a split personality along with granting her a photographic memory.

Likes:

  • Honesty - Honesty is one of her most liked things and will cause her to respect someone a lot more and even grant curtasay,
  • Socialising - Enjoys a good party, having fun and generally communicating with people.
  • Protecting - Due to events in her history She enjoys defending those who can't defend themselves.

Dislikes:

  • Meaningless acts of Violence - Something of these sorts will often cause a trigger of hostility.
  • Skypeia Fish - They look disgusting and unnatural and are ill on sight
  • People who like to push, and bother her during deep thinking or relaxing times




History:
Kichi was born in Alabasta as her mother and father were traveling through the desert sands heading towards the next village. Mularo [Kichi mother] water broke and forced the family to stop half way in order to supply Kichi with her birth. Moments after the a birth a group of Desert bandits would make use of their weak situation and attacked killing the entire party and thus, Kichi would never learn her blood name nor her mother or father's name and if it was for a Pirate passing by Kichi would have been left to die in the dessert either by drought or hunger. She would remember this all her life seeing death at first site, but being saved by those considered evil.

During her life she would go through multiple cycles being raised by a good-natured pirate with the only intention to really explore the world and thus, she was raised decently with a good solid foundation. When the pirate died she would be forced to live with the uncle who kindly adopted her, and thus the segment of living under an Ex-Marine would start.. Through a range of education under the caring of both sides of the conflict between the world government and pirates and if it wasn’t for a bloody event caused by Pirates she wouldn’t have picked a side and thus she joined the Marines and trained for some time before being transferred to a Marine ship within the South Blue. Where she would learn the ways of the Marines and what is considered justice.

Due to one more attack by pirates on an innocent village, leaving 2 children and 5 adults killed she would make the decision to accept a new role suggested to her by her commanding officer who recognized her potential and didn't think a perspective purely founded on a marine ship would draw correct conclusions. The offer was to go undercover on pirates ships and travel with them to decide if they were decent people, or scum in one case guide them to death the other leave, and thus her role as a Lady of the Sea would start.

Not only would she make reports of each crew, if they were deemed worthy of death she would help implement this in order to help the Marines. Her commanding officer had also taught her not to trust the world government and the line of good and evil she must learn to cross herself. To this day, she has caused three ships to sink themselves with bad information, and Assassinated two captains.  During this time not only would she gain the title of Tau'ri The Tok'ra but learn to be a great navigator being well traveled.

Ship 1 - Convince the crew to use a secret path within the calm belt in order to reach the grand line [No secret path, they all died via sea kings]
Ship 2 - Lead into a deadlly storm and then abandoned the crew, with no navigator they would die.
Ship 3 - Pitted two crews agaisnt each other, during the chaos she would alsu kill the victors captain, with a blade in his back.
Ship 4 and 5 would end up reaching fast controlling currents, and crashing into each other. 

A Dream would one-day forum to find a crew truly worthy of her staying around to actually travel the oceans of adventure while collective information on the world and becoming a True admiral separated from control of the world government and implementing true Justice

Face Claim: (Bleach|Nel Tu)



Last edited by Kichi Kaida on Thu Dec 31, 2015 11:16 am; edited 3 times in total

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2 Re: Kichi Kaida [Done] on Thu Dec 31, 2015 2:58 am

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[b]Name:[/b] Kichi Kaida
[b]Alias/Epithet:[/b] Tau'ri The Tok'ra
[b]Race:[/b] Human
[b]Gender:[/b] Female,
[b]Age:[/b] 20
[b]Mode:[/b] Hard
[b]Occupation: [/b]Main-Weapon Specialist  2nd-Navigator
[b]Affiliation:[/b] Marine [Undercover as Pirate]
[b]Tier:[/b]Tier 1

[hr]
[b]General Appearance:[/b]

A Delightful fully-grown curvaceous and well-endowed adult woman white slightly tanned skinned with long waving glaring blue hair and A crimson scar line that runs across her face.
Normally wearing a torn gown split into a skirt and a top, connected with a single strip across her abdomen, going bare feet.  This is only her relaxed and casual gear due to it having personal significance though she does have more empowering gear more fitted for battle, or high-class countries
.
Finally, she has a literal Skull Mask which often sits on her head and is only really worn in moments of needed to take something extremely serious. Her skull mask also differs slightly from a normal human skull; features appearing sharper with a pair of curved horns, but still missing some of its teeth somewhat giving hints of the Goat Zodiac.

[b]Height:[/b] 180cm
[b]Weight:[/b] 70kg
[b]Crew Tattoo Placement:[/b] Palm of her Right Hand

[hr]
[b]Personality:[/b] Kichi Kaida is quite good natured with a very strong and healthy personality on her front; not letting any strong emotions come to the surface and controlling these emotions to drive herself further whether they be pits of despair or heights of happiness; despite this she is not above crying. When wearing her skull masked this all changes and she is able to put all her emotions to one side becoming an extremely cold weapon.
Calm collected with a strong emotional intelligence along has no problem laying her life down for a good cause; even if its simply letting a friend escape which creates the foundation of her strong moral code.

An appreciation and respect of life to be deadly in combat and yet so gentle and compassionate with children and the weak.
Defending those who can't defend those who can't defend themselves. As hard as rock or as flexible as the wind.....We are all unique as life itself. life for one and one for life... Decent of Self, With strive of Development.

Kichi has two general mentalities she brings to situations with her elegant, professional and somewhat sarcastic comedy or her more friendly childlike, playful, trusting and fun spreading joy when among friends. Can be quite a change to the unexpecting.
Additional Traits: Competitive, Logical Thinking, Outside of a serious situation is quite carefree on the outside, the deep thinker on the inside. Is very trustworthy to complete objects within reason which have been given to her.

Finally, Kichi Kaida has a weird mental council within her head, where 5 versions of herself watch through a single screen, discussing her reality all with a slightly different perception. This area is mostly dark with white seats curved around the screened in placement. This is s simply a mental state which feeds into her logical thinking though over a long period of time this could cause a split personality along with granting her a photographic memory.

[b]Likes:[/b]
[list]
[*]Honesty - Honesty is one of her most liked things and will cause her to respect someone a lot more and even grant curtasay,
[*]Socialising - Enjoys a good party, having fun and generally communicating with people.
[*]Protecting - Due to events in her history She enjoys defending those who can't defend themselves.
[/list]
[b]Dislikes:[/b]
[list]
[*]Meaningless acts of Violence - Something of these sorts will often cause a trigger of hostility.
[*]Skypeia Fish - They look disgusting and unnatural and are ill on sight
[*]People who like to push, and bother her during deep thinking or relaxing times
[/list]

[hr]
[b]History: [/b]
Kichi was born in Alabasta as her mother and father were traveling through the desert sands heading towards the next village. Mularo [Kichi mother] water broke and forced the family to stop half way in order to supply Kichi with her birth. Moments after the a birth a group of Desert bandits would make use of their weak situation and attacked killing the entire party and thus, Kichi would never learn her blood name nor her mother or father's name and if it was for a Pirate passing by Kichi would have been left to die in the dessert either by drought or hunger. She would remember this all her life seeing death at first site, but being saved by those considered evil.

During her life she would go through multiple cycles being raised by a good-natured pirate with the only intention to really explore the world and thus, she was raised decently with a good solid foundation. When the pirate died she would be forced to live with the uncle who kindly adopted her, and thus the segment of living under an Ex-Marine would start.. Through a range of education under the caring of both sides of the conflict between the world government and pirates and if it wasn’t for a bloody event caused by Pirates she wouldn’t have picked a side and thus she joined the Marines and trained for some time before being transferred to a Marine ship within the South Blue. Where she would learn the ways of the Marines and what is considered justice.

Due to one more attack by pirates on an innocent village, leaving 2 children and 5 adults killed she would make the decision to accept a new role suggested to her by her commanding officer who recognized her potential and didn't think a perspective purely founded on a marine ship would draw correct conclusions. The offer was to go undercover on pirates ships and travel with them to decide if they were decent people, or scum in one case guide them to death the other leave, and thus her role as a Lady of the Sea would start.

Not only would she make reports of each crew, if they were deemed worthy of death she would help implement this in order to help the Marines. Her commanding officer had also taught her not to trust the world government and the line of good and evil she must learn to cross herself. To this day, she has caused three ships to sink themselves with bad information, and Assassinated two captains.  During this time not only would she gain the title of Tau'ri The Tok'ra but learn to be a great navigator being well traveled.

Ship 1 - Convince the crew to use a secret path within the calm belt in order to reach the grand line [No secret path, they all died via sea kings]
Ship 2 - Lead into a deadlly storm and then abandoned the crew, with no navigator they would die.
Ship 3 - Pitted two crews agaisnt each other, during the chaos she would alsu kill the victors captain, with a blade in his back.

A Dream would one-day forum to find a crew truly worthy of her staying around to actually travel the oceans of adventure while collective information on the world and becoming a True admiral separated from control of the world government and implementing true Justice

[b]Face Claim:[/b] (Bleach|Nel Tu)[/quote]



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3 Re: Kichi Kaida [Done] on Thu Dec 31, 2015 8:25 am

Goss

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Okay, so a couple of things..

1) Please add "Tier 1" to your Tier.

2) Remove the 300/300 at the end of your history

3) I would also go over the entire thing again and fix the capitalizations and spelling errors, like "Alabasta", "Skypeia", and also don't forget that you only capitalize the first word of a sentence, unless it's a name of some sort.

4) Marines don't care about whether a Pirate are "good" or "scum", the big bosses all think they are scum regardless of how your character feels. I would also specify as to how your character sunk 5 ships, "bad information" is a bit vague; did she lead them to a Marine trap? Did she blow lead them into a huge storm? Etc, etc, more detail is always good.

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4 Re: Kichi Kaida [Done] on Thu Dec 31, 2015 11:15 am

Okay, so a couple of things..

1) Please add "Tier 1" to your Tier.

2) Remove the 300/300 at the end of your history


3) I would also go over the entire thing again and fix the capitalizations and spelling errors, like "Alabasta", "Skypeia", and also don't forget that you only capitalize the first word of a sentence, unless it's a name of some sort.
Semi Done - Somewhat dependant on a program called Gramerly which says its ok but only had time to give it one look over. [Not my fortay - Working on it]

4) Marines don't care about whether a Pirate are "good" or "scum", the big bosses all think they are scum regardless of how your character feels. I would also specify as to how your character sunk 5 ships, "bad information" is a bit vague; did she lead them to a Marine trap? Did she blow lead them into a huge storm? Etc, etc, more detail is always goodQuestion reguarding this. In the anime/manga their were people like Smoker Fuji, Sentomaru and Akone who not only showed respect for certain pirates the difference between someone like Luffy and fake Luffy was clear even giving him free passes.  The main situation i would mention is when Smoker told Tashigi to judge them for herself.

Genenerally i was having it that my south blue comanding officer to be someone similar. Obv i know this isn't the anime/manga and these people don't exist and stuff but do these types of people now exist?. 


I could, maybe remove the part about how the Comanding officer thinks and stuff and maybe make it more offical with like a proposal letter. This could open options leading into a cp9 type role. 

Semi Bump, would like to get your thoughts on the final point, I ran out of time to give it a decent look for grammar[Did skim].

The other thigns are done.

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5 Re: Kichi Kaida [Done] on Thu Dec 31, 2015 11:21 am

Goss

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Okay, things look much better & the commanding officer thing is fair. So I'll give it my 1/2 approval for now, but I recommend you use the time between my approval and another staff member's review to finish up your grammar check!

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6 Re: Kichi Kaida [Done] on Thu Dec 31, 2015 11:28 am

Thank you for the fast reply. Smile 

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7 Re: Kichi Kaida [Done] on Thu Dec 31, 2015 3:11 pm

moved and approved

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