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1Sword Art: Redemption  Empty Sword Art: Redemption on Fri Dec 01, 2017 1:27 pm

Renji Vinsmoke

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Priority: Secondary
Fighting Style: Sword Style
Skill Set Name: Redemption
Skill Set Information: Most sword styles are known for the amazing speed, and precision, but this style invented by Renji balances a bit between strength as well as speed. This sword play is intended to give the enemies trouble with its various destructive techniques ranging from superhuman sword slashes, vacuum waves of air to even electricity.
Passives:

  • Lvl(3) - Skills done with this skill set get a +1 in speed during the duration of the skill.
  • Lvl(3) - After training hard, and familiarizing himself with this technique, Renji is capable of dishing out his techniques without having to put in too much effort giving him a 20% reduction in stamina cost when doing skills from this set.
  • (Lvl then Description)

(Link to purchase of passives)
Skillset Strengths:

  • - This set has a wide array of uses when it comes to offense

Skillset Weaknesses:

  • - May lack in the defensive department at some parts.

Notes:
POD:

Tier 2:
-Channeling electricity power into sword slashes.

                 -Transferring the force of a cut over a distance by swinging the sword at high speed, creating a "vacuum blade" of compressed air; or by simply creating strong winds with sword blows. This is known as a Flying Slash Attack (飛ぶ斬撃 Tobu Zangeki?). The color of these attacks varies between users such as blue, green, purple etc.
Tier 3:
-Cutting things that are usually harder than the sword itself, such as certain types of stone or even steel. The substance usually splits apart a few moments after being cut.

                     -Cutting objects that are thicker than the length of the sword, such as buildings or ships.

MDL:
Tier 1:
 Completely Destroyed - Wood, Stone, and similar materials.
 Partially Destroyed - Iron
 Lightly Damaged -
 Tier 2:
 Completely Destroyed - Wood, Stone, Iron and similar materials.
 Partially Destroyed - Steel
 Lightly Damaged - Titanium
 Tier 3:
 Completely Destroyed - Iron, Wood, Stone, Steel, and similar materials
 Partially Destroyed - Titanium
 Lightly Damaged - Treasure Tree Adam
 Tier 4:
 Completely Destroyed - Steel, Iron, Wood, Stone, Titanium, and similar materials.
 Partially Destroyed - Treasure Tree Adam
 Lightly Damaged - Diamond and Seastone

Electric Chart:

This explains the effects of the user's skills involving electricity.

Tier 2:
Target is inflicted with 2nd degree burns upon the contacted area/limb as well as suffering from paralysis/numbness in the effected area for 1 post.
Tier 3:
Target is inflicted with 2nd degree burns upon the contacted area/limb as well as suffering from paralysis/numbness in the effected area for 2 posts.
Tier 4:
Target is inflicted with 3rd degree burns upon the contacted area/limb as well as suffering from paralysis/numbness in the effected area for 3 posts.

Attribute Priorities:

  • Primary Attribute - Strength
  • Secondary Attribute - Speed and Durability
  • Non-Prioritized Attributes - Perception


Tier 1 Skills:
Skill Name: Soaring Slash
Tier: 1
Type Offensive
Range: Length of sword
Speed: Own
Description: This technique is a rising attack meant to strike the jaw from below. For additional power, the user uses his free arm to apply force to the back of the blade and utilizes a powerful upward jump during the attack.The user can also turn their blade to the side when doing this to make it do blunt damage instead of cutting and instead will cause the opponent bruising/fractures under their chin as well as knocking them down on their back.  


Tier 2 Skills:

Skill Name: Deflect
Tier: 2
Type Offensive/Defensive
Range: Varies (Depends on the range of the deflected projectile)
Speed: Varies (Depends on the speed of the deflected projectile)
Description: By using the side of their blade, the user is capable of deflecting up to 10 solid projectiles at a time such as bullets, rocks, etc back to where they originated from at the same speed it was sent out. Projectile must be no more bigger than a baseball in order to be deflected, and made of a material that can be partially/completely destroyed found within the Tier 2 part of the MDL Chart.

Skill Name: Blitz Lighting
Tier: 2
Type Offensive
Range: Length of blade
Speed: Own
Description: First coating the blade of their sword with electricity, the user quickly swings the sword a total of three times in whichever direction, and fashion they choose with powerful electrical slashes. The fashion of how the user moves their blade determines how the direction the slashes will go such as horizontally, vertically, etc.

Skill Name: Deception
Tier: 2
Type Offensive
Range: 20 meters
Speed: Own
Description: A technique that appears to only be two simple slash attempts with one's blade, the first slash being horizontal, and the second following up going in whichever direction the user chooses. In reality the slashes are done with such swiftness that they "extend" the slashes through the use of compressed air by up to 20 meters which can be used to damage others, and cutting through things. Unlike flying slash attacks, this is more of an extension of those basic sword slashes, using the same length as the blade just with increased range.

Tier 3 Skills:

Skill Name: Begone
Tier: 3
Type Offensive
Range: 30 meters
Speed: 4
Description: Requiring a solid surface, the user taps the tip of their sword onto the ground with enough force to sen out a shockwave reaching out in a 30 meter diameter with a height of 10 meters at the current speed of the skill. The ground will shake a bit within the area of effect, and may cause the surface to break apart a bit depending on said surface. Unlike most of the other techniques that deal cutting damage, this one deals blunt damage with a knockback of 5 meters.

Skill Name: Twister
Tier: 3
Type Offensive
Range: 30 meters
Speed: 4
Description: With one powerful swing of their blade in whichever direction they choose, the user kicks up a twister within 30 meters of them with the ability to suck in, those unlucky enough to be within 15 meters of it as well as objects, spinning them around at The skill's current speed as well as causing slicing damage all over. Only those whose strength are equal to or higher than the user's are immune to the twister's pulling. The twister is 20 meters in height, and 10 in width.

Tier 4 Skills:

Skill Name: Wall of Justice
Tier: 4
Type Offensive
Range: 50 meters
Speed: 5
Description: By doing a quick curved slash with their blade, the user creates a vacuum of air in the shape of a rectangle with a width of 40 meters and length of 20 meters, facing in whichever direction the user chooses. Unlike most of the skills here this one deals massively, and destructive blunt  damage, destroying anything that falls into its path as well as pushing whatever is caught in its range up to 50 meters before disappearing unless it slams into something it cannot completely destroy.



Last edited by Siegfried on Wed Dec 06, 2017 2:40 pm; edited 3 times in total (Reason for editing : Just added in the fact it's POD. Nothing else changed.)

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2Sword Art: Redemption  Empty Re: Sword Art: Redemption on Tue Dec 05, 2017 5:22 pm

Adri Sakna

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@Renji Vinsmoke wrote:Priority: Secondary
Fighting Style: Sword Style
Skill Set Name: Redemption
Skill Set Information: Most sword styles are known for the amazing speed, and precision, but this style invented by Renji balances a bit between strength as well as speed. This sword play is intended to give the enemies trouble with its various destructive techniques ranging from superhuman sword slashes, vacuum waves of air to even electricity.
Passives:

  • Lvl(3) - Skills done with this skill set get a +1 in speed during the duration of the skill.
  • Lvl(3) - After training hard, and familiarizing himself with this technique, Renji is capable of dishing out his techniques without having to put in too much effort giving him a 20% reduction in stamina cost when doing skills from this set.
  • (Lvl then Description)

(Link to purchase of passives)
Skillset Strengths:

  • - This set has a wide array of uses when it comes to offense

Skillset Weaknesses:

  • - May lack in the defensive department at some parts.

Notes:
POD:

Tier 2:
-Channeling electricity power into sword slashes.

                 -Transferring the force of a cut over a distance by swinging the sword at high speed, creating a "vacuum blade" of compressed air; or by simply creating strong winds with sword blows. This is known as a Flying Slash Attack (飛ぶ斬撃 Tobu Zangeki?). The color of these attacks varies between users such as blue, green, purple etc.
Tier 3:
-Cutting things that are usually harder than the sword itself, such as certain types of stone or even steel. The substance usually splits apart a few moments after being cut.

                     -Cutting objects that are thicker than the length of the sword, such as buildings or ships.

MDL:
Tier 1:
 Completely Destroyed - Wood, Stone, and similar materials.
 Partially Destroyed - Iron
 Lightly Damaged -
 Tier 2:
 Completely Destroyed - Wood, Stone, Iron and similar materials.
 Partially Destroyed - Steel
 Lightly Damaged - Titanium
 Tier 3:
 Completely Destroyed - Iron, Wood, Stone, Steel, and similar materials
 Partially Destroyed - Titanium
 Lightly Damaged - Treasure Tree Adam
 Tier 4:
 Completely Destroyed - Steel, Iron, Wood, Stone, Titanium, and similar materials.
 Partially Destroyed - Treasure Tree Adam
 Lightly Damaged - Diamond and Seastone

Electric Chart:

This explains the effects of the user's skills involving electricity.

Tier 2:
Target is inflicted with 2nd degree burns upon the contacted area/limb as well as suffering from paralysis/numbness in the effected area for 1 post.
Tier 3:
Target is inflicted with 2nd degree burns upon the contacted area/limb as well as suffering from paralysis/numbness in the effected area for 2 posts.
Tier 4:
Target is inflicted with 3rd degree burns upon the contacted area/limb as well as suffering from paralysis/numbness in the effected area for 3 posts.

Attribute Priorities:

  • Primary Attribute - Strength
  • Secondary Attribute - Speed and Durability
  • Non-Prioritized Attributes - Perception


Tier 1 Skills:
Skill Name: Soaring Slash
Tier: 1
Type Offensive
Range: Length of sword
Speed: Own
Description: This technique is a rising attack meant to strike the jaw from below. For additional power, the user uses his free arm to apply force to the back of the blade and utilizes a powerful upward jump during the attack.The user can also turn their blade to the side when doing this to make it do blunt damage instead of cutting and instead will cause the opponent bruising/fractures under their chin as well as knocking them down on their back.  

Skill Name: Earth Slash
Tier: 1
Type Offensive
Range: 10 meters
Speed: 2
Description: The user  strikes the ground with his blade, sending earthen debris towards the opponent with knockback force, knocking the opponent back by 3 meters. Will only work on a rocky terrain. - Force waves or air slashes are T2 or higher

Skill Name:Speed Boost
Tier: 1
Type Supplementary
Range: Own
Speed: Own
Description: The user takes a deep breathe, and clears their mind, freeing it from negative thoughts so they can focus more on the obstacle. Raises the speed tier of the user's skills within this set by 0.5 for three posts. - stat boosting is restricted to T2 skills or higher

Tier 2 Skills:

Skill Name: Deflect
Tier: 2
Type Offensive/Defensive
Range: Varies (Depends on the range of the deflected projectile)
Speed: Varies (Depends on the speed of the deflected projectile)
Description: By using the side of their blade, the user is capable of deflecting up to 10 solid projectiles at a time such as bullets, rocks, etc back to where they originated from at the same speed it was sent out. Projectile must be no more bigger than a baseball in order to be deflected, and made of a material that can be partially/completely destroyed found within the Tier 2 part of the MDL Chart.



Skill Name: Blitz Lighting
Tier: 2
Type Offensive
Range: Length of blade
Speed: Own
Description: First coating the blade of their sword with electricity, the user quickly swings the sword a total of five times in whichever direction, and fashion they choose with powerful electrical slashes. The fashion of how the user moves their blade determines how the direction the slashes will go such as horizontally, vertically, etc. - Where does the electricty come from? It can't come from nowhere.

Skill Name: Deception
Tier: 2
Type Offensive
Range: 20 meters
Speed: Own - Needs to have a range listed for the air slashes, as you are speed secondary it would be 3 or lower
Description: A technique that appears to only be two simple slash attempts with one's blade, the first slash being horizontal, and the second following up going in whichever direction the user chooses. In reality the slashes are done with such swiftness that they "extend" the slashes through the use of compressed air by up to 20 meters which can be used to damage others, and cutting through things. Unlike flying slash attacks, this is more of an extension of those basic sword slashes, using the same length as the blade just with increased range.

Tier 3 Skills:

Skill Name: Begone
Tier: 3
Type Offensive
Range: 30 meters
Speed: 4
Description: Requiring a solid surface, the user taps the tip of their sword onto the ground with enough force to sen out a shockwave reaching out in a 30 meter diameter with a height of 10 meters at the current speed of the skill. The ground will shake a bit within the area of effect, and may cause the surface to break apart a bit depending on said surface. Unlike most of the other techniques that deal cutting damage, this one deals blunt damage with a knockback of 5 meters.

Skill Name: Twister
Tier: 3
Type Offensive
Range: 30 meters
Speed: 4
Description: With one powerful swing of their blade in whichever direction they choose, the user kicks up a twister within 30 meters of them with the ability to suck in, those unlucky enough to be within 15 meters of it as well as objects, spinning them around at The skill's current speed as well as causing slicing damage all over. Only those whose strength are equal to or higher than the user's are immune to the twister's pulling. The twister is 20 meters in height, and 10 in width.

Tier 4 Skills:

Skill Name: Wall of Justice
Tier: 4
Type Offensive
Range: 50 meters
Speed: 5
Description: By doing a quick curved slash with their blade, the user creates a vacuum of air in the shape of a rectangle with a width of 40 meters and length of 20 meters, facing in whichever direction the user chooses. Unlike most of the skills here this one deals massively, and destructive blunt  damage, destroying anything that falls into its path as well as pushing whatever is caught in its range up to 50 meters before disappearing unless it slams into something it cannot outright destroy. Completely Destroy


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3Sword Art: Redemption  Empty Re: Sword Art: Redemption on Tue Dec 05, 2017 7:15 pm

Renji Vinsmoke

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Made some of the changes.

As for Blitz lighting, the electricity is coming from me utilizing the POD.

Deception isn't really a flying air slash move but more of an "extension" of my sword slash, so shouldn't it move at the same speed as my current speed?

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4Sword Art: Redemption  Empty Re: Sword Art: Redemption on Tue Dec 05, 2017 7:45 pm

Adri Sakna

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Blitz Lightning: You cant just suddenly make lightning from nowhere. You could say that your outfit charges up electricity as you walk, or your brain sends extra strong electric currents when your nerves react, but it has to come from somewhere. I would recommend making a passive where you have a certain amount of charge that you can use per thread.

Deception: It would be its own speed because the compressed air has travel time till it reaches the length. Thus its own speed. Its not suddenly there one moment, it has to travel from the end of your blade to the range mark (20 meters)

Feel free to get another staff's opinions on any of these. Preferable Laz, Bean, or Sabo.

EDIT: After looking it over again, I can actually see what you mean, however I would still consider it an air slash as its compressed air coming from your blade.


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5Sword Art: Redemption  Empty Re: Sword Art: Redemption on Tue Dec 05, 2017 7:53 pm

Renji Vinsmoke

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Yeah, I'll wait on another staff's opinion for these.

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6Sword Art: Redemption  Empty Re: Sword Art: Redemption on Tue Dec 05, 2017 8:43 pm

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Proceed along with the electricity. No source of origin is strictly needed, but be careful with the consecutive sword slash skills at the lower levels.


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7Sword Art: Redemption  Empty Re: Sword Art: Redemption on Wed Dec 06, 2017 7:06 am

Renji Vinsmoke

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Okay. Not sure if I still need both a 1/2 and 2/2

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8Sword Art: Redemption  Empty Re: Sword Art: Redemption on Wed Dec 06, 2017 2:24 pm

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Like I said, change the five consecutive slashes to three. I'm fine with everything else, 1/2.


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9Sword Art: Redemption  Empty Re: Sword Art: Redemption on Wed Dec 06, 2017 2:35 pm

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Ah ok my bad.

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10Sword Art: Redemption  Empty Re: Sword Art: Redemption on Wed Dec 06, 2017 2:39 pm

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1/2


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11Sword Art: Redemption  Empty Re: Sword Art: Redemption on Wed Dec 06, 2017 3:37 pm

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2/2


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