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2 Re: Queen of the Desert: Suna Suna No Mi on Sun Oct 15, 2017 11:03 am

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@Isabella wrote:



Priority: Primary
Fighting Style: Devil Fruit
Skill Set Name: Suna Suna No Mi
Skill Set Information: This fruit is quite powerful, even among Logia, as it allows for a great variety of abilities, rather than just normal elemental control. It also allows the user to locate quicksand, set off sandstorms, and absorb liquids. Such a variety is not seen with any other Logia fruit. It is also one of the few Logia type fruits that can naturally counteract its own weakness, and is even stronger in desert areas. It allows the user to transform into sand at will, as well as control it.

This fruit allows Crocodile Just make sure you get rid of canon references when c/ping to sense anything that is moving through sand (he uses his power to sense underground rivers that are flowing through the sand). Its power can also be honed to the point where the user could also absorb the moisture from and dry anything the user grasps, causing living things such as humans and plants to wither through dehydration, and also cause all other matter like rocks and land to crumble to dust and sand; only metallic or ferrous substances are immune to this dehydration effect

Passives:

  • [Withering Touch] [Level 3] Through the suna suna's unique moisture absorption qualitie, the user is capable of sucking the moisture from something via their hands. By doing so it mummifies the object touched. Through use of this passive, the user is able to mummify a single object or limb when touched at speeds based off the users attribute + 1. I'd say at equal speed because Speed is a secondary and this is a passive, not a skill. When mummifying/dehydrating a limb or object, the user must have a proper grasp upon the limb. This can not be a simple glancing touch, or a brush past. The user must grasp on with their hand. If able to do so, the user can almost instantly take up to 50% of the moisture from ones limb. This reduces all attributes by 1 tier focusing on that limb only. If the user grasps on and has not had their grasp broken for an entire post. They can take all the moisture from a limb, crumbling it to dust.  Naturally if one where to do this to the neck or head even at fifty percent. Death will ensue. I get that logically someone with 50% of the moisture out of their neck/head probably wouldn't be doing too hot but this is basically instant death with a passive. Full post grasp on neck/head is understandable, but 50% won't kill.
  • [Mastered Logia] [3] An ability that allows un-unsuspecting logia to instantly phase through an attack that they may not have seen coming, as if by reflex. This takes 30 stamina and can only be used 3 times per thread. This allows the user to evade attacks that they don't actually see coming.
  • [Queen of the Desert] [1] - The user is able to hone their senses, being able to connect it to both natural sand and sand created via their devil fruit and use it to the point where they are able to pick up even the slightest vibrations through Someone's or something's physical contact with sand enabling the user to perceive their surroundings as precisely as normal sight. Meaning things below the sand as well as structures such as buildings can be sensed within the sand. Though, sand floating through the air such as that from a sandstorm and other types of things can also allow the user to sense anything within it. It costs 10 Stamina to use this ability with a 5 Stamina upkeep. The range of the sensory is as followed;
    Tier 1: 30 Meters Diameter
    Tier 3: 60 Meters Diameter
    Tier 5: 90 Meters Diameter Bean had something similar in his Gura skillset with vibrations and his was a Tier 3 passive. I'd say this is at least Tier 2, maybe tier 3 depending on the other mod who reviews this.


[passives to be purchased, will strike out once approved so its easier to read]

Material Destruction:

Tier 1:
Completely Destroyed - Wood, Stone, and similar materials.
Partially Destroyed - Iron
Lightly Damaged -  Steel
Tier 2:
Completely Destroyed -  Iron, Wood, Stone, and similar materials.
Partially Destroyed - steel
Lightly Damaged - titanium
Tier 3:
Completely Destroyed -Steel, Iron, Wood, Stone, and similar materials
Partially Destroyed - titanium
Lightly Damaged - treasure tree adam
Tier 4:
Completely Destroyed - Titanium, Steel, Iron, Wood, Stone, and similar materials.
Partially Destroyed - Treasure Tree Adam
Lightly Damaged - Diamond, Seastone
Tier 5:
Completely Destroyed -Treasure Tree Adam, Titanium, Steel, Iron, Wood, Stone, and similar materials.
Partially Destroyed - Diamond, Seastone
Lightly Damaged - n/a
Tier 6:
Completely Destroyed - Diamond, Seastone, Treasure Tree Adam, Titanium, Steel, Iron, Wood, Stone, and similar materials.
Partially Destroyed - N/A
Lightly Damaged - N/A

Skillset Strengths:

  • The ability to dehydrate/mummify through contact and sand based techniques
  • Sensory capabilities
  • User is immune to high levels of heat and extreme colds, being able to easily withstand the blistering temperatures of the desert during the day and the freezing temperatures of the desert at night.
    This means hot and cold dfs act as -1 tier weaker.
  • Sand is naturally able to douse fire, this means sand acts as one tier higher against fire based devil fruits.
  • Within a desert like environment, all sand based attacks gain a +1 to all attributes as well as an additional 50 meter range. Desert like environment requires their to be at least 500 meters of sand within the immediate area.  I'm a little uncertain here that this might be more of a passive. Have the second mod put their thoughts in.
  • The user can immediately suck up moisture on themselves [color=red]You can keep this here but I'd like to see it as a skill specifically. Otherwise if someone throws water on you and tries to hit you while you can't intang you'll just say "lol auto-dry."

Skillset Weaknesses:

  • Being doused in liquid negates the users intangibility
  • an opponent doused in liquid can bypass the users intangibility
  • Due to the Yuki Yuki No Mi consisting of water and melting on sand on contact, the Yuki Yuki no mi user can bypass the intangibility of the Suna Suna No Mi User.
  • Water based techniques harden the users sand making them unable to manipulate the sand. Apart from defensive techniques which can protect against an additional skill if soaked and hardened, all other sand based attacks receive a minus one in terms of speed and power when soaked.

Notes:
Attribute Priorities:

  • Strength
  • Speed
  • Perception [Predator]
  • Durability


Tier 1 Skills:
Skill Name: Queens Storm
Tier: 1
Type Supplementary
Range: 15 meters
Speed: 2
Description: Isabella can release this technique in two ways. The first is to simply conjure up a small storm within her hand or hands and fire it forward, upon the small twister reaching the range that Isabella desires, she wills it to expand into a raging sand storm that spirals around the area within a fifteen meter radius. The second way is by utilizing herself as the epicenter and releasing floods of sand from her body within a fifteen meter radius. As the epicenter and continuously releasing sand the technique follows her. She does not seem hindered by the technique nor sand what so ever. Opponents on the other hand will have eye irritation, be unable to see anything a few meters in front of there faces. Outside opponents/people will be unable to fully see what is going on within due to the vast amount of swirling sand particles. Those within will struggle to breath and begin suffocating due to the rapid ingestion of sand.

Skill Name: Queens Pop
Tier: 1
Type Offence
Range: 15 meters
Speed: 2
Description: Isabella releases up to three small bullet sized bursts of sand anywhere from her body. These bullet sized bursts of sand can pierce anything that is listed as completely damaged on the MDL for this tier.

Skill Name: Queens Gag
Tier: 1
Type Supplementary/Offence
Range: 15 meters
Speed: 2
Description:  A simple technique that Isabella can release from any part of her body or utilize her hands to grasp a foes face. She releases a vast amount of sand that intends to ensnare an opponents head. The sand quickly covers the head of a foe and covers their mouth and noses. Thus beginning to suffocate them. By winding an opponent during this technique, the amount of time needed to suffocate before death is reduced by one.  

Tier 2 Skills:

Skill Name: Queens Sword
Tier: 2
Type Offence
Range: 25 meters
Speed: 3
Description: Isabella strikes the ground, releasing sand from her hand creating a blade of sand that erupts in a linear path, this blade is 8 meters in width and can easily slice forth all in the 25 meter range, based upon the Material Destruction.

Skill Name: -Drought of the Queen
Tier: 2
Type Supplementary/Off
Range: 25 meters
Speed: 3
Description: By placing her hand or hand upon the ground, Isabella begins to dry up the entire area, the effects of these things can be seen instantly, It can turn to sand instantly anything that is within the completely destroyed part of the MDL for this tier, it takes an additional post for partially to crumble to sand, and two posts for lightly to be turned to sand. What should be noted is metal is not effected. By using this technique, those caught within it bar the user itself will begin to have their moisture stolen from their entire body. How this is decided is based upon the material destruction list as given in the skill info based against their natural durability.  Effects of the drain would be the same stated within the draining passive.

Skill Name: Queens Pool
Tier: 2
Type Off
Range: 25 meters
Speed: 3
Description: This technique has a few ways of working. The first is, Isabella will spew forth sand from her hands and her mouth to create the large wave. The sand wave is 20 meters in height, but has a width of 30 meters. It pushes forth with great destructive power and attempts to strike all in its path, upon doing so those caught will be buried under a mass amount of sand. To escape they would need to have strength higher than the over all tier of skill used, if not they will of course suffocate under the pressure of the sand. If unable to match the strength of the tier, those with a tier lower can take a full post to get out, while those with two tiers lower are unable to fight their way out of the vast burying sand.

Now as stated this technique has additional ways of being carried out. If there is a pre-existing source of sand, the user can manipulate that sand with their own to carry out the technique much easier, if this is the case the range of this technique is increased by twenty meters in all areas.   Tier 2 speed for the first way, tier 3 speed for this second, pre-existing way.

Tier 3 Skills:

Skill Name:  Queens Rage
Tier: 3
Type -
Range: 40 meters
Speed: 4
Description:  Isabella can release this technique in two ways. The first is to simply conjure up a small storm within her hand or hands and fire it forward, upon the large twister reaching the range that Isabella desires, she wills it to expand into a raging sand twister that spirals around the area within a 30 meter radius and height of 50 meters. The second way is by utilizing herself as the epicenter and releasing floods of sand from her body within a 30 meter radius and a height of fifty meters. As the epicenter and continuously releasing sand the technique follows her. She does not seem hindered by the technique nor sand what so ever. Opponents on the other hand will have eye irritation, be unable to see anything a few meters in front of there faces. Outside opponents/people will be unable to fully see what is going on within due to the vast amount of swirling sand particles. Those within will struggle to breath and begin suffocating due to the rapid ingestion of sand. Now unlike the previous version Queens Storm. This technique has a more offensive capability. It is able to lift anything that weighs 750lbs or under into a fierce sand like tornado that does blunt force damage from the whiplash damaging from the MDL. The user can ride this tornado of sand and seems uneffected. Unlike its previous version this technique also drains moisture from everything caught within. Anything on the MDL is instantly turned to sand if in the completely destroyed section, while anything on the partly is close to completely crumbling, anything on the lightly will have signs of whithering though this doesnt seem to effect much. It takes a full post for things on the partly aspect to completely crumble, while two posts for things on the lightly. People are based on their durability and what their durability is akin too. This technique drains from all over the body thus if they succumb to the partly whithered aspect they will lose a single tier over all attributes and find it incredibly hard to move, walk and breath. They will feel a need to drink like crazy. Vast drinking [not in battle i would suppose] of a hydrating source can reverse these effects. Eh if you're in battle and for whatever reason get a chance to plunge your head in a lake, I don't see why that wouldn't be allowed. Just hope whoever does that can distract you while they do.


Skill Name: Queens Power
Tier: 3
Type Contact
Range: 40 meters
Speed: 4 [Drain is own speed]
Description: The user transforms their hands to sand and fires them at an opponent, this technique can easily travel underground and break the ground and is freely manipulable by the user. Hand speed is increased by a full tier when used in this way. The intention is to grasp an opponent and drain them of their moisture completely at whatever pace they deem fit. This does so based on the MDL and is done via the opponents durability and what they are based off. The user can also just grab an opponent without activating their sand hands. By doing this, the techniques stamina cost is reduced by 50% an added bonus of this technique due to the hands not being transformed, buso haki can be used to grasp logias.

Tier 4 Skills:

Skill Name: The Queens Antilion
Tier: 4
Type Offence
Range: 70 meters
Speed: 5 There's a lot of shit going on here, it'll take time to cover a wide area, etc. Tier 4 speed, maybe even tier 3 honestly.
Description: Isabellsa touches the ground, and almost instantly within a 70 meter diameter, the ground crumbles and shifts into sand due to its moisture being removed. With such a large sand area under her control, upon it shifting, Isabella rotates it quickly churning it and pulling it down, simulating the effects of quick sand. Of course as a sand human herself she is immune to this effect and remains perfectly fine at the center of the assault [though she can move about or join the sand in her intangible form] The intention of this technique is to rapidly pull all those upon the sand under crushing them with the extreme rotating force while filling their orifices with sand. By lifting her hands up she is able to have the sand rise rapidly to cover foes much quicker halting their escape before they can be dragged under requiring strength based on the strength of the skill itself to break free off. Of course this technique like most others drains the moisture from all those within upon activation. When caught in the sand all those whom have a durability lower than what she can destroy on the MDL are instantly destroyed, those who are partly whithered on contact will lose a minus 2 to all attributes instantly and will die within the next post if they do not escape the sand, those who are lightly whithered take no handicap on the initial post or post afterwards but upon the second post they will take on the effects of the party destroyed, while on the third post will die if they have no suffocated. The rotational force makes it much harder to escape due to being constantly pulled around while also having ones strength sapped from their bodies. Due to the sheer velocity and power, this attack effects the MDL +1

Skill Name: -Queens Rain
Tier: 4
Type Offence
Range: 70 meters
Speed: 5
Description: Isabella conjures up an incredibly large amount of sand that erupts from the back of her body shooting high into the air. This large amount of sand litters the sky 70 meters above the battle field covering that diameter. When the user wishes they can pull down the sand in hundreds upon thousands of mini sand bullets that can cause devastation around a seventy meter area while the user themselves become intangible thus escaping harm. This technique does not drain water and is simply based upon its large number and deadly piercing capabilities. The user can also if they choose to, release 100 bullets from their body though this greatly reduces the blast zone to ten meters in width and simply a 70 meter traveling distance. If this is chosen, the speed of the attack is given a +1 Drop the initial speed of the first way to 4 if you want the +1 speed for this other way. 

Tier 5 Skills:

Skill Name: The Queens Joust
Tier: 5
Type -
Range: 150 meters
Speed: 6
Description: A much more powerful version of the Queens Sword. Isabella reaches into the ground, releasing a wave of loose sand that has a massive amount of cutting potential due to its rapid rotation similiar to a chain saw. Its height has increased being able to reach up to 100 meters while its width is that of forty meters in sand. Though due to the sheer force, there is an additional ten meters in its width that is sheer cutting air pressure.

Skill Name: The Queens Antilion Dunno if you meant to or not but the tier 4 version has the same name.
Tier: 5
Type Offence
Range: 200 meters
Speed: 6
Description: Isabellsa touches the ground, and almost instantly within a 300 meter diameter, the ground crumbles and shifts into sand due to its moisture being removed. With such a large sand area under her control, upon it shifting, Isabella rotates it quickly though unlike its predecessor this version is more like hundreds of millions of slicing sandblades, churning it and pulling it down, simulating the effects of quick sand. Of course as a sand human herself she is immune to this effect and remains perfectly fine at the center of the assault [though she can move about or join the sand in her intangible form] The intention of this technique is to rapidly pull all those upon the sand under crushing them with the extreme rotating force while filling their orifices with sand. By lifting her hands up she is able to have the sand rise rapidly to cover foes much quicker halting their escape before they can be dragged under requiring strength based on the strength of the skill itself to break free off. Of course this technique like most others drains the moisture from all those within upon activation. When caught in the sand all those whom have a durability lower than what she can destroy on the MDL are instantly destroyed, those who are partly whithered on contact will lose a minus 2 to all attributes instantly and will die within the next post if they do not escape the sand, those who are lightly whithered take no handicap on the initial post or post afterwards but upon the second post they will take on the effects of the party destroyed, while on the third post will die if they have no suffocated. The rotational force makes it much harder to escape due to being constantly pulled around while also having ones strength sapped from their bodies. Due to the sheer velocity and power, this attack effects the MDL +1

Tier 6 Skills:

Skill Name: The Queens Defence
Tier: 6
Type Defence
Range: 1-300 meters
Speed: 7 Tier 6 speed. Anything that can cover 300m with speed as only a secondary shouldn't be that fast.
Description: Isabella is capable of releasing in a nigh instant a mass amount of sand capable of protecting the user, by forming an orb around them to protect them, it can be as small or as big as she wishes with great range. protects against a tier 7 attack, two tier 6's four tier 5's and so forth.

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4 Re: Queen of the Desert: Suna Suna No Mi on Tue Oct 17, 2017 11:39 am

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1/2 but I want Sabo or Bean to be the 2/2 if it's all the same to you.

Overall solid skillset, scary tbh

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8 Re: Queen of the Desert: Suna Suna No Mi on Sat Oct 21, 2017 1:35 am

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Because you're waiting so long I'll get one of the mods to look over it instead of waiting for Sabo or Bean

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9 Re: Queen of the Desert: Suna Suna No Mi on Sat Oct 21, 2017 6:34 pm

@Isabella wrote:



Priority: Primary
Fighting Style: Devil Fruit
Skill Set Name: Suna Suna No Mi
Skill Set Information: This fruit is quite powerful, even among Logia, as it allows for a great variety of abilities, rather than just normal elemental control. It also allows the user to locate quicksand, set off sandstorms, and absorb liquids. Such a variety is not seen with any other Logia fruit. It is also one of the few Logia type fruits that can naturally counteract its own weakness, and is even stronger in desert areas. It allows the user to transform into sand at will, as well as control it.

This fruit allows the user to sense anything that is moving through sand (he uses his power to sense underground rivers that are flowing through the sand). Its power can also be honed to the point where the user could also absorb the moisture from and dry anything the user grasps, causing living things such as humans and plants to wither through dehydration, and also cause all other matter like rocks and land to crumble to dust and sand; only metallic or ferrous substances are immune to this dehydration effect

Passives:

  • [Withering Touch] [Level 3] Through the suna suna's unique moisture absorption qualitie, the user is capable of sucking the moisture from something via their hands. By doing so it mummifies the object touched. Through use of this passive, the user is able to mummify a single object or limb when touched at users speed. When mummifying/dehydrating a limb or object, the user must have a proper grasp upon the limb. This can not be a simple glancing touch, or a brush past. The user must grasp on with their hand. If able to do so, the user can almost instantly take up to 50% of the moisture from ones limb. This reduces all attributes by 1 tier focusing on that limb only. If the user grasps on and has not had their grasp broken for an entire post. They can take all the moisture from a limb, crumbling it to dust.  If the head or neck is grasped this will reduce all attributes by 2 due to the entire body therefore being effected. Are the effects permanent? Once touched can it be reversed?
  • [Mastered Logia] [3] An ability that allows un-unsuspecting logia to instantly phase through an attack that they may not have seen coming, as if by reflex. This takes 30 stamina and can only be used 3 times per thread. This allows the user to evade attacks that they don't actually see coming.
  • [Queen of the Desert] [3] - The user is able to hone their senses, being able to connect it to both natural sand and sand created via their devil fruit and use it to the point where they are able to pick up even the slightest vibrations through Someone's or something's physical contact with sand enabling the user to perceive their surroundings as precisely as normal sight. Meaning things below the sand as well as structures such as buildings can be sensed within the sand. Though, sand floating through the air such as that from a sandstorm and other types of things can also allow the user to sense anything within it. It costs 10 Stamina to use this ability with a 5 Stamina upkeep. The range of the sensory is as followed;
    Tier 1: 30 Meters Diameter
    Tier 3: 60 Meters Diameter
    Tier 5: 90 Meters Diameter


[passives to be purchased, will strike out once approved so its easier to read]

Material Destruction:

Tier 1:
Completely Destroyed - Wood, Stone, and similar materials.
Partially Destroyed - Iron
Lightly Damaged -  Steel
Tier 2:
Completely Destroyed -  Iron, Wood, Stone, and similar materials.
Partially Destroyed - steel
Lightly Damaged - titanium
Tier 3:
Completely Destroyed -Steel, Iron, Wood, Stone, and similar materials
Partially Destroyed - titanium
Lightly Damaged - treasure tree adam
Tier 4:
Completely Destroyed - Titanium, Steel, Iron, Wood, Stone, and similar materials.
Partially Destroyed - Treasure Tree Adam
Lightly Damaged - Diamond, Seastone
Tier 5:
Completely Destroyed -Treasure Tree Adam, Titanium, Steel, Iron, Wood, Stone, and similar materials.
Partially Destroyed - Diamond, Seastone
Lightly Damaged - n/a
Tier 6:
Completely Destroyed - Diamond, Seastone, Treasure Tree Adam, Titanium, Steel, Iron, Wood, Stone, and similar materials.
Partially Destroyed - N/A
Lightly Damaged - N/A

Skillset Strengths:

  • The ability to dehydrate/mummify through contact and sand based techniques
  • Sensory capabilities
  • User is immune to high levels of heat and extreme colds, being able to easily withstand the blistering temperatures of the desert during the day and the freezing temperatures of the desert at night.
    This means hot and cold dfs act as -1 tier weaker.
  • Sand is naturally able to douse fire, this means sand acts as one tier higher against fire based devil fruits.
  • Within a desert like environment, all sand based attacks gain a +1 to all attributes as well as an additional 50 meter range. Desert like environment requires their to be at least 500 meters of sand within the immediate area.  
  • The user can immediately suck up moisture on themselves [requires skill use]

Skillset Weaknesses:

  • Being doused in liquid negates the users intangibility
  • an opponent doused in liquid can bypass the users intangibility
  • Due to the Yuki Yuki No Mi consisting of water and melting on sand on contact, the Yuki Yuki no mi user can bypass the intangibility of the Suna Suna No Mi User.
  • Water based techniques harden the users sand making them unable to manipulate the sand. Apart from defensive techniques which can protect against an additional skill if soaked and hardened, all other sand based attacks receive a minus one in terms of speed and power when soaked.

Notes:
Attribute Priorities:

  • Strength
  • Speed
  • Perception [Predator]
  • Durability


Tier 1 Skills:
Skill Name: Queens Storm
Tier: 1
Type Supplementary
Range: 15 meters
Speed: 2
Description: Isabella can release this technique in two ways. The first is to simply conjure up a small storm within her hand or hands and fire it forward, upon the small twister reaching the range that Isabella desires, she wills it to expand into a raging sand storm that spirals around the area within a fifteen meter radius. The second way is by utilizing herself as the epicenter and releasing floods of sand from her body within a fifteen meter radius. As the epicenter and continuously releasing sand the technique follows her. She does not seem hindered by the technique nor sand what so ever. Opponents on the other hand will have eye irritation, be unable to see anything a few meters in front of there faces. Outside opponents/people will be unable to fully see what is going on within due to the vast amount of swirling sand particles. Those within will struggle to breath and begin suffocating due to the rapid ingestion of sand.

Skill Name: Queens Pop
Tier: 1
Type Offence
Range: 15 meters
Speed: 2
Description: Isabella releases up to three small bullet sized bursts of sand anywhere from her body. These bullet sized bursts of sand can pierce anything that is listed as completely damaged on the MDL for this tier.

Skill Name: Queens Gag
Tier: 1
Type Supplementary/Offence
Range: 15 meters
Speed: 2
Description:  A simple technique that Isabella can release from any part of her body or utilize her hands to grasp a foes face. She releases a vast amount of sand that intends to ensnare an opponents head. The sand quickly covers the head of a foe and covers their mouth and noses. Thus beginning to suffocate them. By winding an opponent during this technique, the amount of time needed to suffocate before death is reduced by one. Properly explain this to me please. Does your arm extend or? 

Tier 2 Skills:

Skill Name: Queens Sword
Tier: 2
Type Offence
Range: 25 meters
Speed: 3
Description: Isabella strikes the ground, releasing sand from her hand creating a blade of sand that erupts in a linear path, this blade is 8 meters in width and can easily slice forth all in the 25 meter range, based upon the Material Destruction. aesthetically I understand what you're going for but a 26 foot wide blade isn't much of a blade. I'd consider thinning i up to actually get effectiveness out of it.

Skill Name: -Drought of the Queen
Tier: 2
Type Supplementary/Off
Range: 25 meters
Speed: 3
Description: By placing her hand or hand upon the ground, Isabella begins to dry up the entire area, the effects of these things can be seen instantly, It can turn to sand instantly anything that is within the completely destroyed part of the MDL for this tier, it takes an additional post for partially to crumble to sand, and two posts for lightly to be turned to sand. What should be noted is metal is not effected. By using this technique, those caught within it bar the user itself will begin to have their moisture stolen from their entire body. How this is decided is based upon the material destruction list as given in the skill info based against their natural durability.  Effects of the drain would be the same stated within the draining passive.

Skill Name: Queens Pool
Tier: 2
Type Off
Range: 25 meters
Speed: 3
Description: This technique has a few ways of working. The first is, Isabella will spew forth sand from her hands and her mouth to create the large wave. The sand wave is 20 meters in height, but has a width of 30 meters. It pushes forth with great destructive power and attempts to strike all in its path, upon doing so those caught will be buried under a mass amount of sand. To escape they would need to have strength higher than the over all tier of skill used, if not they will of course suffocate under the pressure of the sand. If unable to match the strength of the tier, those with a tier lower can take a full post to get out, while those with two tiers lower are unable to fight their way out of the vast burying sand. This version moves at tier 2 speeds

Now as stated this technique has additional ways of being carried out. If there is a pre-existing source of sand, the user can manipulate that sand with their own to carry out the technique much easier, if this is the case the range of this technique is increased by twenty meters in all areas and moves at tier 3 speed. 

Tier 3 Skills:

Skill Name:  Queens Rage
Tier: 3
Type Offensive
Range: 40 meters
Speed: 4
Description:  Isabella can release this technique in two ways. The first is to simply conjure up a small storm within her hand or hands and fire it forward, upon the large twister reaching the range that Isabella desires, she wills it to expand into a raging sand twister that spirals around the area within a 30 meter radius and height of 50 meters. The second way is by utilizing herself as the epicenter and releasing floods of sand from her body within a 30 meter radius and a height of fifty meters. As the epicenter and continuously releasing sand the technique follows her. She does not seem hindered by the technique nor sand what so ever. Opponents on the other hand will have eye irritation, be unable to see anything a few meters in front of there faces. Outside opponents/people will be unable to fully see what is going on within due to the vast amount of swirling sand particles. Those within will struggle to breath and begin suffocating due to the rapid ingestion of sand. Now unlike the previous version Queens Storm. This technique has a more offensive capability. It is able to lift anything that weighs 750lbs or under into a fierce sand like tornado that does blunt force damage from the whiplash damaging from the MDL. The user can ride this tornado of sand and seems uneffected. Unlike its previous version this technique also drains moisture from everything caught within. Anything on the MDL is instantly turned to sand if in the completely destroyed section, while anything on the partly is close to completely crumbling, anything on the lightly will have signs of whithering though this doesnt seem to effect much. It takes a full post for things on the partly aspect to completely crumble, while two posts for things on the lightly. People are based on their durability and what their durability is akin too. This technique drains from all over the body thus if they succumb to the partly whithered aspect they will lose a single tier over all attributes and find it incredibly hard to move, walk and breath. They will feel a need to drink like crazy. Vast drinking [not in battle i would suppose] of a hydrating source can reverse these effects. The moisture aspect is only stated to work by contact. Also for explain how you're able to withstand the force and ride the tornado that pulls in everything else.


Skill Name: Queens Power
Tier: 3
Type Contact
Range: 40 meters
Speed: 4 [Drain is own speed]
Description: The user transforms their hands to sand and fires them at an opponent, this technique can easily travel underground and break the ground and is freely manipulable by the user. Hand speed is increased by a full tier when used in this way. The intention is to grasp an opponent and drain them of their moisture completely at whatever pace they deem fit. This does so based on the MDL and is done via the opponents durability and what they are based off. The user can also just grab an opponent without activating their sand hands. By doing this, the techniques stamina cost is reduced by 50% an added bonus of this technique due to the hands not being transformed, buso haki can be used to grasp logias. The drain span should be based off the same chart used in killing people via poisons etc. Goes for the passive too.

Tier 4 Skills:

Skill Name: The Queens Antilion
Tier: 4
Type Offence
Range: 70 meters
Speed: 4
Description: Isabellsa touches the ground, and almost instantly within a 70 meter diameter, the ground crumbles and shifts into sand due to its moisture being removed. With such a large sand area under her control, upon it shifting, Isabella rotates it quickly churning it and pulling it down, simulating the effects of quick sand. Of course as a sand human herself she is immune to this effect and remains perfectly fine at the center of the assault [though she can move about or join the sand in her intangible form] The intention of this technique is to rapidly pull all those upon the sand under crushing them with the extreme rotating force while filling their orifices with sand. By lifting her hands up she is able to have the sand rise rapidly to cover foes much quicker halting their escape before they can be dragged under requiring strength based on the strength of the skill itself to break free off. Of course this technique like most others drains the moisture from all those within upon activation. When caught in the sand all those whom have a durability lower than what she can destroy on the MDL are instantly destroyed, those who are partly whithered on contact will lose a minus 2 to all attributes instantly and will die within the next post if they do not escape the sand, those who are lightly whithered take no handicap on the initial post or post afterwards but upon the second post they will take on the effects of the party destroyed, while on the third post will die if they have no suffocated. The rotational force makes it much harder to escape due to being constantly pulled around while also having ones strength sapped from their bodies. Due to the sheer velocity and power, this attack effects the MDL +1. Adjust the moisture aspect, make changes around it and then see how you like this skill then, bring that range down to the 50's also.

Skill Name: -Queens Rain
Tier: 4
Type Offence
Range: 70 meters
Speed: 4
Description: Isabella conjures up an incredibly large amount of sand that erupts from the back of her body shooting high into the air. This large amount of sand litters the sky 70 meters above the battle field covering that diameter. When the user wishes they can pull down the sand in hundreds upon thousands of mini sand bullets that can cause devastation around a seventy meter area while the user themselves become intangible thus escaping harm. This technique does not drain water and is simply based upon its large number and deadly piercing capabilities. The user can also if they choose to, release 100 bullets from their body though this greatly reduces the blast zone to ten meters in width and simply a 70 meter traveling distance. If this is chosen, the speed of the attack is given a +1. 50 Meters tops  

Tier 5 Skills:

Skill Name: The Queens Joust
Tier: 5
Type -
Range: 150 meters
Speed: 6
Description: A much more powerful version of the Queens Sword. Isabella reaches into the ground, releasing a wave of loose sand that has a massive amount of cutting potential due to its rapid rotation similiar to a chain saw. Its height has increased being able to reach up to 100 meters while its width is that of forty meters in sand. Though due to the sheer force, there is an additional ten meters in its width that is sheer cutting air pressure. 100 meters high and 150 meters long? And with that width. Not a blade anymore its more of a battering ram. Also lower that height and range if it's just a blade.

Skill Name: The Queens Antilion Supreme
Tier: 5
Type Offence
Range: 200 meters
Speed: 6
Description: Isabellsa touches the ground, and almost instantly within a 300 meter diameter, the ground crumbles and shifts into sand due to its moisture being removed. With such a large sand area under her control, upon it shifting, Isabella rotates it quickly though unlike its predecessor this version is more like hundreds of millions of slicing sandblades, churning it and pulling it down, simulating the effects of quick sand. Of course as a sand human herself she is immune to this effect and remains perfectly fine at the center of the assault [though she can move about or join the sand in her intangible form] The intention of this technique is to rapidly pull all those upon the sand under crushing them with the extreme rotating force while filling their orifices with sand. By lifting her hands up she is able to have the sand rise rapidly to cover foes much quicker halting their escape before they can be dragged under requiring strength based on the strength of the skill itself to break free off. Of course this technique like most others drains the moisture from all those within upon activation. When caught in the sand all those whom have a durability lower than what she can destroy on the MDL are instantly destroyed, those who are partly whithered on contact will lose a minus 2 to all attributes instantly and will die within the next post if they do not escape the sand, those who are lightly whithered take no handicap on the initial post or post afterwards but upon the second post they will take on the effects of the party destroyed, while on the third post will die if they have no suffocated. The rotational force makes it much harder to escape due to being constantly pulled around while also having ones strength sapped from their bodies. Due to the sheer velocity and power, this attack effects the MDL +1
This MDL thing is getting pretty wocky. If all your skills get a boost on the MDL why make an MDL? If you wanted so many boost you're better off making a tier 1 skill that'll offer a temp boost to your skills MDL effectiveness. Also the draining thing has to go and all your skills that take away 2 from every atribute make it 1. Durability would be the least effected by these things. I'd let the range stick if it's 200 meters but you're better off having this as a tier 6 and your tier 6 defensive skill being a tier 5.

Tier 6 Skills:

Skill Name: The Queens Defence
Tier: 6
Type Defence
Range: 1-300 meters
Speed: 7
Description: Isabella is capable of releasing in a nigh instant a mass amount of sand capable of protecting the user, by forming an orb around them to protect them, it can be as small or as big as she wishes with great range. protects against a tier 7 attack, two tier 6's four tier 5's and so forth. This technique moves up to tier 7 speeds at anything 50 meters or less while loosing a minus one speed, at anything more. Since it isn't a durability mained skill it can tank 1 tier 6 and so forth.

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11 Re: Queen of the Desert: Suna Suna No Mi on Mon Oct 23, 2017 6:51 pm

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Priority: Primary
Fighting Style: Devil Fruit
Skill Set Name: Suna Suna No Mi
Skill Set Information: This fruit is quite powerful, even among Logia, as it allows for a great variety of abilities, rather than just normal elemental control. It also allows the user to locate quicksand, set off sandstorms, and absorb liquids. Such a variety is not seen with any other Logia fruit. It is also one of the few Logia type fruits that can naturally counteract its own weakness, and is even stronger in desert areas. It allows the user to transform into sand at will, as well as control it.

This fruit allows the user to sense anything that is moving through sand (he uses his power to sense underground rivers that are flowing through the sand). Its power can also be honed to the point where the user could also absorb the moisture from and dry anything the user grasps, causing living things such as humans and plants to wither through dehydration, and also cause all other matter like rocks and land to crumble to dust and sand; only metallic or ferrous substances are immune to this dehydration effect

Passives:

  • [Withering Touch] [Level 3] Through the suna suna's unique moisture absorption qualitie, the user is capable of sucking the moisture from something via their hands. By doing so it mummifies the object touched. Through use of this passive, the user is able to mummify a single object or limb when touched at users speed. When mummifying/dehydrating a limb or object, the user must have a proper grasp upon the limb. This can not be a simple glancing touch, or a brush past. The user must grasp on with their hand. Upon contact this takes the amount of a tier 3 skill based on the drain chart.
  • [Mastered Logia] [3] An ability that allows un-suspecting logia to instantly phase through an attack that they may not have seen coming, as if by reflex. This takes 30 stamina and can only be used 3 times per thread. This allows the user to evade attacks that they don't actually see coming.
  • [Queen of the Desert] [2] - The user is able to hone their senses, being able to connect it to both natural sand and sand created via their devil fruit and use it to the point where they are able to pick up even the slightest vibrations through Someone's or something's physical contact with sand enabling the user to perceive their surroundings as precisely as normal sight. Meaning things below the sand as well as structures such as buildings can be sensed within the sand. Though, sand floating through the air such as that from a sandstorm and other types of things can also allow the user to sense anything within it. It costs 10 Stamina to use this ability with a 5 Stamina upkeep. The range of the sensory is as followed;
    Tier 1: 30 Meters Diameter
    Tier 3: 60 Meters Diameter
    Tier 5: 90 Meters Diameter


[passives to be purchased, will strike out once approved so its easier to read]

Material Destruction:

Tier 1:
Completely Destroyed - Wood, Stone, and similar materials.
Partially Destroyed - Iron
Lightly Damaged -  Steel
Tier 2:
Completely Destroyed -  Iron, Wood, Stone, and similar materials.
Partially Destroyed - steel
Lightly Damaged - titanium
Tier 3:
Completely Destroyed -Steel, Iron, Wood, Stone, and similar materials
Partially Destroyed - titanium
Lightly Damaged - treasure tree adam
Tier 4:
Completely Destroyed - Titanium, Steel, Iron, Wood, Stone, and similar materials.
Partially Destroyed - Treasure Tree Adam
Lightly Damaged - Diamond, Seastone
Tier 5:
Completely Destroyed -Treasure Tree Adam, Titanium, Steel, Iron, Wood, Stone, and similar materials.
Partially Destroyed - Diamond, Seastone
Lightly Damaged - n/a
Tier 6:
Completely Destroyed - Diamond, Seastone, Treasure Tree Adam, Titanium, Steel, Iron, Wood, Stone, and similar materials.
Partially Destroyed - N/A
Lightly Damaged - N/A

Drain:

These Symptoms depends on what tier of skills you were hit with and until reversed continue to happen

Tier 1 Symptoms:
*Low Blood Pressure, Very Dry skin, Muscles cramps, Extreme thirst, Poor blood circulation which leads to dizziness and light head aches.

Tier 2 Symptoms:
*Low Blood Pressure, Very Dry skin, Muscles cramps,Extreme thirst Poor blood circulation which leads to dizziness and light headaches . You take -.5 to speed. -15 Stamina per post are lost at this stage

Tier 3 Symptoms:
*Low Blood Pressure, Very Dry skin, Muscles cramps,Extreme thirst, rapid breathing, Poor blood circulation which leads to dizziness. You take -1 to speed. Part of body where attack hits is withered. -25 stamina per per post are lost at this stage

Tier 4 Symptoms:
*Low Blood Pressure, Very Dry skin, Muscles cramps become extreme to the point where you begin to fall almost every step, Extreme thirst, confusion to he point where you can mistake friend as foe, Poor blood circulation which leads to dizziness and heavy headaches. You take -1.5 to speed and .5 to perception. The dehydration post count drops from 3 to 2. Half of body is withered. -30 stamina per post are lost at this stage

Tier 5 Symptoms:
*Low Blood Pressure, Very Dry skin, Muscles cramps become extreme to the point where you can barely move, Extreme thirst, confusion to the point where you mistake friend as foe and begin to see mirages, Poor blood circulation which leads to dizziness and heavy headaches. You take -2 to speed and -1 to perception. The dehydration post count drops from 3 to 1. Whole body is withered. -50 stamina points are loss per postl.

Tier 6 Symptoms:
*Low Blood Pressure, Very Dry skin, Muscles cramps become extreme to the point where you can't move, Extreme thirst, confusion to the point where you mistake friend as foe and begin to see mirages, Poor blood circulation which leads to dizziness and heavy headaches. You take -2 to speed and perception. The dehydration post count drops from 3 to 0. Whole body is withered -75 stamina per per post are lost at this stage

After 3 posts [dependant on tier of skill] without water the target is knock unconsciousness for the remainder of the topic until water is given to them unless the user chooses to disintegrate them [only techniques where the user uses his hands can disintegrate people,. The unconsciousness status only happens you are without water for 3 turns. If the targets drinks a large amount of water it will take 2 turns before they can be fully recover. Drinking water will also reverse withering status once the two posts are up. Meaning while they are recovering they will still experience the effects of whatever tier skill they were hit with. If the target somehow goes unconscious if they aren't treated with water 2 posts after they will wither and die.

Withered status: When your body is weakened to the point that it is increadibl brittle. any area effected is as weak as wood despite durability ->>> Let's just lower durability by 2. Nothing is just gonna bypass durability.

Credit to Kyos suna for this chart

Skillset Strengths:

  • The ability to dehydrate/mummify through contact and sand based techniques
  • Sensory capabilities
  • User is immune to high levels of heat and extreme colds, being able to easily withstand the blistering temperatures of the desert during the day and the freezing temperatures of the desert at night.
    This means hot and cold dfs act as -1 tier weaker. Considering that sand can be melted just as anything else, this should definitely be removed. The cold fruits too since you said the yuki can bother you. Hie would bother you also, desert at the day and night don't match up to these fruits.
  • Sand is naturally able to douse fire, this means sand acts as one tier higher against fire based devil fruits. You're on equal tier with the mera mera no mi. Don't stretch this out
  • Within a desert like environment, all sand based attacks gain a +1 to all attributes as well as an additional 50 meter range. Desert like environment requires their to be at least 500 meters of sand within the immediate area.   I'm not giving you 50 meters to all your attacks. You can get 20 and the attribute boost nah.
  • The user can immediately suck up moisture on themselves [requires skill use]

Skillset Weaknesses:

  • Being doused in liquid negates the users intangibility
  • an opponent doused in liquid can bypass the users intangibility
  • Due to the Yuki Yuki No Mi consisting of water and melting on sand on contact, the Yuki Yuki no mi user can bypass the intangibility of the Suna Suna No Mi User.
  • Water based techniques harden the users sand making them unable to manipulate the sand. Apart from defensive techniques which can protect against an additional skill if soaked and hardened, all other sand based attacks receive a minus one in terms of speed and power when soaked.

Notes:
Attribute Priorities:

  • Strength
  • Speed
  • Perception [Predator]
  • Durability


Tier 1 Skills:
Skill Name: Queens Storm
Tier: 1
Type Supplementary
Range: 15 meters
Speed: 2
Description: Isabella can release this technique in two ways. The first is to simply conjure up a small storm within her hand or hands and fire it forward, upon the small twister reaching the range that Isabella desires, she wills it to expand into a raging sand storm that spirals around the area within a fifteen meter radius. The second way is by utilizing herself as the epicenter and releasing floods of sand from her body within a fifteen meter radius. As the epicenter and continuously releasing sand the technique follows her. She does not seem hindered by the technique nor sand what so ever. Opponents on the other hand will have eye irritation, be unable to see anything a few meters in front of there faces. Outside opponents/people will be unable to fully see what is going on within due to the vast amount of swirling sand particles. Those within will struggle to breath and begin suffocating due to the rapid ingestion of sand.

Skill Name: Queens Pop
Tier: 1
Type Offence
Range: 15 meters
Speed: 2
Description: Isabella releases up to three small bullet sized bursts of sand anywhere from her body. These bullet sized bursts of sand can pierce anything that is listed as completely damaged on the MDL for this tier.

Skill Name: Queens Gag
Tier: 1
Type Supplementary/Offence
Range: 15 meters
Speed: 2
Description:  A simple technique that Isabella can release from any part of her body or utilize her hands to grasp a foes face. She releases a vast amount of sand that intends to ensnare an opponents head. The sand quickly covers the head of a foe and covers their mouth and noses. Thus beginning to suffocate them. By winding an opponent during this technique, the amount of time needed to suffocate before death is reduced by one. When using her hands, they do not "extend forth" the user intends to grasp an opponent with said hands before turning thier hands to sand and covering the face. This is simply an alternative way of use on foes whom are in her grasp rather than releasing and manipulating sand over a ranged area. And again I ask, does the skill stretch your limb 15 meters? Specification so we don't have odd uses of this in the future. 

Tier 2 Skills:

Skill Name: Queens Sword
Tier: 2
Type Offence
Range: 25 meters
Speed: 3
Description: Isabella strikes the ground, releasing sand from her hand creating a blade of sand that erupts in a linear path, this blade is 4 meters in width and can easily slice forth all in the 25 meter range, based upon the Material Destruction. My original concern for this still stands.

Skill Name: -Drought of the Queen
Tier: 2
Type Supplementary/Off
Range: 25 meters
Speed: 3
Description: By placing her hand or hand upon the ground, Isabella begins to dry up the entire area, the effects of these things can be seen instantly, It can turn to sand instantly anything that is within the completely destroyed part of the MDL for this tier, it takes an additional post for partially to crumble to sand, and two posts for lightly to be turned to sand. What should be noted is metal is not effected. By using this technique, those caught within it bar the user itself will begin to have their moisture stolen from their entire body. How this is decided is based upon the material destruction list as given in the skill info based against their natural durability.  Effects of the drain on people are stated within the drain chart information.

Skill Name: Queens Pool
Tier: 2
Type Off
Range: 25 meters
Speed: 3
Description: This technique has a few ways of working. The first is, Isabella will spew forth sand from her hands and her mouth to create the large wave. The sand wave is 20 meters in height, but has a width of 30 meters. It pushes forth with great destructive power and attempts to strike all in its path, upon doing so those caught will be buried under a mass amount of sand. To escape they would need to have strength higher than the over all tier of skill used, if not they will of course suffocate under the pressure of the sand. If unable to match the strength of the tier, those with a tier lower can take a full post to get out, while those with two tiers lower are unable to fight their way out of the vast burying sand. This version moves at tier 2 speeds

Now as stated this technique has additional ways of being carried out. If there is a pre-existing source of sand, the user can manipulate that sand with their own to carry out the technique much easier, if this is the case the range of this technique is increased by twenty meters in all areas and moves at tier 3 speed. I'm getting that this skill is basically sand hydro pump? Cool but that 20+ meters thing isn't gonna fly. You know I couldn't let a tier 2 skill be 45 meters. 

Tier 3 Skills:

Skill Name:  Queens Rage
Tier: 3
Type Offensive
Range: 40 meters
Speed: 4
Description:  Isabella can release this technique in two ways. The first is to simply conjure up a small storm within her hand or hands and fire it forward, upon the large twister reaching the range that Isabella desires, she wills it to expand into a raging sand twister that spirals around the area within a 30 meter radius and height of 50 meters. The second way is by utilizing herself as the epicenter and releasing floods of sand from her body within a 30 meter radius and a height of fifty meters. As the epicenter and continuously releasing sand the technique follows her. She does not seem hindered by the technique nor sand what so ever. Opponents on the other hand will have eye irritation, be unable to see anything a few meters in front of there faces. Outside opponents/people will be unable to fully see what is going on within due to the vast amount of swirling sand particles. Those within will struggle to breath and begin suffocating due to the rapid ingestion of sand. Now unlike the previous version Queens Storm. This technique has a more offensive capability. It is able to lift anything that weighs 750lbs or under into a fierce sand like tornado that does blunt force damage from the whiplash damaging from the MDL. The user can ride this tornado of sand and seems uneffected. Unlike its previous version this technique also drains moisture from everything caught within. Anything on the MDL is instantly turned to sand if in the completely destroyed section, while anything on the partly is close to completely crumbling, anything on the lightly will have signs of whithering though this doesnt seem to effect much. It takes a full post for things on the partly aspect to completely crumble, while two posts for things on the lightly. Effects of the drain on people are stated within the drain chart information.By dissolving in to sand which is granted by this technique, the useer is able to freely ride and move around in said tornado, because as a given it is their power. Much like how crocodile was capable of riding and flying through his own tornado without any ill effect. You're aware if you use yourself as the epicenter or to keep the tornado active after its used you have to pay an upkeep?


Skill Name: Queens Power
Tier: 3
Type Contact
Range: 40 meters
Speed: 4 [Drain is own speed]
Description: The user transforms their hands to sand and fires them at an opponent, this technique can easily travel underground and break the ground and is freely manipulable by the user. Hand speed is increased by a full tier when used in this way. The intention is to grasp an opponent and drain them of their moisture completely at whatever pace they deem fit. [base Drain chart on contact] This does so based on the MDL and Effects of the drain on people are stated within the drain chart information. The user can also just grab an opponent without activating their sand hands. By doing this, the techniques stamina cost is reduced by 50% an added bonus of this technique due to the hands not being transformed, buso haki can be used to grasp logias. Idk why such a small change can effect the stamina used to do the attack.

Tier 4 Skills:

Skill Name: The Queens Antilion
Tier: 4
Type Offence
Range: 70 meters
Speed: 4
Description: Isabellsa touches the ground, and almost instantly within a 70 meter diameter, the ground crumbles and shifts into sand due to its moisture being removed. With such a large sand area under her control, upon it shifting, Isabella rotates it quickly churning it and pulling it down, simulating the effects of quick sand. Of course as a sand human herself she is immune to this effect and remains perfectly fine at the center of the assault [though she can move about or join the sand in her intangible form] The intention of this technique is to rapidly pull all those upon the sand under crushing them with the extreme rotating force while filling their orifices with sand. By lifting her hands up she is able to have the sand rise rapidly to cover foes much quicker halting their escape before they can be dragged under requiring strength based on the strength of the skill itself to break free off. Of course this technique like most others drains the moisture from all those within upon activation. When caught in the sand all items etc that have a durability lower than what she can destroy on the MDL are instantly destroyed, a post for partially to be destroyed and 2 posts for lightly to succumb,The rotational force makes it much harder to escape due to being constantly pulled around while also having ones strength sapped from their bodies. Due to the sheer velocity and power, this attack effects the MDL +1. Can't speak on everyone elses skillsets tbh since I don't approve all of these skillset's but with a tier 4 skill you can bring your ranges down to the 50's. If you're going to be getting an extra boost on your MDL chart you can't have all this range too. Your skills do a bevy of things, you gotta sacrifice somewhere.

Skill Name: -Queens Rain
Tier: 4
Type Offence
Range: 70 meters
Speed: 4
Description: Isabella conjures up an incredibly large amount of sand that erupts from the back of her body shooting high into the air. This large amount of sand litters the sky 70 meters above the battle field covering that diameter. When the user wishes they can pull down the sand in hundreds upon thousands of mini sand bullets that can cause devastation around a seventy meter area while the user themselves become intangible thus escaping harm. This technique does not drain water and is simply based upon its large number and deadly piercing capabilities. The user can also if they choose to, release 100 bullets from their body though this greatly reduces the blast zone to ten meters in width and simply a 70 meter traveling distance. If this is chosen, the speed of the attack is given a +1  

Tier 5 Skills:

Skill Name: The Queens Joust
Tier: 5
Type -
Range: 150 meters
Speed: 6
Description: A much more powerful version of the Queens Sword. Isabella reaches into the ground, releasing a wave of loose sand that has a massive amount of cutting potential due to its rapid rotation similiar to a chain saw. Its height has increased being able to reach up to 100 meters while its width is that of forty meters in sand. Though due to the sheer force, there is an additional ten meters in its width that is sheer cutting air pressure.  Can I get an actual width on this along with those smaller ranges that i asked for?

Skill Name: The Queens Antilion Supreme
Tier: 5
Type Offence
Range: 200 meters
Speed: 6
Description: Isabellsa touches the ground, and almost instantly within a 300 meter diameter, the ground crumbles and shifts into sand due to its moisture being removed. With such a large sand area under her control, upon it shifting, Isabella rotates it quickly though unlike its predecessor this version is more like hundreds of millions of slicing sandblades, churning it and pulling it down, simulating the effects of quick sand. Of course as a sand human herself she is immune to this effect and remains perfectly fine at the center of the assault [though she can move about or join the sand in her intangible form] The intention of this technique is to rapidly pull all those upon the sand under crushing them with the extreme rotating force while filling their orifices with sand. By lifting her hands up she is able to have the sand rise rapidly to cover foes much quicker halting their escape before they can be dragged under requiring strength based on the strength of the skill itself to break free off. Of course this technique like most others drains the moisture from all those within upon activation. When caught in the sand all items that are able to be destroyed are instantly turned to sand, partly take one post, lightly takes 2. Effects of the drain on people are stated within the drain chart information.The rotational force makes it much harder to escape due to being constantly pulled around while also having ones strength sapped from their bodies. Due to the sheer velocity and power, this attack effects the drain chart +1 Tier why just randomly add +1 on drain chart? What keeps giving you all these bonuses. Is this attack 300 meters or 200? You should pick one of those.

Tier 6 Skills:

Skill Name: The Queens Defence
Tier: 6
Type Defence
Range: 1-300 meters
Speed: 7 Getting it to this size wouldn't be tier 7 speed. Le's say five.
Description: Isabella is capable of releasing in a nigh instant a mass amount of sand capable of protecting the user, by forming an orb around them to protect them, it can be as small or as big as she wishes with great range. protects against a tier 7 attack, two tier 6's four tier 5's and so forth. This technique moves up to tier 7 speeds at anything 50 meters or less while loosing a minus one speed, at anything more. A tier 7 attack isn't a thing. 1 tier 6 skill and so forth. You know how this goes.


Any skill over 90 meters needs to be the same tier as its attack. Don't wanna see any 400 meter attacks moving at tier 7 speed.

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14 Re: Queen of the Desert: Suna Suna No Mi on Thu Oct 26, 2017 12:52 pm

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@Isabella wrote:



Priority: Primary
Fighting Style: Devil Fruit
Skill Set Name: Suna Suna No Mi
Skill Set Information: This fruit is quite powerful, even among Logia, as it allows for a great variety of abilities, rather than just normal elemental control. It also allows the user to locate quicksand, set off sandstorms, and absorb liquids. Such a variety is not seen with any other Logia fruit. It is also one of the few Logia type fruits that can naturally counteract its own weakness, and is even stronger in desert areas. It allows the user to transform into sand at will, as well as control it.

This fruit allows the user to sense anything that is moving through sand (he uses his power to sense underground rivers that are flowing through the sand). Its power can also be honed to the point where the user could also absorb the moisture from and dry anything the user grasps, causing living things such as humans and plants to wither through dehydration, and also cause all other matter like rocks and land to crumble to dust and sand; only metallic or ferrous substances are immune to this dehydration effect

Passives:

  • [Withering Touch] [Level 3] Through the suna suna's unique moisture absorption qualitie, the user is capable of sucking the moisture from something via their hands. By doing so it mummifies the object touched. Through use of this passive, the user is able to mummify a single object or limb when touched at users speed. When mummifying/dehydrating a limb or object, the user must have a proper grasp upon the limb. This can not be a simple glancing touch, or a brush past. The user must grasp on with their hand. Upon contact this takes the amount of a tier 3 skill based on the drain chart. I don't see why this would scale up with your speed. Just pick a tier of speed
  • [Mastered Logia] [3] An ability that allows un-suspecting logia to instantly phase through an attack that they may not have seen coming, as if by reflex. This takes 30 stamina and can only be used 3 times per thread. This allows the user to evade attacks that they don't actually see coming.
  • [Queen of the Desert] [2] - The user is able to hone their senses, being able to connect it to both natural sand and sand created via their devil fruit and use it to the point where they are able to pick up even the slightest vibrations through Someone's or something's physical contact with sand enabling the user to perceive their surroundings as precisely as normal sight. Meaning things below the sand as well as structures such as buildings can be sensed within the sand. Though, sand floating through the air such as that from a sandstorm and other types of things can also allow the user to sense anything within it. It costs 10 Stamina to use this ability with a 5 Stamina upkeep. The range of the sensory is as followed;
    Tier 1: 30 Meters Diameter
    Tier 3: 60 Meters Diameter
    Tier 5: 90 Meters
    you'd be able to sense that they are within this range but that is it. You wouldn't be able to tell what they were doing as if you were looking at them.

[passives to be purchased, will strike out once approved so its easier to read]

Material Destruction:

Tier 1:
Completely Destroyed - Wood, Stone, and similar materials.
Partially Destroyed - Iron
Lightly Damaged -  Steel
Tier 2:
Completely Destroyed -  Iron, Wood, Stone, and similar materials.
Partially Destroyed - steel
Lightly Damaged - titanium
Tier 3:
Completely Destroyed -Steel, Iron, Wood, Stone, and similar materials
Partially Destroyed - titanium
Lightly Damaged - treasure tree adam
Tier 4:
Completely Destroyed - Titanium, Steel, Iron, Wood, Stone, and similar materials.
Partially Destroyed - Treasure Tree Adam
Lightly Damaged - Diamond, Seastone
Tier 5:
Completely Destroyed -Treasure Tree Adam, Titanium, Steel, Iron, Wood, Stone, and similar materials.
Partially Destroyed - Diamond, Seastone
Lightly Damaged - n/a
Tier 6:
Completely Destroyed - Diamond, Seastone, Treasure Tree Adam, Titanium, Steel, Iron, Wood, Stone, and similar materials.
Partially Destroyed - N/A
Lightly Damaged - N/A

Drain:

These Symptoms depends on what tier of skills you were hit with and until reversed continue to happen

Tier 1 Symptoms:
*Low Blood Pressure, Very Dry skin, Muscles cramps, Extreme thirst, Poor blood circulation which leads to dizziness and light head aches.

Tier 2 Symptoms:
*Low Blood Pressure, Very Dry skin, Muscles cramps,Extreme thirst Poor blood circulation which leads to dizziness and light headaches . You take -.5 to speed. -15 Stamina per post are lost at this stage

Tier 3 Symptoms:
*Low Blood Pressure, Very Dry skin, Muscles cramps,Extreme thirst, rapid breathing, Poor blood circulation which leads to dizziness. You take -1 to speed. Part of body where attack hits is withered. -25 stamina per per post are lost at this stage

Tier 4 Symptoms:
*Low Blood Pressure, Very Dry skin, Muscles cramps become extreme to the point where you begin to fall almost every step, Extreme thirst, confusion to he point where you can mistake friend as foe, Poor blood circulation which leads to dizziness and heavy headaches. You take -1.5 to speed and .5 to perception. The dehydration post count drops from 3 to 2. Half of body is withered. -30 stamina per post are lost at this stage

Tier 5 Symptoms:
*Low Blood Pressure, Very Dry skin, Muscles cramps become extreme to the point where you can barely move, Extreme thirst, confusion to the point where you mistake friend as foe and begin to see mirages, Poor blood circulation which leads to dizziness and heavy headaches. You take -2 to speed and -1 to perception. The dehydration post count drops from 3 to 1. Whole body is withered. -50 stamina points are loss per postl.

Tier 6 Symptoms:
*Low Blood Pressure, Very Dry skin, Muscles cramps become extreme to the point where you can't move, Extreme thirst, confusion to the point where you mistake friend as foe and begin to see mirages, Poor blood circulation which leads to dizziness and heavy headaches. You take -2 to speed and perception. The dehydration post count drops from 3 to 0. Whole body is withered -75 stamina per per post are lost at this stage

After 3 posts [dependant on tier of skill] without water the target is knock unconsciousness for the remainder of the topic until water is given to them unless the user chooses to disintegrate them [only techniques where the user uses his hands can disintegrate people,. The unconsciousness status only happens you are without water for 3 turns. If the targets drinks a large amount of water it will take 2 turns before they can be fully recover. Drinking water will also reverse withering status once the two posts are up. Meaning while they are recovering they will still experience the effects of whatever tier skill they were hit with. If the target somehow goes unconscious if they aren't treated with water 2 posts after they will wither and die.

Withered status: When your body is weakened to the point that it is increadibl brittle. any area effected has its durability lowered by two tiers.

Credit to Kyos suna for this chart

Skillset Strengths:

  • The ability to dehydrate/mummify through contact and sand based techniques
  • Sensory capabilities
  • User is immune to high levels of heat and extreme colds, being able to easily withstand the blistering temperatures of the desert during the day and the freezing temperatures of the desert at night. Temperature based capabilities rarely effect the user unless they are at an all time extreme. Just a question. But what do you mean by temperature based capabilities? Like what all can't effect you.
  • Within a desert like environment, all sand based attacks gain a +1 to strength as well as an additional 20 meter range. Desert like environment requires their to be at least 80 meters of sand within the immediate is a passive
  • The user can immediately suck up moisture on themselves [requires skill use]

Skillset Weaknesses:

  • Being doused in liquid negates the users intangibility
  • an opponent doused in liquid can bypass the users intangibility
  • Due to the Yuki Yuki No Mi consisting of water and melting on sand on contact, the Yuki Yuki no mi user can bypass the intangibility of the Suna Suna No Mi User.
  • Water based techniques harden the users sand making them unable to manipulate the sand. Apart from defensive techniques which can protect against an additional skill if soaked and hardened, all other sand based attacks receive a minus one in terms of speed and power when soaked.

Notes:
Attribute Priorities:

  • Strength
  • Speed
  • Perception [Predator]
  • Durability


Tier 1 Skills:
Skill Name: Queens Storm
Tier: 1
Type Supplementary
Range: 15 meters
Speed: 2
Description: Isabella can release this technique in two ways. The first is to simply conjure up a small storm within her hand or hands and fire it forward, upon the small twister reaching the range that Isabella desires, she wills it to expand into a raging sand storm that spirals around the area within a fifteen meter radius. The second way is by utilizing herself as the epicenter and releasing floods of sand from her body within a fifteen meter radius. As the epicenter and continuously releasing sand the technique follows her. She does not seem hindered by the technique nor sand what so ever. Opponents on the other hand will have eye irritation, be unable to see anything a few meters in front of there faces. Outside opponents/people will be unable to fully see what is going on within due to the vast amount of swirling sand particles. Those within will struggle to breath and begin suffocating due to the rapid ingestion of sand.

Skill Name: Queens Pop
Tier: 1
Type Offence
Range: 15 meters
Speed: 2
Description: Isabella releases up to three small bullet sized bursts of sand anywhere from her body. These bullet sized bursts of sand can pierce anything that is listed as completely damaged on the MDL for this tier.

Skill Name: Queens Gag
Tier: 1
Type Supplementary/Offence
Range: 15 meters
Speed: 2
Description:  A simple technique that Isabella can release from any part of her body or utilize her hands to grasp a foes face. She releases a vast amount of sand that intends to ensnare an opponents head. The sand quickly covers the head of a foe and covers their mouth and noses. Thus beginning to suffocate them. By winding an opponent during this technique, the amount of time needed to suffocate before death is reduced by one. When using her hands, they do not "extend forth" the user intends to grasp an opponent with said hands before turning thier hands to sand and covering the face. This is simply an alternative way of use on foes whom are in her grasp rather than releasing and manipulating sand over a ranged area.  

Tier 2 Skills:

Skill Name: Queens Sword
Tier: 2
Type Offence
Range: 25 meters
Speed: 3
Description: Isabella strikes the ground, releasing sand from her hand creating a blade of sand that erupts in a linear path, this blade is 1 meter in width and can easily slice forth all in the 25 meter range, based upon the Material Destruction.

Skill Name: -Drought of the Queen
Tier: 2
Type Supplementary/Off
Range: 25 meters
Speed: 3
Description: By placing her hand or hand upon the ground, Isabella begins to dry up the entire area, the effects of these things can be seen instantly, It can turn to sand instantly anything that is within the completely destroyed part of the MDL for this tier, it takes an additional post for partially to crumble to sand, and two posts for lightly to be turned to sand. What should be noted is metal is not effected. By using this technique, those caught within it bar the user itself will begin to have their moisture stolen from their entire body. How this is decided is based upon the material destruction list as given in the skill info based against their natural durability.  Effects of the drain on people are stated within the drain chart information.

Skill Name: Queens Pool
Tier: 2
Type Off
Range: 25 meters
Speed: 3
Description:[/bI Isabella will spew forth sand from her hands and her mouth to create the large wave. The sand wave is 20 meters in height, but has a width of 30 meters. It pushes forth with great destructive power and attempts to strike all in its path, upon doing so those caught will be buried under a mass amount of sand. To escape they would need to have strength higher than the over all tier of skill used, if not they will of course suffocate under the pressure of the sand. If unable to match the strength of the tier, those with a tier lower can take a full post to get out, while those with two tiers lower are unable to fight their way out of the vast burying sand.. 

Tier 3 Skills:

Skill Name:  Queens Rage
Tier: 3
Type Offensive
Range: 40 meters
Speed: 4
Description:  Isabella can release this technique in two ways. The first is to simply conjure up a small storm within her hand or hands and fire it forward, upon the large twister reaching the range that Isabella desires, she wills it to expand into a raging sand twister that spirals around the area within a 30 meter radius and height of 50 meters. The second way is by utilizing herself as the epicenter and releasing floods of sand from her body within a 30 meter radius and a height of fifty meters. As the epicenter and continuously releasing sand the technique follows her. She does not seem hindered by the technique nor sand what so ever. Opponents on the other hand will have eye irritation, be unable to see anything a few meters in front of there faces. Outside opponents/people will be unable to fully see what is going on within due to the vast amount of swirling sand particles. Those within will struggle to breath and begin suffocating due to the rapid ingestion of sand. Now unlike the previous version Queens Storm. This technique has a more offensive capability. It is able to lift anything that weighs 750lbs or under into a fierce sand like tornado that does blunt force damage from the whiplash damaging from the MDL. The user can ride this tornado of sand and seems uneffected. Unlike its previous version this technique also drains moisture from everything caught within. Anything on the MDL is instantly turned to sand if in the completely destroyed section, while anything on the partly is close to completely crumbling, anything on the lightly will have signs of whithering though this doesnt seem to effect much. It takes a full post for things on the partly aspect to completely crumble, while two posts for things on the lightly. Effects of the drain on people are stated within the drain chart information.By dissolving in to sand which is granted by this technique, the useer is able to freely ride and move around in said tornado, because as a given it is their power. Much like how crocodile was capable of riding and flying through his own tornado without any ill effect.
No to the moisture draining.

Skill Name: Queens Power
Tier: 3
Type Contact
Range: 40 meters
Speed: 4 [Drain is own speed]
Description: The user transforms their hands to sand and fires them at an opponent, this technique can easily travel underground and break the ground and is freely manipulable by the user. Hand speed is increased by a full tier when used in this way. The intention is to grasp an opponent and drain them of their moisture completely at whatever pace they deem fit. [base Drain chart on contact] This does so based on the MDL and Effects of the drain on people are stated within the drain chart information. The user can also just grab an opponent without activating their sand hands. By doing this, the techniques stamina cost is reduced by 25%% an added bonus of this technique due to the hands not being transformed, buso haki can be used to grasp logias.

Tier 4 Skills:

Skill Name: The Queens Antilion
Tier: 4
Type Offence
Range: 70 meters
Speed: 4
Description: Isabellsa touches the ground, and almost instantly within a 70 meter diameter, the ground crumbles and shifts into sand due to its moisture being removed. With such a large sand area under her control, upon it shifting, Isabella rotates it quickly churning it and pulling it down, simulating the effects of quick sand. Of course as a sand human herself she is immune to this effect and remains perfectly fine at the center of the assault [though she can move about or join the sand in her intangible form] The intention of this technique is to rapidly pull all those upon the sand under crushing them with the extreme rotating force while filling their orifices with sand. By lifting her hands up she is able to have the sand rise rapidly to cover foes much quicker halting their escape before they can be dragged under requiring strength based on the strength of the skill itself to break free off. Of course this technique like most others drains the moisture from all those within upon activation. When caught in the sand all items etc that have a durability lower than what she can destroy on the MDL are instantly destroyed, a post for partially to be destroyed and 2 posts for lightly to succumb,The rotational force makes it much harder to escape due to being constantly pulled around while also having ones strength sapped from their bodies. Due to the sheer velocity and power, this attack effects the MDL +1

Skill Name: -Queens Rain
Tier: 4
Type Offence
Range: 70 meters
Speed: 4
Description: Isabella conjures up an incredibly large amount of sand that erupts from the back of her body shooting high into the air. This large amount of sand litters the sky 70 meters above the battle field covering that diameter. When the user wishes they can pull down the sand in hundreds upon thousands of mini sand bullets that can cause devastation around a seventy meter area while the user themselves become intangible thus escaping harm. This technique does not drain water and is simply based upon its large number and deadly piercing capabilities. The user can also if they choose to, release 100 bullets from their body though this greatly reduces the blast zone to ten meters in width and simply a 70 meter traveling distance. If this is chosen, the speed of the attack is given a +1  

Tier 5 Skills:

Skill Name: The Queens Joust
Tier: 5
Type -
Range: 90 meters
Speed: 6
Description: A much more powerful version of the Queens Sword. Isabella reaches into the ground, releasing a wave of loose sand that has a massive amount of cutting potential due to its rapid rotation similiar to a chain saw. Its height has increased being able to reach up to 60 meters while its width is that of forty meters in sand. Though due to the sheer force, there is an additional ten meters in its width that is sheer cutting air pressure.

Skill Name: The Queens Antilion Supreme
Tier: 5
Type Offence
Range: 200 meters
Speed: 6
Description: Isabellsa touches the ground, and almost instantly within a 200 meter diameter, the ground crumbles and shifts into sand due to its moisture being removed. With such a large sand area under her control, upon it shifting, Isabella rotates it quickly though unlike its predecessor this version is more like hundreds of millions of slicing sandblades, churning it and pulling it down, simulating the effects of quick sand. Of course as a sand human herself she is immune to this effect and remains perfectly fine at the center of the assault [though she can move about or join the sand in her intangible form] The intention of this technique is to rapidly pull all those upon the sand under crushing them with the extreme rotating force while filling their orifices with sand. By lifting her hands up she is able to have the sand rise rapidly to cover foes much quicker halting their escape before they can be dragged under requiring strength based on the strength of the skill itself to break free off. Of course this technique like most others drains the moisture from all those within upon activation. When caught in the sand all items that are able to be destroyed are instantly turned to sand, partly take one post, lightly takes 2. Effects of the drain on people are stated within the drain chart information.The rotational force makes it much harder to escape due to being constantly pulled around while also having ones strength sapped from their bodies. Due to the sheer velocity and power, this attack effects the drain chart +1 Tier

Tier 6 Skills:

Skill Name: The Queens Defence
Tier: 6
Type Defence
Range: 1-300 meters
Speed: 7
Description: Isabella is capable of releasing in a nigh instant a mass amount of sand capable of protecting the user, by forming an orb around them to protect them, it can be as small or as big as she wishes with great range. protects against a two tier 6's [as per rules] Three tier 5's and so forth based on the rules. This technique moves up to tier 7 speeds at anything 50 meters or less while losing a minus one speed for anything up to one hundred, anything 100 meters and above lose two tiers of speed.



I didn't touch up on all your skills. But after the edits I requested are made I will do that. Sorry, that I wasn't able to do it all in one sitting.

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