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1 Queen of the Desert: Suna Suna No Mi on Fri Oct 13, 2017 5:59 am

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Priority: Primary
Fighting Style: Devil Fruit
Skill Set Name: Suna Suna No Mi
Skill Set Information: This fruit is quite powerful, even among Logia, as it allows for a great variety of abilities, rather than just normal elemental control. It also allows the user to locate quicksand, set off sandstorms, and absorb liquids. Such a variety is not seen with any other Logia fruit. It is also one of the few Logia type fruits that can naturally counteract its own weakness, and is even stronger in desert areas. It allows the user to transform into sand at will, as well as control it.

This fruit allows the user to sense anything that is moving through sand (he uses his power to sense underground rivers that are flowing through the sand). Its power can also be honed to the point where the user could also absorb the moisture from and dry anything the user grasps, causing living things such as humans and plants to wither through dehydration, and also cause all other matter like rocks and land to crumble to dust and sand; only metallic or ferrous substances are immune to this dehydration effect

Passives:

  • [Withering Touch] [Level 3] Through the suna suna's unique moisture absorption qualitie, the user is capable of sucking the moisture from something via their hands. By doing so it mummifies the object touched. Through use of this passive, the user is able to mummify a single object or limb when touched at users speed. When mummifying/dehydrating a limb or object, the user must have a proper grasp upon the limb. This can not be a simple glancing touch, or a brush past. The user must grasp on with their hand. If able to do so, the user can almost instantly take up to 50% of the moisture from ones limb. This reduces all attributes by 1 tier focusing on that limb only. If the user grasps on and has not had their grasp broken for an entire post. They can take all the moisture from a limb, crumbling it to dust.  If the head or neck is grasped this will reduce all attributes by 2 due to the entire body therefore being effected. If a significant amount of liquid is ingested, the opponent can replace the moisture stolen and regenerate, negating the effects.
  • [Mastered Logia] [3] An ability that allows un-suspecting logia to instantly phase through an attack that they may not have seen coming, as if by reflex. This takes 30 stamina and can only be used 3 times per thread. This allows the user to evade attacks that they don't actually see coming.
  • [Queen of the Desert] [3] - The user is able to hone their senses, being able to connect it to both natural sand and sand created via their devil fruit and use it to the point where they are able to pick up even the slightest vibrations through Someone's or something's physical contact with sand enabling the user to perceive their surroundings as precisely as normal sight. Meaning things below the sand as well as structures such as buildings can be sensed within the sand. Though, sand floating through the air such as that from a sandstorm and other types of things can also allow the user to sense anything within it. It costs 10 Stamina to use this ability with a 5 Stamina upkeep. The range of the sensory is as followed;
    Tier 1: 30 Meters Diameter
    Tier 3: 60 Meters Diameter
    Tier 5: 90 Meters Diameter


[passives to be purchased, will strike out once approved so its easier to read]

Material Destruction:

Tier 1:
Completely Destroyed - Wood, Stone, and similar materials.
Partially Destroyed - Iron
Lightly Damaged -  Steel
Tier 2:
Completely Destroyed -  Iron, Wood, Stone, and similar materials.
Partially Destroyed - steel
Lightly Damaged - titanium
Tier 3:
Completely Destroyed -Steel, Iron, Wood, Stone, and similar materials
Partially Destroyed - titanium
Lightly Damaged - treasure tree adam
Tier 4:
Completely Destroyed - Titanium, Steel, Iron, Wood, Stone, and similar materials.
Partially Destroyed - Treasure Tree Adam
Lightly Damaged - Diamond, Seastone
Tier 5:
Completely Destroyed -Treasure Tree Adam, Titanium, Steel, Iron, Wood, Stone, and similar materials.
Partially Destroyed - Diamond, Seastone
Lightly Damaged - n/a
Tier 6:
Completely Destroyed - Diamond, Seastone, Treasure Tree Adam, Titanium, Steel, Iron, Wood, Stone, and similar materials.
Partially Destroyed - N/A
Lightly Damaged - N/A

Skillset Strengths:

  • The ability to dehydrate/mummify through contact and sand based techniques
  • Sensory capabilities
  • User is immune to high levels of heat and extreme colds, being able to easily withstand the blistering temperatures of the desert during the day and the freezing temperatures of the desert at night.
    This means hot and cold dfs act as -1 tier weaker.
  • Sand is naturally able to douse fire, this means sand acts as one tier higher against fire based devil fruits.
  • Within a desert like environment, all sand based attacks gain a +1 to all attributes as well as an additional 50 meter range. Desert like environment requires their to be at least 500 meters of sand within the immediate area.  
  • The user can immediately suck up moisture on themselves [requires skill use]

Skillset Weaknesses:

  • Being doused in liquid negates the users intangibility
  • an opponent doused in liquid can bypass the users intangibility
  • Due to the Yuki Yuki No Mi consisting of water and melting on sand on contact, the Yuki Yuki no mi user can bypass the intangibility of the Suna Suna No Mi User.
  • Water based techniques harden the users sand making them unable to manipulate the sand. Apart from defensive techniques which can protect against an additional skill if soaked and hardened, all other sand based attacks receive a minus one in terms of speed and power when soaked.

Notes:
Attribute Priorities:

  • Strength
  • Speed
  • Perception [Predator]
  • Durability


Tier 1 Skills:
Skill Name: Queens Storm
Tier: 1
Type Supplementary
Range: 15 meters
Speed: 2
Description: Isabella can release this technique in two ways. The first is to simply conjure up a small storm within her hand or hands and fire it forward, upon the small twister reaching the range that Isabella desires, she wills it to expand into a raging sand storm that spirals around the area within a fifteen meter radius. The second way is by utilizing herself as the epicenter and releasing floods of sand from her body within a fifteen meter radius. As the epicenter and continuously releasing sand the technique follows her. She does not seem hindered by the technique nor sand what so ever. Opponents on the other hand will have eye irritation, be unable to see anything a few meters in front of there faces. Outside opponents/people will be unable to fully see what is going on within due to the vast amount of swirling sand particles. Those within will struggle to breath and begin suffocating due to the rapid ingestion of sand.

Skill Name: Queens Pop
Tier: 1
Type Offence
Range: 15 meters
Speed: 2
Description: Isabella releases up to three small bullet sized bursts of sand anywhere from her body. These bullet sized bursts of sand can pierce anything that is listed as completely damaged on the MDL for this tier.

Skill Name: Queens Gag
Tier: 1
Type Supplementary/Offence
Range: 15 meters
Speed: 2
Description:  A simple technique that Isabella can release from any part of her body or utilize her hands to grasp a foes face. She releases a vast amount of sand that intends to ensnare an opponents head. The sand quickly covers the head of a foe and covers their mouth and noses. Thus beginning to suffocate them. By winding an opponent during this technique, the amount of time needed to suffocate before death is reduced by one. When using her hands, they do not "extend forth" the user intends to grasp an opponent with said hands before turning thier hands to sand and covering the face. This is simply an alternative way of use on foes whom are in her grasp rather than releasing and manipulating sand over a ranged area.  

Tier 2 Skills:

Skill Name: Queens Sword
Tier: 2
Type Offence
Range: 25 meters
Speed: 3
Description: Isabella strikes the ground, releasing sand from her hand creating a blade of sand that erupts in a linear path, this blade is 4 meters in width and can easily slice forth all in the 25 meter range, based upon the Material Destruction.

Skill Name: -Drought of the Queen
Tier: 2
Type Supplementary/Off
Range: 25 meters
Speed: 3
Description: By placing her hand or hand upon the ground, Isabella begins to dry up the entire area, the effects of these things can be seen instantly, It can turn to sand instantly anything that is within the completely destroyed part of the MDL for this tier, it takes an additional post for partially to crumble to sand, and two posts for lightly to be turned to sand. What should be noted is metal is not effected. By using this technique, those caught within it bar the user itself will begin to have their moisture stolen from their entire body. How this is decided is based upon the material destruction list as given in the skill info based against their natural durability.  Effects of the drain would be the same stated within the draining passive.

Skill Name: Queens Pool
Tier: 2
Type Off
Range: 25 meters
Speed: 3
Description: This technique has a few ways of working. The first is, Isabella will spew forth sand from her hands and her mouth to create the large wave. The sand wave is 20 meters in height, but has a width of 30 meters. It pushes forth with great destructive power and attempts to strike all in its path, upon doing so those caught will be buried under a mass amount of sand. To escape they would need to have strength higher than the over all tier of skill used, if not they will of course suffocate under the pressure of the sand. If unable to match the strength of the tier, those with a tier lower can take a full post to get out, while those with two tiers lower are unable to fight their way out of the vast burying sand. This version moves at tier 2 speeds

Now as stated this technique has additional ways of being carried out. If there is a pre-existing source of sand, the user can manipulate that sand with their own to carry out the technique much easier, if this is the case the range of this technique is increased by twenty meters in all areas and moves at tier 3 speed. 

Tier 3 Skills:

Skill Name:  Queens Rage
Tier: 3
Type Offensive
Range: 40 meters
Speed: 4
Description:  Isabella can release this technique in two ways. The first is to simply conjure up a small storm within her hand or hands and fire it forward, upon the large twister reaching the range that Isabella desires, she wills it to expand into a raging sand twister that spirals around the area within a 30 meter radius and height of 50 meters. The second way is by utilizing herself as the epicenter and releasing floods of sand from her body within a 30 meter radius and a height of fifty meters. As the epicenter and continuously releasing sand the technique follows her. She does not seem hindered by the technique nor sand what so ever. Opponents on the other hand will have eye irritation, be unable to see anything a few meters in front of there faces. Outside opponents/people will be unable to fully see what is going on within due to the vast amount of swirling sand particles. Those within will struggle to breath and begin suffocating due to the rapid ingestion of sand. Now unlike the previous version Queens Storm. This technique has a more offensive capability. It is able to lift anything that weighs 750lbs or under into a fierce sand like tornado that does blunt force damage from the whiplash damaging from the MDL. The user can ride this tornado of sand and seems uneffected. Unlike its previous version this technique also drains moisture from everything caught within. Anything on the MDL is instantly turned to sand if in the completely destroyed section, while anything on the partly is close to completely crumbling, anything on the lightly will have signs of whithering though this doesnt seem to effect much. It takes a full post for things on the partly aspect to completely crumble, while two posts for things on the lightly. People are based on their durability and what their durability is akin too. This technique drains from all over the body thus if they succumb to the partly whithered aspect they will lose a single tier over all attributes and find it incredibly hard to move, walk and breath. They will feel a need to drink like crazy. Vast drinking [not in battle i would suppose] of a hydrating source can reverse these effects. By dissolving in to sand which is granted by this technique, the useer is able to freely ride and move around in said tornado, because as a given it is their power. Much like how crocodile was capable of riding and flying through his own tornado without any ill effect.


Skill Name: Queens Power
Tier: 3
Type Contact
Range: 40 meters
Speed: 4 [Drain is own speed]
Description: The user transforms their hands to sand and fires them at an opponent, this technique can easily travel underground and break the ground and is freely manipulable by the user. Hand speed is increased by a full tier when used in this way. The intention is to grasp an opponent and drain them of their moisture completely at whatever pace they deem fit. This does so based on the MDL and is done via the opponents durability and what they are based off. The user can also just grab an opponent without activating their sand hands. By doing this, the techniques stamina cost is reduced by 50% an added bonus of this technique due to the hands not being transformed, buso haki can be used to grasp logias.

Tier 4 Skills:

Skill Name: The Queens Antilion
Tier: 4
Type Offence
Range: 70 meters
Speed: 4
Description: Isabellsa touches the ground, and almost instantly within a 70 meter diameter, the ground crumbles and shifts into sand due to its moisture being removed. With such a large sand area under her control, upon it shifting, Isabella rotates it quickly churning it and pulling it down, simulating the effects of quick sand. Of course as a sand human herself she is immune to this effect and remains perfectly fine at the center of the assault [though she can move about or join the sand in her intangible form] The intention of this technique is to rapidly pull all those upon the sand under crushing them with the extreme rotating force while filling their orifices with sand. By lifting her hands up she is able to have the sand rise rapidly to cover foes much quicker halting their escape before they can be dragged under requiring strength based on the strength of the skill itself to break free off. Of course this technique like most others drains the moisture from all those within upon activation. When caught in the sand all those whom have a durability lower than what she can destroy on the MDL are instantly destroyed, those who are partly whithered on contact will lose a minus 2 to all attributes instantly and will die within the next post if they do not escape the sand, those who are lightly whithered take no handicap on the initial post or post afterwards but upon the second post they will take on the effects of the party destroyed, while on the third post will die if they have no suffocated. The rotational force makes it much harder to escape due to being constantly pulled around while also having ones strength sapped from their bodies. Due to the sheer velocity and power, this attack effects the MDL +1

Skill Name: -Queens Rain
Tier: 4
Type Offence
Range: 70 meters
Speed: 4
Description: Isabella conjures up an incredibly large amount of sand that erupts from the back of her body shooting high into the air. This large amount of sand litters the sky 70 meters above the battle field covering that diameter. When the user wishes they can pull down the sand in hundreds upon thousands of mini sand bullets that can cause devastation around a seventy meter area while the user themselves become intangible thus escaping harm. This technique does not drain water and is simply based upon its large number and deadly piercing capabilities. The user can also if they choose to, release 100 bullets from their body though this greatly reduces the blast zone to ten meters in width and simply a 70 meter traveling distance. If this is chosen, the speed of the attack is given a +1  

Tier 5 Skills:

Skill Name: The Queens Joust
Tier: 5
Type -
Range: 150 meters
Speed: 6
Description: A much more powerful version of the Queens Sword. Isabella reaches into the ground, releasing a wave of loose sand that has a massive amount of cutting potential due to its rapid rotation similiar to a chain saw. Its height has increased being able to reach up to 100 meters while its width is that of forty meters in sand. Though due to the sheer force, there is an additional ten meters in its width that is sheer cutting air pressure.

Skill Name: The Queens Antilion Supreme
Tier: 5
Type Offence
Range: 200 meters
Speed: 6
Description: Isabellsa touches the ground, and almost instantly within a 300 meter diameter, the ground crumbles and shifts into sand due to its moisture being removed. With such a large sand area under her control, upon it shifting, Isabella rotates it quickly though unlike its predecessor this version is more like hundreds of millions of slicing sandblades, churning it and pulling it down, simulating the effects of quick sand. Of course as a sand human herself she is immune to this effect and remains perfectly fine at the center of the assault [though she can move about or join the sand in her intangible form] The intention of this technique is to rapidly pull all those upon the sand under crushing them with the extreme rotating force while filling their orifices with sand. By lifting her hands up she is able to have the sand rise rapidly to cover foes much quicker halting their escape before they can be dragged under requiring strength based on the strength of the skill itself to break free off. Of course this technique like most others drains the moisture from all those within upon activation. When caught in the sand all those whom have a durability lower than what she can destroy on the MDL are instantly destroyed, those who are partly whithered on contact will lose a minus 2 to all attributes instantly and will die within the next post if they do not escape the sand, those who are lightly whithered take no handicap on the initial post or post afterwards but upon the second post they will take on the effects of the party destroyed, while on the third post will die if they have no suffocated. The rotational force makes it much harder to escape due to being constantly pulled around while also having ones strength sapped from their bodies. Due to the sheer velocity and power, this attack effects the MDL +1

Tier 6 Skills:

Skill Name: The Queens Defence
Tier: 6
Type Defence
Range: 1-300 meters
Speed: 7
Description: Isabella is capable of releasing in a nigh instant a mass amount of sand capable of protecting the user, by forming an orb around them to protect them, it can be as small or as big as she wishes with great range. protects against a tier 7 attack, two tier 6's four tier 5's and so forth. This technique moves up to tier 7 speeds at anything 50 meters or less while loosing a minus one speed, at anything more.



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2 Re: Queen of the Desert: Suna Suna No Mi on Sun Oct 15, 2017 11:03 am

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Isabella wrote:



Priority: Primary
Fighting Style: Devil Fruit
Skill Set Name: Suna Suna No Mi
Skill Set Information: This fruit is quite powerful, even among Logia, as it allows for a great variety of abilities, rather than just normal elemental control. It also allows the user to locate quicksand, set off sandstorms, and absorb liquids. Such a variety is not seen with any other Logia fruit. It is also one of the few Logia type fruits that can naturally counteract its own weakness, and is even stronger in desert areas. It allows the user to transform into sand at will, as well as control it.

This fruit allows Crocodile Just make sure you get rid of canon references when c/ping to sense anything that is moving through sand (he uses his power to sense underground rivers that are flowing through the sand). Its power can also be honed to the point where the user could also absorb the moisture from and dry anything the user grasps, causing living things such as humans and plants to wither through dehydration, and also cause all other matter like rocks and land to crumble to dust and sand; only metallic or ferrous substances are immune to this dehydration effect

Passives:

  • [Withering Touch] [Level 3] Through the suna suna's unique moisture absorption qualitie, the user is capable of sucking the moisture from something via their hands. By doing so it mummifies the object touched. Through use of this passive, the user is able to mummify a single object or limb when touched at speeds based off the users attribute + 1. I'd say at equal speed because Speed is a secondary and this is a passive, not a skill. When mummifying/dehydrating a limb or object, the user must have a proper grasp upon the limb. This can not be a simple glancing touch, or a brush past. The user must grasp on with their hand. If able to do so, the user can almost instantly take up to 50% of the moisture from ones limb. This reduces all attributes by 1 tier focusing on that limb only. If the user grasps on and has not had their grasp broken for an entire post. They can take all the moisture from a limb, crumbling it to dust.  Naturally if one where to do this to the neck or head even at fifty percent. Death will ensue. I get that logically someone with 50% of the moisture out of their neck/head probably wouldn't be doing too hot but this is basically instant death with a passive. Full post grasp on neck/head is understandable, but 50% won't kill.
  • [Mastered Logia] [3] An ability that allows un-unsuspecting logia to instantly phase through an attack that they may not have seen coming, as if by reflex. This takes 30 stamina and can only be used 3 times per thread. This allows the user to evade attacks that they don't actually see coming.
  • [Queen of the Desert] [1] - The user is able to hone their senses, being able to connect it to both natural sand and sand created via their devil fruit and use it to the point where they are able to pick up even the slightest vibrations through Someone's or something's physical contact with sand enabling the user to perceive their surroundings as precisely as normal sight. Meaning things below the sand as well as structures such as buildings can be sensed within the sand. Though, sand floating through the air such as that from a sandstorm and other types of things can also allow the user to sense anything within it. It costs 10 Stamina to use this ability with a 5 Stamina upkeep. The range of the sensory is as followed;
    Tier 1: 30 Meters Diameter
    Tier 3: 60 Meters Diameter
    Tier 5: 90 Meters Diameter Bean had something similar in his Gura skillset with vibrations and his was a Tier 3 passive. I'd say this is at least Tier 2, maybe tier 3 depending on the other mod who reviews this.


[passives to be purchased, will strike out once approved so its easier to read]

Material Destruction:

Tier 1:
Completely Destroyed - Wood, Stone, and similar materials.
Partially Destroyed - Iron
Lightly Damaged -  Steel
Tier 2:
Completely Destroyed -  Iron, Wood, Stone, and similar materials.
Partially Destroyed - steel
Lightly Damaged - titanium
Tier 3:
Completely Destroyed -Steel, Iron, Wood, Stone, and similar materials
Partially Destroyed - titanium
Lightly Damaged - treasure tree adam
Tier 4:
Completely Destroyed - Titanium, Steel, Iron, Wood, Stone, and similar materials.
Partially Destroyed - Treasure Tree Adam
Lightly Damaged - Diamond, Seastone
Tier 5:
Completely Destroyed -Treasure Tree Adam, Titanium, Steel, Iron, Wood, Stone, and similar materials.
Partially Destroyed - Diamond, Seastone
Lightly Damaged - n/a
Tier 6:
Completely Destroyed - Diamond, Seastone, Treasure Tree Adam, Titanium, Steel, Iron, Wood, Stone, and similar materials.
Partially Destroyed - N/A
Lightly Damaged - N/A

Skillset Strengths:

  • The ability to dehydrate/mummify through contact and sand based techniques
  • Sensory capabilities
  • User is immune to high levels of heat and extreme colds, being able to easily withstand the blistering temperatures of the desert during the day and the freezing temperatures of the desert at night.
    This means hot and cold dfs act as -1 tier weaker.
  • Sand is naturally able to douse fire, this means sand acts as one tier higher against fire based devil fruits.
  • Within a desert like environment, all sand based attacks gain a +1 to all attributes as well as an additional 50 meter range. Desert like environment requires their to be at least 500 meters of sand within the immediate area.  I'm a little uncertain here that this might be more of a passive. Have the second mod put their thoughts in.
  • The user can immediately suck up moisture on themselves [color=red]You can keep this here but I'd like to see it as a skill specifically. Otherwise if someone throws water on you and tries to hit you while you can't intang you'll just say "lol auto-dry."

Skillset Weaknesses:

  • Being doused in liquid negates the users intangibility
  • an opponent doused in liquid can bypass the users intangibility
  • Due to the Yuki Yuki No Mi consisting of water and melting on sand on contact, the Yuki Yuki no mi user can bypass the intangibility of the Suna Suna No Mi User.
  • Water based techniques harden the users sand making them unable to manipulate the sand. Apart from defensive techniques which can protect against an additional skill if soaked and hardened, all other sand based attacks receive a minus one in terms of speed and power when soaked.

Notes:
Attribute Priorities:

  • Strength
  • Speed
  • Perception [Predator]
  • Durability


Tier 1 Skills:
Skill Name: Queens Storm
Tier: 1
Type Supplementary
Range: 15 meters
Speed: 2
Description: Isabella can release this technique in two ways. The first is to simply conjure up a small storm within her hand or hands and fire it forward, upon the small twister reaching the range that Isabella desires, she wills it to expand into a raging sand storm that spirals around the area within a fifteen meter radius. The second way is by utilizing herself as the epicenter and releasing floods of sand from her body within a fifteen meter radius. As the epicenter and continuously releasing sand the technique follows her. She does not seem hindered by the technique nor sand what so ever. Opponents on the other hand will have eye irritation, be unable to see anything a few meters in front of there faces. Outside opponents/people will be unable to fully see what is going on within due to the vast amount of swirling sand particles. Those within will struggle to breath and begin suffocating due to the rapid ingestion of sand.

Skill Name: Queens Pop
Tier: 1
Type Offence
Range: 15 meters
Speed: 2
Description: Isabella releases up to three small bullet sized bursts of sand anywhere from her body. These bullet sized bursts of sand can pierce anything that is listed as completely damaged on the MDL for this tier.

Skill Name: Queens Gag
Tier: 1
Type Supplementary/Offence
Range: 15 meters
Speed: 2
Description:  A simple technique that Isabella can release from any part of her body or utilize her hands to grasp a foes face. She releases a vast amount of sand that intends to ensnare an opponents head. The sand quickly covers the head of a foe and covers their mouth and noses. Thus beginning to suffocate them. By winding an opponent during this technique, the amount of time needed to suffocate before death is reduced by one.  

Tier 2 Skills:

Skill Name: Queens Sword
Tier: 2
Type Offence
Range: 25 meters
Speed: 3
Description: Isabella strikes the ground, releasing sand from her hand creating a blade of sand that erupts in a linear path, this blade is 8 meters in width and can easily slice forth all in the 25 meter range, based upon the Material Destruction.

Skill Name: -Drought of the Queen
Tier: 2
Type Supplementary/Off
Range: 25 meters
Speed: 3
Description: By placing her hand or hand upon the ground, Isabella begins to dry up the entire area, the effects of these things can be seen instantly, It can turn to sand instantly anything that is within the completely destroyed part of the MDL for this tier, it takes an additional post for partially to crumble to sand, and two posts for lightly to be turned to sand. What should be noted is metal is not effected. By using this technique, those caught within it bar the user itself will begin to have their moisture stolen from their entire body. How this is decided is based upon the material destruction list as given in the skill info based against their natural durability.  Effects of the drain would be the same stated within the draining passive.

Skill Name: Queens Pool
Tier: 2
Type Off
Range: 25 meters
Speed: 3
Description: This technique has a few ways of working. The first is, Isabella will spew forth sand from her hands and her mouth to create the large wave. The sand wave is 20 meters in height, but has a width of 30 meters. It pushes forth with great destructive power and attempts to strike all in its path, upon doing so those caught will be buried under a mass amount of sand. To escape they would need to have strength higher than the over all tier of skill used, if not they will of course suffocate under the pressure of the sand. If unable to match the strength of the tier, those with a tier lower can take a full post to get out, while those with two tiers lower are unable to fight their way out of the vast burying sand.

Now as stated this technique has additional ways of being carried out. If there is a pre-existing source of sand, the user can manipulate that sand with their own to carry out the technique much easier, if this is the case the range of this technique is increased by twenty meters in all areas.   Tier 2 speed for the first way, tier 3 speed for this second, pre-existing way.

Tier 3 Skills:

Skill Name:  Queens Rage
Tier: 3
Type -
Range: 40 meters
Speed: 4
Description:  Isabella can release this technique in two ways. The first is to simply conjure up a small storm within her hand or hands and fire it forward, upon the large twister reaching the range that Isabella desires, she wills it to expand into a raging sand twister that spirals around the area within a 30 meter radius and height of 50 meters. The second way is by utilizing herself as the epicenter and releasing floods of sand from her body within a 30 meter radius and a height of fifty meters. As the epicenter and continuously releasing sand the technique follows her. She does not seem hindered by the technique nor sand what so ever. Opponents on the other hand will have eye irritation, be unable to see anything a few meters in front of there faces. Outside opponents/people will be unable to fully see what is going on within due to the vast amount of swirling sand particles. Those within will struggle to breath and begin suffocating due to the rapid ingestion of sand. Now unlike the previous version Queens Storm. This technique has a more offensive capability. It is able to lift anything that weighs 750lbs or under into a fierce sand like tornado that does blunt force damage from the whiplash damaging from the MDL. The user can ride this tornado of sand and seems uneffected. Unlike its previous version this technique also drains moisture from everything caught within. Anything on the MDL is instantly turned to sand if in the completely destroyed section, while anything on the partly is close to completely crumbling, anything on the lightly will have signs of whithering though this doesnt seem to effect much. It takes a full post for things on the partly aspect to completely crumble, while two posts for things on the lightly. People are based on their durability and what their durability is akin too. This technique drains from all over the body thus if they succumb to the partly whithered aspect they will lose a single tier over all attributes and find it incredibly hard to move, walk and breath. They will feel a need to drink like crazy. Vast drinking [not in battle i would suppose] of a hydrating source can reverse these effects. Eh if you're in battle and for whatever reason get a chance to plunge your head in a lake, I don't see why that wouldn't be allowed. Just hope whoever does that can distract you while they do.


Skill Name: Queens Power
Tier: 3
Type Contact
Range: 40 meters
Speed: 4 [Drain is own speed]
Description: The user transforms their hands to sand and fires them at an opponent, this technique can easily travel underground and break the ground and is freely manipulable by the user. Hand speed is increased by a full tier when used in this way. The intention is to grasp an opponent and drain them of their moisture completely at whatever pace they deem fit. This does so based on the MDL and is done via the opponents durability and what they are based off. The user can also just grab an opponent without activating their sand hands. By doing this, the techniques stamina cost is reduced by 50% an added bonus of this technique due to the hands not being transformed, buso haki can be used to grasp logias.

Tier 4 Skills:

Skill Name: The Queens Antilion
Tier: 4
Type Offence
Range: 70 meters
Speed: 5 There's a lot of shit going on here, it'll take time to cover a wide area, etc. Tier 4 speed, maybe even tier 3 honestly.
Description: Isabellsa touches the ground, and almost instantly within a 70 meter diameter, the ground crumbles and shifts into sand due to its moisture being removed. With such a large sand area under her control, upon it shifting, Isabella rotates it quickly churning it and pulling it down, simulating the effects of quick sand. Of course as a sand human herself she is immune to this effect and remains perfectly fine at the center of the assault [though she can move about or join the sand in her intangible form] The intention of this technique is to rapidly pull all those upon the sand under crushing them with the extreme rotating force while filling their orifices with sand. By lifting her hands up she is able to have the sand rise rapidly to cover foes much quicker halting their escape before they can be dragged under requiring strength based on the strength of the skill itself to break free off. Of course this technique like most others drains the moisture from all those within upon activation. When caught in the sand all those whom have a durability lower than what she can destroy on the MDL are instantly destroyed, those who are partly whithered on contact will lose a minus 2 to all attributes instantly and will die within the next post if they do not escape the sand, those who are lightly whithered take no handicap on the initial post or post afterwards but upon the second post they will take on the effects of the party destroyed, while on the third post will die if they have no suffocated. The rotational force makes it much harder to escape due to being constantly pulled around while also having ones strength sapped from their bodies. Due to the sheer velocity and power, this attack effects the MDL +1

Skill Name: -Queens Rain
Tier: 4
Type Offence
Range: 70 meters
Speed: 5
Description: Isabella conjures up an incredibly large amount of sand that erupts from the back of her body shooting high into the air. This large amount of sand litters the sky 70 meters above the battle field covering that diameter. When the user wishes they can pull down the sand in hundreds upon thousands of mini sand bullets that can cause devastation around a seventy meter area while the user themselves become intangible thus escaping harm. This technique does not drain water and is simply based upon its large number and deadly piercing capabilities. The user can also if they choose to, release 100 bullets from their body though this greatly reduces the blast zone to ten meters in width and simply a 70 meter traveling distance. If this is chosen, the speed of the attack is given a +1 Drop the initial speed of the first way to 4 if you want the +1 speed for this other way. 

Tier 5 Skills:

Skill Name: The Queens Joust
Tier: 5
Type -
Range: 150 meters
Speed: 6
Description: A much more powerful version of the Queens Sword. Isabella reaches into the ground, releasing a wave of loose sand that has a massive amount of cutting potential due to its rapid rotation similiar to a chain saw. Its height has increased being able to reach up to 100 meters while its width is that of forty meters in sand. Though due to the sheer force, there is an additional ten meters in its width that is sheer cutting air pressure.

Skill Name: The Queens Antilion Dunno if you meant to or not but the tier 4 version has the same name.
Tier: 5
Type Offence
Range: 200 meters
Speed: 6
Description: Isabellsa touches the ground, and almost instantly within a 300 meter diameter, the ground crumbles and shifts into sand due to its moisture being removed. With such a large sand area under her control, upon it shifting, Isabella rotates it quickly though unlike its predecessor this version is more like hundreds of millions of slicing sandblades, churning it and pulling it down, simulating the effects of quick sand. Of course as a sand human herself she is immune to this effect and remains perfectly fine at the center of the assault [though she can move about or join the sand in her intangible form] The intention of this technique is to rapidly pull all those upon the sand under crushing them with the extreme rotating force while filling their orifices with sand. By lifting her hands up she is able to have the sand rise rapidly to cover foes much quicker halting their escape before they can be dragged under requiring strength based on the strength of the skill itself to break free off. Of course this technique like most others drains the moisture from all those within upon activation. When caught in the sand all those whom have a durability lower than what she can destroy on the MDL are instantly destroyed, those who are partly whithered on contact will lose a minus 2 to all attributes instantly and will die within the next post if they do not escape the sand, those who are lightly whithered take no handicap on the initial post or post afterwards but upon the second post they will take on the effects of the party destroyed, while on the third post will die if they have no suffocated. The rotational force makes it much harder to escape due to being constantly pulled around while also having ones strength sapped from their bodies. Due to the sheer velocity and power, this attack effects the MDL +1

Tier 6 Skills:

Skill Name: The Queens Defence
Tier: 6
Type Defence
Range: 1-300 meters
Speed: 7 Tier 6 speed. Anything that can cover 300m with speed as only a secondary shouldn't be that fast.
Description: Isabella is capable of releasing in a nigh instant a mass amount of sand capable of protecting the user, by forming an orb around them to protect them, it can be as small or as big as she wishes with great range. protects against a tier 7 attack, two tier 6's four tier 5's and so forth.

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3 Re: Queen of the Desert: Suna Suna No Mi on Tue Oct 17, 2017 7:30 am

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Edits made ^.^

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4 Re: Queen of the Desert: Suna Suna No Mi on Tue Oct 17, 2017 11:39 am

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1/2 but I want Sabo or Bean to be the 2/2 if it's all the same to you.

Overall solid skillset, scary tbh

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5 Re: Queen of the Desert: Suna Suna No Mi on Tue Oct 17, 2017 11:42 am

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Yeah thats fine, let the limbo begin XD

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6 Re: Queen of the Desert: Suna Suna No Mi on Thu Oct 19, 2017 12:12 am

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Bump.com

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7 Re: Queen of the Desert: Suna Suna No Mi on Fri Oct 20, 2017 11:09 pm

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8 Re: Queen of the Desert: Suna Suna No Mi on Sat Oct 21, 2017 1:35 am

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Because you're waiting so long I'll get one of the mods to look over it instead of waiting for Sabo or Bean

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9 Re: Queen of the Desert: Suna Suna No Mi on Sat Oct 21, 2017 6:34 pm

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Priority: Primary
Fighting Style: Devil Fruit
Skill Set Name: Suna Suna No Mi
Skill Set Information: This fruit is quite powerful, even among Logia, as it allows for a great variety of abilities, rather than just normal elemental control. It also allows the user to locate quicksand, set off sandstorms, and absorb liquids. Such a variety is not seen with any other Logia fruit. It is also one of the few Logia type fruits that can naturally counteract its own weakness, and is even stronger in desert areas. It allows the user to transform into sand at will, as well as control it.

This fruit allows the user to sense anything that is moving through sand (he uses his power to sense underground rivers that are flowing through the sand). Its power can also be honed to the point where the user could also absorb the moisture from and dry anything the user grasps, causing living things such as humans and plants to wither through dehydration, and also cause all other matter like rocks and land to crumble to dust and sand; only metallic or ferrous substances are immune to this dehydration effect

Passives:

  • [Withering Touch] [Level 3] Through the suna suna's unique moisture absorption qualitie, the user is capable of sucking the moisture from something via their hands. By doing so it mummifies the object touched. Through use of this passive, the user is able to mummify a single object or limb when touched at users speed. When mummifying/dehydrating a limb or object, the user must have a proper grasp upon the limb. This can not be a simple glancing touch, or a brush past. The user must grasp on with their hand. If able to do so, the user can almost instantly take up to 50% of the moisture from ones limb. This reduces all attributes by 1 tier focusing on that limb only. If the user grasps on and has not had their grasp broken for an entire post. They can take all the moisture from a limb, crumbling it to dust.  If the head or neck is grasped this will reduce all attributes by 2 due to the entire body therefore being effected. Are the effects permanent? Once touched can it be reversed?
  • [Mastered Logia] [3] An ability that allows un-unsuspecting logia to instantly phase through an attack that they may not have seen coming, as if by reflex. This takes 30 stamina and can only be used 3 times per thread. This allows the user to evade attacks that they don't actually see coming.
  • [Queen of the Desert] [3] - The user is able to hone their senses, being able to connect it to both natural sand and sand created via their devil fruit and use it to the point where they are able to pick up even the slightest vibrations through Someone's or something's physical contact with sand enabling the user to perceive their surroundings as precisely as normal sight. Meaning things below the sand as well as structures such as buildings can be sensed within the sand. Though, sand floating through the air such as that from a sandstorm and other types of things can also allow the user to sense anything within it. It costs 10 Stamina to use this ability with a 5 Stamina upkeep. The range of the sensory is as followed;
    Tier 1: 30 Meters Diameter
    Tier 3: 60 Meters Diameter
    Tier 5: 90 Meters Diameter


[passives to be purchased, will strike out once approved so its easier to read]

Material Destruction:

Tier 1:
Completely Destroyed - Wood, Stone, and similar materials.
Partially Destroyed - Iron
Lightly Damaged -  Steel
Tier 2:
Completely Destroyed -  Iron, Wood, Stone, and similar materials.
Partially Destroyed - steel
Lightly Damaged - titanium
Tier 3:
Completely Destroyed -Steel, Iron, Wood, Stone, and similar materials
Partially Destroyed - titanium
Lightly Damaged - treasure tree adam
Tier 4:
Completely Destroyed - Titanium, Steel, Iron, Wood, Stone, and similar materials.
Partially Destroyed - Treasure Tree Adam
Lightly Damaged - Diamond, Seastone
Tier 5:
Completely Destroyed -Treasure Tree Adam, Titanium, Steel, Iron, Wood, Stone, and similar materials.
Partially Destroyed - Diamond, Seastone
Lightly Damaged - n/a
Tier 6:
Completely Destroyed - Diamond, Seastone, Treasure Tree Adam, Titanium, Steel, Iron, Wood, Stone, and similar materials.
Partially Destroyed - N/A
Lightly Damaged - N/A

Skillset Strengths:

  • The ability to dehydrate/mummify through contact and sand based techniques
  • Sensory capabilities
  • User is immune to high levels of heat and extreme colds, being able to easily withstand the blistering temperatures of the desert during the day and the freezing temperatures of the desert at night.
    This means hot and cold dfs act as -1 tier weaker.
  • Sand is naturally able to douse fire, this means sand acts as one tier higher against fire based devil fruits.
  • Within a desert like environment, all sand based attacks gain a +1 to all attributes as well as an additional 50 meter range. Desert like environment requires their to be at least 500 meters of sand within the immediate area.  
  • The user can immediately suck up moisture on themselves [requires skill use]

Skillset Weaknesses:

  • Being doused in liquid negates the users intangibility
  • an opponent doused in liquid can bypass the users intangibility
  • Due to the Yuki Yuki No Mi consisting of water and melting on sand on contact, the Yuki Yuki no mi user can bypass the intangibility of the Suna Suna No Mi User.
  • Water based techniques harden the users sand making them unable to manipulate the sand. Apart from defensive techniques which can protect against an additional skill if soaked and hardened, all other sand based attacks receive a minus one in terms of speed and power when soaked.

Notes:
Attribute Priorities:

  • Strength
  • Speed
  • Perception [Predator]
  • Durability


Tier 1 Skills:
Skill Name: Queens Storm
Tier: 1
Type Supplementary
Range: 15 meters
Speed: 2
Description: Isabella can release this technique in two ways. The first is to simply conjure up a small storm within her hand or hands and fire it forward, upon the small twister reaching the range that Isabella desires, she wills it to expand into a raging sand storm that spirals around the area within a fifteen meter radius. The second way is by utilizing herself as the epicenter and releasing floods of sand from her body within a fifteen meter radius. As the epicenter and continuously releasing sand the technique follows her. She does not seem hindered by the technique nor sand what so ever. Opponents on the other hand will have eye irritation, be unable to see anything a few meters in front of there faces. Outside opponents/people will be unable to fully see what is going on within due to the vast amount of swirling sand particles. Those within will struggle to breath and begin suffocating due to the rapid ingestion of sand.

Skill Name: Queens Pop
Tier: 1
Type Offence
Range: 15 meters
Speed: 2
Description: Isabella releases up to three small bullet sized bursts of sand anywhere from her body. These bullet sized bursts of sand can pierce anything that is listed as completely damaged on the MDL for this tier.

Skill Name: Queens Gag
Tier: 1
Type Supplementary/Offence
Range: 15 meters
Speed: 2
Description:  A simple technique that Isabella can release from any part of her body or utilize her hands to grasp a foes face. She releases a vast amount of sand that intends to ensnare an opponents head. The sand quickly covers the head of a foe and covers their mouth and noses. Thus beginning to suffocate them. By winding an opponent during this technique, the amount of time needed to suffocate before death is reduced by one. Properly explain this to me please. Does your arm extend or? 

Tier 2 Skills:

Skill Name: Queens Sword
Tier: 2
Type Offence
Range: 25 meters
Speed: 3
Description: Isabella strikes the ground, releasing sand from her hand creating a blade of sand that erupts in a linear path, this blade is 8 meters in width and can easily slice forth all in the 25 meter range, based upon the Material Destruction. aesthetically I understand what you're going for but a 26 foot wide blade isn't much of a blade. I'd consider thinning i up to actually get effectiveness out of it.

Skill Name: -Drought of the Queen
Tier: 2
Type Supplementary/Off
Range: 25 meters
Speed: 3
Description: By placing her hand or hand upon the ground, Isabella begins to dry up the entire area, the effects of these things can be seen instantly, It can turn to sand instantly anything that is within the completely destroyed part of the MDL for this tier, it takes an additional post for partially to crumble to sand, and two posts for lightly to be turned to sand. What should be noted is metal is not effected. By using this technique, those caught within it bar the user itself will begin to have their moisture stolen from their entire body. How this is decided is based upon the material destruction list as given in the skill info based against their natural durability.  Effects of the drain would be the same stated within the draining passive.

Skill Name: Queens Pool
Tier: 2
Type Off
Range: 25 meters
Speed: 3
Description: This technique has a few ways of working. The first is, Isabella will spew forth sand from her hands and her mouth to create the large wave. The sand wave is 20 meters in height, but has a width of 30 meters. It pushes forth with great destructive power and attempts to strike all in its path, upon doing so those caught will be buried under a mass amount of sand. To escape they would need to have strength higher than the over all tier of skill used, if not they will of course suffocate under the pressure of the sand. If unable to match the strength of the tier, those with a tier lower can take a full post to get out, while those with two tiers lower are unable to fight their way out of the vast burying sand. This version moves at tier 2 speeds

Now as stated this technique has additional ways of being carried out. If there is a pre-existing source of sand, the user can manipulate that sand with their own to carry out the technique much easier, if this is the case the range of this technique is increased by twenty meters in all areas and moves at tier 3 speed. 

Tier 3 Skills:

Skill Name:  Queens Rage
Tier: 3
Type Offensive
Range: 40 meters
Speed: 4
Description:  Isabella can release this technique in two ways. The first is to simply conjure up a small storm within her hand or hands and fire it forward, upon the large twister reaching the range that Isabella desires, she wills it to expand into a raging sand twister that spirals around the area within a 30 meter radius and height of 50 meters. The second way is by utilizing herself as the epicenter and releasing floods of sand from her body within a 30 meter radius and a height of fifty meters. As the epicenter and continuously releasing sand the technique follows her. She does not seem hindered by the technique nor sand what so ever. Opponents on the other hand will have eye irritation, be unable to see anything a few meters in front of there faces. Outside opponents/people will be unable to fully see what is going on within due to the vast amount of swirling sand particles. Those within will struggle to breath and begin suffocating due to the rapid ingestion of sand. Now unlike the previous version Queens Storm. This technique has a more offensive capability. It is able to lift anything that weighs 750lbs or under into a fierce sand like tornado that does blunt force damage from the whiplash damaging from the MDL. The user can ride this tornado of sand and seems uneffected. Unlike its previous version this technique also drains moisture from everything caught within. Anything on the MDL is instantly turned to sand if in the completely destroyed section, while anything on the partly is close to completely crumbling, anything on the lightly will have signs of whithering though this doesnt seem to effect much. It takes a full post for things on the partly aspect to completely crumble, while two posts for things on the lightly. People are based on their durability and what their durability is akin too. This technique drains from all over the body thus if they succumb to the partly whithered aspect they will lose a single tier over all attributes and find it incredibly hard to move, walk and breath. They will feel a need to drink like crazy. Vast drinking [not in battle i would suppose] of a hydrating source can reverse these effects. The moisture aspect is only stated to work by contact. Also for explain how you're able to withstand the force and ride the tornado that pulls in everything else.


Skill Name: Queens Power
Tier: 3
Type Contact
Range: 40 meters
Speed: 4 [Drain is own speed]
Description: The user transforms their hands to sand and fires them at an opponent, this technique can easily travel underground and break the ground and is freely manipulable by the user. Hand speed is increased by a full tier when used in this way. The intention is to grasp an opponent and drain them of their moisture completely at whatever pace they deem fit. This does so based on the MDL and is done via the opponents durability and what they are based off. The user can also just grab an opponent without activating their sand hands. By doing this, the techniques stamina cost is reduced by 50% an added bonus of this technique due to the hands not being transformed, buso haki can be used to grasp logias. The drain span should be based off the same chart used in killing people via poisons etc. Goes for the passive too.

Tier 4 Skills:

Skill Name: The Queens Antilion
Tier: 4
Type Offence
Range: 70 meters
Speed: 4
Description: Isabellsa touches the ground, and almost instantly within a 70 meter diameter, the ground crumbles and shifts into sand due to its moisture being removed. With such a large sand area under her control, upon it shifting, Isabella rotates it quickly churning it and pulling it down, simulating the effects of quick sand. Of course as a sand human herself she is immune to this effect and remains perfectly fine at the center of the assault [though she can move about or join the sand in her intangible form] The intention of this technique is to rapidly pull all those upon the sand under crushing them with the extreme rotating force while filling their orifices with sand. By lifting her hands up she is able to have the sand rise rapidly to cover foes much quicker halting their escape before they can be dragged under requiring strength based on the strength of the skill itself to break free off. Of course this technique like most others drains the moisture from all those within upon activation. When caught in the sand all those whom have a durability lower than what she can destroy on the MDL are instantly destroyed, those who are partly whithered on contact will lose a minus 2 to all attributes instantly and will die within the next post if they do not escape the sand, those who are lightly whithered take no handicap on the initial post or post afterwards but upon the second post they will take on the effects of the party destroyed, while on the third post will die if they have no suffocated. The rotational force makes it much harder to escape due to being constantly pulled around while also having ones strength sapped from their bodies. Due to the sheer velocity and power, this attack effects the MDL +1. Adjust the moisture aspect, make changes around it and then see how you like this skill then, bring that range down to the 50's also.

Skill Name: -Queens Rain
Tier: 4
Type Offence
Range: 70 meters
Speed: 4
Description: Isabella conjures up an incredibly large amount of sand that erupts from the back of her body shooting high into the air. This large amount of sand litters the sky 70 meters above the battle field covering that diameter. When the user wishes they can pull down the sand in hundreds upon thousands of mini sand bullets that can cause devastation around a seventy meter area while the user themselves become intangible thus escaping harm. This technique does not drain water and is simply based upon its large number and deadly piercing capabilities. The user can also if they choose to, release 100 bullets from their body though this greatly reduces the blast zone to ten meters in width and simply a 70 meter traveling distance. If this is chosen, the speed of the attack is given a +1. 50 Meters tops  

Tier 5 Skills:

Skill Name: The Queens Joust
Tier: 5
Type -
Range: 150 meters
Speed: 6
Description: A much more powerful version of the Queens Sword. Isabella reaches into the ground, releasing a wave of loose sand that has a massive amount of cutting potential due to its rapid rotation similiar to a chain saw. Its height has increased being able to reach up to 100 meters while its width is that of forty meters in sand. Though due to the sheer force, there is an additional ten meters in its width that is sheer cutting air pressure. 100 meters high and 150 meters long? And with that width. Not a blade anymore its more of a battering ram. Also lower that height and range if it's just a blade.

Skill Name: The Queens Antilion Supreme
Tier: 5
Type Offence
Range: 200 meters
Speed: 6
Description: Isabellsa touches the ground, and almost instantly within a 300 meter diameter, the ground crumbles and shifts into sand due to its moisture being removed. With such a large sand area under her control, upon it shifting, Isabella rotates it quickly though unlike its predecessor this version is more like hundreds of millions of slicing sandblades, churning it and pulling it down, simulating the effects of quick sand. Of course as a sand human herself she is immune to this effect and remains perfectly fine at the center of the assault [though she can move about or join the sand in her intangible form] The intention of this technique is to rapidly pull all those upon the sand under crushing them with the extreme rotating force while filling their orifices with sand. By lifting her hands up she is able to have the sand rise rapidly to cover foes much quicker halting their escape before they can be dragged under requiring strength based on the strength of the skill itself to break free off. Of course this technique like most others drains the moisture from all those within upon activation. When caught in the sand all those whom have a durability lower than what she can destroy on the MDL are instantly destroyed, those who are partly whithered on contact will lose a minus 2 to all attributes instantly and will die within the next post if they do not escape the sand, those who are lightly whithered take no handicap on the initial post or post afterwards but upon the second post they will take on the effects of the party destroyed, while on the third post will die if they have no suffocated. The rotational force makes it much harder to escape due to being constantly pulled around while also having ones strength sapped from their bodies. Due to the sheer velocity and power, this attack effects the MDL +1
This MDL thing is getting pretty wocky. If all your skills get a boost on the MDL why make an MDL? If you wanted so many boost you're better off making a tier 1 skill that'll offer a temp boost to your skills MDL effectiveness. Also the draining thing has to go and all your skills that take away 2 from every atribute make it 1. Durability would be the least effected by these things. I'd let the range stick if it's 200 meters but you're better off having this as a tier 6 and your tier 6 defensive skill being a tier 5.

Tier 6 Skills:

Skill Name: The Queens Defence
Tier: 6
Type Defence
Range: 1-300 meters
Speed: 7
Description: Isabella is capable of releasing in a nigh instant a mass amount of sand capable of protecting the user, by forming an orb around them to protect them, it can be as small or as big as she wishes with great range. protects against a tier 7 attack, two tier 6's four tier 5's and so forth. This technique moves up to tier 7 speeds at anything 50 meters or less while loosing a minus one speed, at anything more. Since it isn't a durability mained skill it can tank 1 tier 6 and so forth.

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Rockstar Spud wrote:
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Priority: Primary
Fighting Style: Devil Fruit
Skill Set Name: Suna Suna No Mi
Skill Set Information: This fruit is quite powerful, even among Logia, as it allows for a great variety of abilities, rather than just normal elemental control. It also allows the user to locate quicksand, set off sandstorms, and absorb liquids. Such a variety is not seen with any other Logia fruit. It is also one of the few Logia type fruits that can naturally counteract its own weakness, and is even stronger in desert areas. It allows the user to transform into sand at will, as well as control it.

This fruit allows the user to sense anything that is moving through sand (he uses his power to sense underground rivers that are flowing through the sand). Its power can also be honed to the point where the user could also absorb the moisture from and dry anything the user grasps, causing living things such as humans and plants to wither through dehydration, and also cause all other matter like rocks and land to crumble to dust and sand; only metallic or ferrous substances are immune to this dehydration effect

Passives:

  • [Withering Touch] [Level 3] Through the suna suna's unique moisture absorption qualitie, the user is capable of sucking the moisture from something via their hands. By doing so it mummifies the object touched. Through use of this passive, the user is able to mummify a single object or limb when touched at users speed. When mummifying/dehydrating a limb or object, the user must have a proper grasp upon the limb. This can not be a simple glancing touch, or a brush past. The user must grasp on with their hand. If able to do so, the user can almost instantly take up to 50% of the moisture from ones limb. This reduces all attributes by 1 tier focusing on that limb only. If the user grasps on and has not had their grasp broken for an entire post. They can take all the moisture from a limb, crumbling it to dust.  If the head or neck is grasped this will reduce all attributes by 2 due to the entire body therefore being effected. Are the effects permanent? Once touched can it be reversed?
  • [Mastered Logia] [3] An ability that allows un-unsuspecting logia to instantly phase through an attack that they may not have seen coming, as if by reflex. This takes 30 stamina and can only be used 3 times per thread. This allows the user to evade attacks that they don't actually see coming.
  • [Queen of the Desert] [3] - The user is able to hone their senses, being able to connect it to both natural sand and sand created via their devil fruit and use it to the point where they are able to pick up even the slightest vibrations through Someone's or something's physical contact with sand enabling the user to perceive their surroundings as precisely as normal sight. Meaning things below the sand as well as structures such as buildings can be sensed within the sand. Though, sand floating through the air such as that from a sandstorm and other types of things can also allow the user to sense anything within it. It costs 10 Stamina to use this ability with a 5 Stamina upkeep. The range of the sensory is as followed;
    Tier 1: 30 Meters Diameter
    Tier 3: 60 Meters Diameter
    Tier 5: 90 Meters Diameter


[passives to be purchased, will strike out once approved so its easier to read]

Material Destruction:

Tier 1:
Completely Destroyed - Wood, Stone, and similar materials.
Partially Destroyed - Iron
Lightly Damaged -  Steel
Tier 2:
Completely Destroyed -  Iron, Wood, Stone, and similar materials.
Partially Destroyed - steel
Lightly Damaged - titanium
Tier 3:
Completely Destroyed -Steel, Iron, Wood, Stone, and similar materials
Partially Destroyed - titanium
Lightly Damaged - treasure tree adam
Tier 4:
Completely Destroyed - Titanium, Steel, Iron, Wood, Stone, and similar materials.
Partially Destroyed - Treasure Tree Adam
Lightly Damaged - Diamond, Seastone
Tier 5:
Completely Destroyed -Treasure Tree Adam, Titanium, Steel, Iron, Wood, Stone, and similar materials.
Partially Destroyed - Diamond, Seastone
Lightly Damaged - n/a
Tier 6:
Completely Destroyed - Diamond, Seastone, Treasure Tree Adam, Titanium, Steel, Iron, Wood, Stone, and similar materials.
Partially Destroyed - N/A
Lightly Damaged - N/A

Skillset Strengths:

  • The ability to dehydrate/mummify through contact and sand based techniques
  • Sensory capabilities
  • User is immune to high levels of heat and extreme colds, being able to easily withstand the blistering temperatures of the desert during the day and the freezing temperatures of the desert at night.
    This means hot and cold dfs act as -1 tier weaker.
  • Within a desert like environment, all sand based attacks gain a +1 to all attributes as well as an additional 50 meter range. Desert like environment requires their to be at least 500 meters of sand within the immediate area.  
  • The user can immediately suck up moisture on themselves [requires skill use]

Skillset Weaknesses:

  • Being doused in liquid negates the users intangibility
  • an opponent doused in liquid can bypass the users intangibility
  • Due to the Yuki Yuki No Mi consisting of water and melting on sand on contact, the Yuki Yuki no mi user can bypass the intangibility of the Suna Suna No Mi User.
  • Water based techniques harden the users sand making them unable to manipulate the sand. Apart from defensive techniques which can protect against an additional skill if soaked and hardened, all other sand based attacks receive a minus one in terms of speed and power when soaked.

Notes:
Attribute Priorities:

  • Strength
  • Speed
  • Perception [Predator]
  • Durability


Tier 1 Skills:
Skill Name: Queens Storm
Tier: 1
Type Supplementary
Range: 15 meters
Speed: 2
Description: Isabella can release this technique in two ways. The first is to simply conjure up a small storm within her hand or hands and fire it forward, upon the small twister reaching the range that Isabella desires, she wills it to expand into a raging sand storm that spirals around the area within a fifteen meter radius. The second way is by utilizing herself as the epicenter and releasing floods of sand from her body within a fifteen meter radius. As the epicenter and continuously releasing sand the technique follows her. She does not seem hindered by the technique nor sand what so ever. Opponents on the other hand will have eye irritation, be unable to see anything a few meters in front of there faces. Outside opponents/people will be unable to fully see what is going on within due to the vast amount of swirling sand particles. Those within will struggle to breath and begin suffocating due to the rapid ingestion of sand.

Skill Name: Queens Pop
Tier: 1
Type Offence
Range: 15 meters
Speed: 2
Description: Isabella releases up to three small bullet sized bursts of sand anywhere from her body. These bullet sized bursts of sand can pierce anything that is listed as completely damaged on the MDL for this tier.

Skill Name: Queens Gag
Tier: 1
Type Supplementary/Offence
Range: 15 meters
Speed: 2
Description:  A simple technique that Isabella can release from any part of her body or utilize her hands to grasp a foes face. She releases a vast amount of sand that intends to ensnare an opponents head. The sand quickly covers the head of a foe and covers their mouth and noses. Thus beginning to suffocate them. By winding an opponent during this technique, the amount of time needed to suffocate before death is reduced by one. Properly explain this to me please. Does your arm extend or? 

Tier 2 Skills:

Skill Name: Queens Sword
Tier: 2
Type Offence
Range: 25 meters
Speed: 3
Description: Isabella strikes the ground, releasing sand from her hand creating a blade of sand that erupts in a linear path, this blade is 8 meters in width and can easily slice forth all in the 25 meter range, based upon the Material Destruction. aesthetically I understand what you're going for but a 26 foot wide blade isn't much of a blade. I'd consider thinning i up to actually get effectiveness out of it.

Skill Name: -Drought of the Queen
Tier: 2
Type Supplementary/Off
Range: 25 meters
Speed: 3
Description: By placing her hand or hand upon the ground, Isabella begins to dry up the entire area, the effects of these things can be seen instantly, It can turn to sand instantly anything that is within the completely destroyed part of the MDL for this tier, it takes an additional post for partially to crumble to sand, and two posts for lightly to be turned to sand. What should be noted is metal is not effected. By using this technique, those caught within it bar the user itself will begin to have their moisture stolen from their entire body. How this is decided is based upon the material destruction list as given in the skill info based against their natural durability.  Effects of the drain would be the same stated within the draining passive.

Skill Name: Queens Pool
Tier: 2
Type Off
Range: 25 meters
Speed: 3
Description: This technique has a few ways of working. The first is, Isabella will spew forth sand from her hands and her mouth to create the large wave. The sand wave is 20 meters in height, but has a width of 30 meters. It pushes forth with great destructive power and attempts to strike all in its path, upon doing so those caught will be buried under a mass amount of sand. To escape they would need to have strength higher than the over all tier of skill used, if not they will of course suffocate under the pressure of the sand. If unable to match the strength of the tier, those with a tier lower can take a full post to get out, while those with two tiers lower are unable to fight their way out of the vast burying sand. This version moves at tier 2 speeds

Now as stated this technique has additional ways of being carried out. If there is a pre-existing source of sand, the user can manipulate that sand with their own to carry out the technique much easier, if this is the case the range of this technique is increased by twenty meters in all areas and moves at tier 3 speed. 

Tier 3 Skills:

Skill Name:  Queens Rage
Tier: 3
Type Offensive
Range: 40 meters
Speed: 4
Description:  Isabella can release this technique in two ways. The first is to simply conjure up a small storm within her hand or hands and fire it forward, upon the large twister reaching the range that Isabella desires, she wills it to expand into a raging sand twister that spirals around the area within a 30 meter radius and height of 50 meters. The second way is by utilizing herself as the epicenter and releasing floods of sand from her body within a 30 meter radius and a height of fifty meters. As the epicenter and continuously releasing sand the technique follows her. She does not seem hindered by the technique nor sand what so ever. Opponents on the other hand will have eye irritation, be unable to see anything a few meters in front of there faces. Outside opponents/people will be unable to fully see what is going on within due to the vast amount of swirling sand particles. Those within will struggle to breath and begin suffocating due to the rapid ingestion of sand. Now unlike the previous version Queens Storm. This technique has a more offensive capability. It is able to lift anything that weighs 750lbs or under into a fierce sand like tornado that does blunt force damage from the whiplash damaging from the MDL. The user can ride this tornado of sand and seems uneffected. Unlike its previous version this technique also drains moisture from everything caught within. Anything on the MDL is instantly turned to sand if in the completely destroyed section, while anything on the partly is close to completely crumbling, anything on the lightly will have signs of whithering though this doesnt seem to effect much. It takes a full post for things on the partly aspect to completely crumble, while two posts for things on the lightly. People are based on their durability and what their durability is akin too. This technique drains from all over the body thus if they succumb to the partly whithered aspect they will lose a single tier over all attributes and find it incredibly hard to move, walk and breath. They will feel a need to drink like crazy. Vast drinking [not in battle i would suppose] of a hydrating source can reverse these effects. The moisture aspect is only stated to work by contact. Also for explain how you're able to withstand the force and ride the tornado that pulls in everything else.


Skill Name: Queens Power
Tier: 3
Type Contact
Range: 40 meters
Speed: 4 [Drain is own speed]
Description: The user transforms their hands to sand and fires them at an opponent, this technique can easily travel underground and break the ground and is freely manipulable by the user. Hand speed is increased by a full tier when used in this way. The intention is to grasp an opponent and drain them of their moisture completely at whatever pace they deem fit. This does so based on the MDL and is done via the opponents durability and what they are based off. The user can also just grab an opponent without activating their sand hands. By doing this, the techniques stamina cost is reduced by 50% an added bonus of this technique due to the hands not being transformed, buso haki can be used to grasp logias. The drain span should be based off the same chart used in killing people via poisons etc. Goes for the passive too.

Tier 4 Skills:

Skill Name: The Queens Antilion
Tier: 4
Type Offence
Range: 70 meters
Speed: 4
Description: Isabellsa touches the ground, and almost instantly within a 70 meter diameter, the ground crumbles and shifts into sand due to its moisture being removed. With such a large sand area under her control, upon it shifting, Isabella rotates it quickly churning it and pulling it down, simulating the effects of quick sand. Of course as a sand human herself she is immune to this effect and remains perfectly fine at the center of the assault [though she can move about or join the sand in her intangible form] The intention of this technique is to rapidly pull all those upon the sand under crushing them with the extreme rotating force while filling their orifices with sand. By lifting her hands up she is able to have the sand rise rapidly to cover foes much quicker halting their escape before they can be dragged under requiring strength based on the strength of the skill itself to break free off. Of course this technique like most others drains the moisture from all those within upon activation. When caught in the sand all those whom have a durability lower than what she can destroy on the MDL are instantly destroyed, those who are partly whithered on contact will lose a minus 2 to all attributes instantly and will die within the next post if they do not escape the sand, those who are lightly whithered take no handicap on the initial post or post afterwards but upon the second post they will take on the effects of the party destroyed, while on the third post will die if they have no suffocated. The rotational force makes it much harder to escape due to being constantly pulled around while also having ones strength sapped from their bodies. Due to the sheer velocity and power, this attack effects the MDL +1. Adjust the moisture aspect, make changes around it and then see how you like this skill then, bring that range down to the 50's also.

This is a canon technique, not really sure what to adjust based on how its been approved over all the sunas skill sets. also im a primary in strength, im not entirely sure as to why my range needs to be reduced when theres people with secondary strengths with AOE's higher than a fifty at tier 4?


Skill Name: -Queens Rain
Tier: 4
Type Offence
Range: 70 meters
Speed: 4
Description: Isabella conjures up an incredibly large amount of sand that erupts from the back of her body shooting high into the air. This large amount of sand litters the sky 70 meters above the battle field covering that diameter. When the user wishes they can pull down the sand in hundreds upon thousands of mini sand bullets that can cause devastation around a seventy meter area while the user themselves become intangible thus escaping harm. This technique does not drain water and is simply based upon its large number and deadly piercing capabilities. The user can also if they choose to, release 100 bullets from their body though this greatly reduces the blast zone to ten meters in width and simply a 70 meter traveling distance. If this is chosen, the speed of the attack is given a +1. 50 Meters tops

"same question as a above, strength primary gives larger AOE's ten meters higher than a base is basically putting it in secondary form, kinda negates the primary boost  

Tier 5 Skills:

Skill Name: The Queens Joust
Tier: 5
Type -
Range: 150 meters
Speed: 6
Description: A much more powerful version of the Queens Sword. Isabella reaches into the ground, releasing a wave of loose sand that has a massive amount of cutting potential due to its rapid rotation similiar to a chain saw. Its height has increased being able to reach up to 100 meters while its width is that of forty meters in sand. Though due to the sheer force, there is an additional ten meters in its width that is sheer cutting air pressure. 100 meters high and 150 meters long? And with that width. Not a blade anymore its more of a battering ram. Also lower that height and range if it's just a blade.

I mean both Crocodiles Spada and his advanced version are far superior to that in terms of strength, width and lenght compared to an actual sword, given that its loose shifting sand moving fast enough to cut and pierce all in its path, its not creating an actual sword in appearance or shape. Ibasically kinda based htis more of one of the techs gambit used in our thread which gave his sword users 100+ travel distance and width/length. except this is loose sand that cuts and pierces



Skill Name: The Queens Antilion Supreme
Tier: 5
Type Offence
Range: 200 meters
Speed: 6
Description: Isabellsa touches the ground, and almost instantly within a 300 meter diameter, the ground crumbles and shifts into sand due to its moisture being removed. With such a large sand area under her control, upon it shifting, Isabella rotates it quickly though unlike its predecessor this version is more like hundreds of millions of slicing sandblades, churning it and pulling it down, simulating the effects of quick sand. Of course as a sand human herself she is immune to this effect and remains perfectly fine at the center of the assault [though she can move about or join the sand in her intangible form] The intention of this technique is to rapidly pull all those upon the sand under crushing them with the extreme rotating force while filling their orifices with sand. By lifting her hands up she is able to have the sand rise rapidly to cover foes much quicker halting their escape before they can be dragged under requiring strength based on the strength of the skill itself to break free off. Of course this technique like most others drains the moisture from all those within upon activation. When caught in the sand all those whom have a durability lower than what she can destroy on the MDL are instantly destroyed, those who are partly whithered on contact will lose a minus 2 to all attributes instantly and will die within the next post if they do not escape the sand, those who are lightly whithered take no handicap on the initial post or post afterwards but upon the second post they will take on the effects of the party destroyed, while on the third post will die if they have no suffocated. The rotational force makes it much harder to escape due to being constantly pulled around while also having ones strength sapped from their bodies. Due to the sheer velocity and power, this attack effects the MDL +1
This MDL thing is getting pretty wocky. If all your skills get a boost on the MDL why make an MDL? If you wanted so many boost you're better off making a tier 1 skill that'll offer a temp boost to your skills MDL effectiveness. Also the draining thing has to go and all your skills that take away 2 from every atribute make it 1. Durability would be the least effected by these things. I'd let the range stick if it's 200 meters but you're better off having this as a tier 6 and your tier 6 defensive skill being a tier 5.

Draining addressed below whichwould cover the minus 2 attributes all over given the entire body would be mummified and barely able to funciton. MDL issue addressed below also

Tier 6 Skills:

Skill Name: The Queens Defence
Tier: 6
Type Defence
Range: 1-300 meters
Speed: 7
Description: Isabella is capable of releasing in a nigh instant a mass amount of sand capable of protecting the user, by forming an orb around them to protect them, it can be as small or as big as she wishes with great range. protects against a tier 7 attack, two tier 6's four tier 5's and so forth. This technique moves up to tier 7 speeds at anything 50 meters or less while loosing a minus one speed, at anything more. Since it isn't a durability mained skill it can tank 1 tier 6 and so forth.

Durability has never played a factor in to defensive skills.....
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Durability - No direct bonus, but user's Natural Defense is higher than those who don't prioritize Durability.





In relation to Skills, Durability wouldn't really effect them much. While one can make Skills that enhance Durability, usage of Defensive Skills are just more optimal since they block raw Tiers of damage above their own Tier.



So my tier 6 is able to block a single tier 7 or two tier 6's  given thats how defensive skills work, durability as an attribute has never played a factor in defence skills


Drain In terms of the drain effect, Crocodiles techniques are noted to drain moisture, sables has shown the effect as well as Barjan,

http://www.mangareader.net/one-piece/155/7

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Barján (三日月形砂丘(バルハン) Baruhan?, literally translated as "Crescent-Shaped Dune"): Crocodile swings his right arm forward while leaving a crescent shaped trail of sand behind it. Anything hit by that trail is instantly robbed of all moisture because of Crocodile's dehydration ability. "Barján" is Spanish for "Barchan", a crescent-shaped sand dune. This is called Crescent Cutlass in the Viz Manga, the FUNimation dub and subs, and the English version of One Piece: Grand Battle! Rush! and Desert Cutlass in the 4Kids dub. However, in the Funimation dub of the Impel Down Arc, it retains the original name


Sables (砂嵐(サーブルス) Sāburusu?, literally translated as "Sandstorm"): Crocodile summons a massive tornado of sand and sends it on a rampage. Once this sandstorm grows large enough, not even he can stop it. A variation of it is seen when Crocodile attacks Puppu's crew: with himself as the epicenter, he makes a sandstorm that can suck the water out of living things and is apparently able to crack steel.


Puppu's mockery turned to horror when Crocodile created a sandstorm to drain the water content from Puppu and his crew's bodies. Later, Crocodile was seen carrying their bodies, stuffed into a large sack, out of town after the clash.[1]


In terms of a poison like chart, the speed of this ability is instantanious as proven canonly, Im open to a chart i suppose but if  you could propose a starting point that you would see. I went by durability [internal] because that meant everyones chances where completely different while still allowing for escape chances for stronger characters while lower characters would succumb to death, much like how the lava lava with its heat can destroy those instantly like Bojack whom are weaker while characters with higher durability can withstand it rather than instantly be destroyed. personally i think going by durability and the effects given are adequate, given the comparrison to the anime/manga the abilities are greatly reduced and allow compared to crocodiles and the original suna sunas powers.

In terms of the MDL comment, tier 1's don't allow buffs and it would be a waste, given only two attacks one at tier 4 and one at tier 5 have a MDL boost which by the rules is viable im not sure why wasting a tech slot is needed for something so basic

Edited the basic ones but not the ones dealing with the information above


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