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1 Gomu Gomu No Mi's Skills on Thu Jun 15, 2017 5:42 pm

Tier 3 Skills:

Skill Name: - Gomu Gomu DragonSlayer
Tier: - 3
Type - Offensive
Range: - 5 Meters
Speed: - Own
Description: - Draco will charged directly at  his enemy, cocking both of his arms back but he then will rapidly twisted then by a insane degree in which he would then throw a two punches similar to his Gomu Gomu No Javelin but it's strength is roughly doubled compare to it's weaker counterpart. Can shatter bones, destroy Titanium​ and weaker materials and rip through someone's body.

Skill Name: - Gomu Gomu Claymore
Tier: - 3
Type - Offensive
Range: - 1-10 Meters
Speed: - Own
Description: - Draco then stretch his arm above his head before he brings it right down in a diagonal direction as he does a karate-like chop attack. This attack is very powerful as Draco is able to chop through and greatly damage Titanium and weak substances, Can smash/chop through someone's body or absolutely obliterate bones.



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2 Re: Gomu Gomu No Mi's Skills on Fri Jun 16, 2017 7:01 am

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Your wording here is too vague.

"...can destroy and significantly damage the hardest thing at his current level" <---what?

Just say it follows the Tier 3 MDL

So people can just look and be like, "Oh okay so this skill will shatter titanium" (or whatever is on your list)

Makes life a lot easier and less chance for you to be vague manipulated and killed by some ridiculous loop hole.

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3 Re: Gomu Gomu No Mi's Skills on Fri Jun 16, 2017 7:02 am

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Tier 3 Skills:

Skill Name: - Gomu Gomu DragonSlayer
Tier: - 3
Type - Offensive
Range: - 5 Meters
Speed: - Own
Description: - Draco will charged directly at  his enemy, cocking both of his arms back but he then will rapidly twisted then by a insane degree in which he would then throw a double punch similar to his Javelin but it's strength is roughly doubled. What do you mean by the strength is roughly doubled? Is that just flavor text? Can Shatter Bones, Destroy metals and rip through someone's body. For the metals it will just follow what is on your MDC.

Skill Name: - Gomu Gomu Claymore
Tier: - 3
Type - Offensive
Range: - 1-10 Meters
Speed: - Own
Description: - Draco then stretch his arm above his head before he brings it right down in a diagonal direction, This attack is very powerful as Draco is able to chop through his hardest thing that he can destroy and significantly damage the hardest thing at his current level. Can Slice through somone's body and absolutely obliterate bones. I'm personally against a rubber man being able to slice someone in half without using something bladed. You can get a second opinion about this though.

Shouldn't the damage from these two skills be the same? Since they are the same tier and extremely similar in what they do. I'm not saying they have to be I'm just wondering why you made them different.

When making skills for a skillset already made, proved a link to that skillset.

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4 Re: Gomu Gomu No Mi's Skills on Fri Jun 16, 2017 7:30 am

Alright, will be done.


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5 Re: Gomu Gomu No Mi's Skills on Fri Jun 16, 2017 1:03 pm

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I did the changes that you guys asked for.


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