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1 Skills on Tue Jun 13, 2017 12:44 pm


Skill Name: Desert Spada
Tier: 3
Type Offensive
Range: 30 Meters
Speed: 4
Description: Ryuichi conjures up a sand blade by making a cutting motion with his hand, making sand appear, extending it along the ground like a torpedo, cutting  anything in its path, including the very ground itself, through extreme and focused erosion created by the sand blade, which is strong enough to cut a man half way through their muscletissue depending on situation. The sand is 8 inches in width and extends for 40 meters. The sand has the potential to remove limbs if it hits an opponent in the correct place. The sand has dehydration effects fused with it.

Skill Name: Quicksand- Ground Zero
Tier: 4
Type Offensive
Range: 50 Meters Diameter
Speed: 5
Description: Ryuichi makes contact wit the ground with any part of his body, and uses his dehydration ability to dry out a huge area in front of  him, turning everything into a desert wasteland that's in front of him (3 meters) into a 50 meter diameter. If {This includes the underground 45 meters Deep}. When he does this, it also can cause the surrounding area in front of him to crumble and cave in, causing unfortunate foes to fall into the pit of sand which can break bones on impact. Due to this being a stronger version he can suck the moisture out of non-living objects and somewhat sentient things such as, stone, vegetation and similar  materials {except  metal}. However, Ryuichi can choose to make contact with the quicksand by producing it from his hand meaning instead of creating it 5 meters in front of him, he can touch the ground and cause the area in front of his hand in the same range to make a pit. This allows him to absorb the moisture out of anything.



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2 Re: Skills on Fri Jun 16, 2017 8:05 am

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Ryuichi wrote:

[spoiler="Tier 3 Skills"]
Skill Name: Desert Spada
Tier: 3
Type Offensive
Range: 40 Meters
Speed: 4
Description: Ryuichi conjures up a sand blade by making a cutting motion with his hand, making sand appear, extending it along the ground like a torpedo, cutting  anything in its path, including the very ground itself, through extreme and focused erosion created by the sand blade, which is strong enough to cut a man half way through their muscletissue depending on situation. The sand is 8 inches in width and extends for 40 meters. The sand has the potential to remove limbs if it hits an opponent in the correct place. The sand has dehydration effects fused with it.

Skill Name: Quicksand- Ground Zero
Tier: 4
Type Offensive
Range: - Need to add range
Speed: - Same idea as above
Description: Ryuichi makes contact wit the ground with any part of his body, and uses his dehydration ability to dry out a huge area in front of  him, turning everything into a desert wasteland that's in front of him (3 meters) into a 50 meter diameter. If {This includes the underground 45 meters Deep}. When he does this, it also can cause the surrounding area in front of him to crumble and cave in, causing unfortunate foes to fall into the pit of sand which can break bones on impact and due to how deep the pit is most fall to their death. Due to this being a stronger version he can suck the moisture both living and non-living objects such as vegetation, stone, and similar  materials {except  metal}. So anyone falling down the pit or standing on the sand will be forced to experience the dehydration effects.

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3 Re: Skills on Fri Jun 16, 2017 8:14 am

Fixed.c

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4 Re: Skills on Fri Jun 16, 2017 9:53 am

Orange.

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Please link your skillset when adding skills.

For the tier 4 skill I say you have to be making contact with and person for them to begin to take dehydration effects. You can ask another staff member, but I stand by what I said. Other than that I have no problems with this.


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5 Re: Skills on Fri Jun 16, 2017 6:02 pm

http://op-piratenation.forumotion.com/t7881-suna-suna-no-mi

The weaker T2 version could do the same but at a much weaker pace (non living things such as humans) So I assumed it would be cool

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6 Re: Skills on Sat Jun 17, 2017 10:15 am

Ryuichi wrote:[spoiler="Tier 3 Skills"]
Skill Name: Desert Spada
Tier: 3
Type Offensive
Range: 40 Meters 30m
Speed: 4
Description: Ryuichi conjures up a sand blade by making a cutting motion with his hand, making sand appear, extending it along the ground like a torpedo, cutting  anything in its path, including the very ground itself, through extreme and focused erosion created by the sand blade, which is strong enough to cut a man half way through their muscletissue depending on situation. The sand is 8 inches in width and extends for 40 meters. The sand has the potential to remove limbs if it hits an opponent in the correct place. The sand has dehydration effects fused with it.

Skill Name: Quicksand- Ground Zero
Tier: 4 spoiler says t3 skills, but this is tier 4 what's the truth
Type Offensive
Range: 50 Meters Diameter
Speed: 5
Description: Ryuichi makes contact wit the ground with any part of his body, and uses his dehydration ability to dry out a huge area in front of  him, turning everything into a desert wasteland that's in front of him (3 meters) into a 50 meter diameter. If {This includes the underground 45 meters Deep}. When he does this, it also can cause the surrounding area in front of him to crumble and cave in, causing unfortunate foes to fall into the pit of sand which can break bones on impact and due to how deep the pit is most fall to their death. Due to this being a stronger version he can suck the moisture both living and non-living objects such as vegetation, stone, and similar  materials {except  metal}. So anyone falling down the pit or standing on the sand will be forced to experience the dehydration effects. not sure this makes sense unless the person was actually apart of the ground u were touching. remove dehydration effects from this.

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7 Re: Skills on Sat Jun 17, 2017 10:16 am

also choose if it is break bones or die, cuz that's a far leap you're taking. maybe say depending on how they fall they can break bones instead

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8 Re: Skills on Sat Jun 17, 2017 2:54 pm

Fixed it

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9 Re: Skills on Sun Jun 18, 2017 7:51 pm

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Ryuichi wrote:
Skill Name: Desert Spada
Tier: 3
Type Offensive
Range: 30 Meters
Speed: 4
Description: Ryuichi conjures up a sand blade by making a cutting motion with his hand, making sand appear, extending it along the ground like a torpedo, cutting  anything in its path, including the very ground itself, through extreme and focused erosion created by the sand blade, which is strong enough to cut a man half way through their muscletissue depending on situation. The sand is 8 inches in width and extends for 40 meters. The sand has the potential to remove limbs if it hits an opponent in the correct place. The sand has dehydration effects fused with it.

Skill Name: Quicksand- Ground Zero
Tier: 4
Type Offensive
Range: 50 Meters Diameter
Speed: 5
Description: Ryuichi makes contact wit the ground with any part of his body, and uses his dehydration ability to dry out a huge area in front of  him, turning everything into a desert wasteland that's in front of him (3 meters) into a 50 meter diameter. If {This includes the underground 45 meters Deep}. When he does this, it also can cause the surrounding area in front of him to crumble and cave in, causing unfortunate foes to fall into the pit of sand which can break bones on impact. Due to this being a stronger version he can suck the moisture out of non-living objects and somewhat sentient things such as, stone, vegetation and similar  materials {except  metal}. However, Ryuichi can choose to make contact with the quicksand by producing it from his hand meaning instead of creating it 5 meters in front of him, he can touch the ground and cause the area in front of his hand in the same range to make a pit. This allows him to absorb the moisture out of anything.

Take out the Strike Part. Futura told you to take out the Dehydration effect, and you just added in that it absorbs all moisture out of anything. That seems like you are just trying to add it in again in a different way.

ONCE that is finished, this is 1/2 Approved

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10 Re: Skills on Sun Jun 18, 2017 8:43 pm

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11 Re: Skills on Mon Jun 19, 2017 10:16 am

Ryuichi wrote:
Skill Name: Desert Spada
Tier: 3
Type Offensive
Range: 30 Meters
Speed: 4
Description: Ryuichi conjures up a sand blade by making a cutting motion with his hand, making sand appear, extending it along the ground like a torpedo, cutting  anything in its path, including the very ground itself, through extreme and focused erosion created by the sand blade, which is strong enough to cut a man half way through their muscletissue depending on situation. The sand is 8 inches in width and extends for 40 meters. The sand has the potential to remove limbs if it hits an opponent in the correct place. The sand has dehydration effects fused with it.

Skill Name: Quicksand- Ground Zero
Tier: 4
Type Offensive
Range: 50 Meters Diameter
Speed: 5
Description: Ryuichi makes contact wit the ground with any part of his body, and uses his dehydration ability to dry out a huge area in front of  him, turning everything into a desert wasteland that's in front of him (3 meters) into a 50 meter diameter. If {This includes the underground 45 meters Deep}. When he does this, it also can cause the surrounding area in front of him to crumble and cave in, causing unfortunate foes to fall into the pit of sand which can break bones on impact. Due to this being a stronger version he can suck the moisture out of non-living objects and somewhat sentient things such as, stone, vegetation and similar  materials {except  metal}. However, Ryuichi can choose to make contact with the quicksand by producing it from his hand meaning instead of creating it 5 meters in front of him, he can touch the ground and cause the area in front of his hand in the same range to make a pit. This allows him to absorb the moisture out of anything.
take out dehydration for the third time. u keep trying to sneak in u can suck out moisture. this literally just needs to say, You dehydrate the ground around u in a #m diameter to create a pitfall. You can trying to vague in this moisture thing and ur just going to sit here and not make any progress with the skills. Matter of fact, just make a note blatantly saying this skill can't dehydrate or wither people.

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