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1Feitan B. Retero Empty Feitan B. Retero on Wed May 10, 2017 12:02 pm

Yung

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Yung

Feitan B. Retero 220907

Name:
Feitan B. Retero

Alias/Epithet:
Shadow Blade of Death

Race:
Human

Tier:
T2

Gender:
Male

Age:
22

Mode:
Hard

Occupation:
1) Weapon Specialist


Affiliation:
Free Agent

World Position:
N/A

General Appearance:
Feitan is a small, short man with slanted, sharp eyes and a medium length, middle parted haircut. He wears a black robe with a raised collar which covers the lower half of his face. There is a skull and crossbones logo printed on the front of his collar and on the back of his robe. He has faint pale skin, that is due to a certain disease that he has inherited from his mother; despite his many hours in the sun. He has 4 scars in total, one on his right palm, which was inflicted by a training accident with a blade. Another is on his left calf, which was a battle scar that goes from the bottom of his calf all the way to his knee. The final one is a burn mark, which is on his shoulder which was inflicted during an operation where he had to fight 100 enemies under the scorching sun.

Height:
"5'9 feet.

Weight: 130 lbs

Crew Tattoo Placement:
Lower back

Personality:
Feitan is a very talkative and likable man once you get to know him. Like most, he won't open up to you the moment you meet him but once he does open up, you'll witness many different phases of his personality. He tends to be caring, enjoys to be a pain in the ass, and also is always risk-taking.

His curiousness mostly always gets the best of him, due to him wanting  to explore so many different areas, and find so many different things. Feitan also is a very sympathetic man, making him unable to kill anyone that hasn't harmed him. He doesn't enjoy killing, only hurting the people that deserve to be hurt.

As said earlier, once you meet the man his is somewhat solitary; only till you've been bonded to him with emotion will he open up to you. He can be a very talkative person, and would talk on for hours upon hours if you become one of his dear friends.

On the other hand, his emotions are very controlled and he barely shows them. While he has been through a lot, Feitan never shows his true colors and has never shown anyone his true emotions. He prefers hiding them because for him, emotions evoke weakness, and anyone who constantly refers to them is a weakling.

Feitan is also a man that never lies. His inability to lie is one of his main features. Due to him supporting a certain ideal of justice, him lying would be hypocritical which is why he tends not too. He enjoys telling the truth, but if it's something too much to tell, he refrains from telling. He is a very optimistic young man as well, always telling his friends that things will get better and that there is always a way even in toughest situations. He is known as the one that can give his companions a sliver of hope, even when there was none to begin with.

Likes:
- Drinking,
- Sulking,
- Being Alone,
- Hurting people that he doesn't like.

Dislikes:
- Watermelon,
- Small chests,
- Weak enemies,
- Things being too easy.

History:
Feitan's story all began in the West Blue, where he was originally born. His mother and father were both marines, and they had taken a short vacation to accompany his birth. Yet, they weren't just normal marines but Cipher Pol agents. At a very young age, Feitan was raised up to be a marine, to fight crime, and to bring justice to the world.  

His mother didn't want to teach him martial arts, but his father intended to all the way through the 9 months of pregnancy. His father's will had transferred over to Feitan, one of the little things he got from him. Both his parents had loved Feitan a lot, and they wanted to never leave his side. Yet, the time came when they had to go back to work. Every night, Feitan would tell himself that they would come back and they would.

The start of his life was very succumb. He spent most of his life with the villager chief, raising Feitan when his parents weren't there. Due to their insanely difficult job, they were out most of the time and the ossan was like Feitan's second father. He spent most of his time with the ossan, and was raised by him all from how to eat properly, to how to farm crops at the right time.

When the two parents had come back on a humid summer night, just before Feitan was suppose to go to bed. Being a child of the age of 12 home alone, as the ossan left him at night, he decided whenever he wanted to go to bed. It was little over 1 am, and Feitan saw them. He saw both of his parents walk into his little village and get greeted by all the villagers that Feitan called his 'second family'.

As Feitan ran to hug his parents, a great misfortune had happened. Two large marine ships had docked up against the island and immediately began to shoot large cannon balls which had damaged the village. In a few seconds, the whole village had been erased, from the shop keep to all the villagers in it. He only saw two people there, shocked as well; his mother and father. He ran towards them, only to see them struggling with another Marine member in combat. Feitan would ask, "Why are you doing this! You're a Marine too!"

To a shocking regard, the marine would follow up with. "This is justice kid. Learn it, breath it, live it." Half of that sentence was the best advice given to him in his life. Yet, immediately after the marine said that he killed both of his parents. All Feitan could do was cry, he had no reason to live if his parents weren't here. The Marine would punch Feitan right above his left eye, resulting in his scar. As all 3 family members laid on the ground, the two parents on the brinks of death while the son being almost perfectly fine. His mother would place a hand on his cheek and tell him, "Show them real justice child" before dying.

When Grey woke up all he knew was that the Marines thought he was dead. He was sure that they had mistaken him being knocked out, for his parents whom were now dead. He didn't want to spend time wasting crying, since he could hear his father tell him; "Don't be a pussy, Feitan." Feitan spent the rest of his years on the island, in solitude perfecting his idea of justice and deciding to become a pirate. With that, he also perfected his own martial art form which he called the Ultimate Justice.

Throughout this time period, Grey was didn't meet anyone nor did he talk to anyone. With his village gone, all he could do was sit at his home and wait. His life consisted of farming, training and eating. He kept a very rigid body structure with all the rigorous training he had done throughout those 7 years. Now, he finally believes he has perfected Ultimate Justice and wants to finally leave home. His decision to become a pirate was due to the fact that he wanted to be the one to kill the marine that killed his parents. He had to avenge them.

Face Claim: Feitan | Hunter x Hunter

Bonus:
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Location:
Pirate Den
Fate Point Allocation:
- Devil's Meddle (-2)
- Born to Brawl (-1)
- Hawk's Eye (-1)
- Belionaire (-2)



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2Feitan B. Retero Empty Re: Feitan B. Retero on Wed May 10, 2017 4:33 pm

Kincaid

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Pirates

Kincaid
General appearance needs to be at least 450 words for T2 apps.

Also don't center everything. Copy the app format exactly. It's like that for a reason.

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3Feitan B. Retero Empty Re: Feitan B. Retero on Wed May 10, 2017 10:55 pm

Yung

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Yung
Given that I previously had a T2 character I was told that I didn't need to fully fill out the requirements. This is simply a revamp. I'm not applying for a T2 character, since my last OC was already one.


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4Feitan B. Retero Empty Re: Feitan B. Retero on Thu May 11, 2017 7:11 am

Kincaid

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Kincaid
Even if it's a revamp from a character before that General Appearance never should have been approved at Tier 2. Tier 1 sure, but Tier 2 should be more than 3 lines.

I'm not saying you have to get to the 450 we require for new Tier 2s, but give me something to work with.

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5Feitan B. Retero Empty Re: Feitan B. Retero on Thu May 11, 2017 9:00 am

Yung

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Yung
edited totes.


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6Feitan B. Retero Empty Re: Feitan B. Retero on Thu May 11, 2017 3:58 pm

Kincaid

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Kincaid
Eh...better.

Approved

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7Feitan B. Retero Empty Re: Feitan B. Retero on Fri May 12, 2017 6:23 am

The Jade Emperor

Revolutionary Captain
Revolutionary Captain

The Jade Emperor
You can't have two occupations without the hard worker perk, fix it then I'll re approve



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8Feitan B. Retero Empty Re: Feitan B. Retero on Fri May 12, 2017 6:26 am

Kincaid

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Pirates

Kincaid
My bad, was multitasking when I looked at this last night. Thanks for the save Jade.

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9Feitan B. Retero Empty Re: Feitan B. Retero on Fri May 12, 2017 6:29 am

Yung

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Yung
edited bump


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10Feitan B. Retero Empty Re: Feitan B. Retero on Sun May 14, 2017 2:29 pm

Kincaid

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Pirates

Kincaid
Goo d

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