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1Deployment II Empty Deployment II Sat May 13, 2017 4:00 pm

shootershoot

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https://op-piratenation.rpg-board.net/t7704-deployment
Knox:

Deployed with tickets to performance hall or wherever it is Junbei be performing at. Also is a Free Agent, so can't be tied to Marines/World Gov. One Week starts now.

2Deployment II Empty Re: Deployment II Sun May 14, 2017 3:14 pm

Siegfried

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Auburn Songbird - 'We're all caged bird's waiting for someone to hear our sound.'
SolarGravitas & VitasP.WingsBlitz SticksOto OtoOto Tier 3NitufiaSantufia
Nitufia - Tier 2Flight & FightCharlotte & Caprice WeaponsNico & Juju's Weapons

30 Minutes 1 Hour before the Performance began, On The Day Mavis Resurfaced



Momo Baton
Port Entrance

Next.” Caprice shouted, after screening the long line of personages that came in and out of the Iron Lotus’s docking port. Entrance to the Iron Islands, without being gunned down into Davy Jones Locker has only one entrance at this point, through the Port City of Momo Baton. Caprice was bummed that he couldn’t see his Captain’s Performance but all and all, protecting Momo Baton was his duty as of the Five Musical Directors to the Yonko. This check discriminated against no one, Momo Baton, Double Rose, Egypt and Asiatic are all covered in Camera Den Den Mushi which track every action across the island, even the island's  illegal entries. Needless to say, if anyone was entering the island, whether it be for Junbei's concert or for Revolutionary Weapons in Stock Trade, their only option would be to pass through the barricade checks at the port of Momo Baton. The wall that Caprice stood in front of was about forty feet in height, stocked with land canons and Naval Militia(100) looking from every angle and armed with basic iron rifle rounds. All of the those screened into the island, enter via a ten meter long drawbridge, single file, connecting the dock to port's wooden like surface. The line is then regulated up fifty stone crafted steps, separated about nine inches between each other, requiring big steps to climb, so even larger beings would have not much of a worry climbing. Interesting enough, the drawbridge is hoisted over a bed of Sea King's, I mean, the whole island was, the pulses kept them away from the island's bottom but sinking any deeper than about ten feet below the iron island's sonic waves, would leave you as bait for either Sea King's or the Songbird's Pet Wani.

Egypt, where Junbei's concert was being held was only accessible from Momo Baton(via Sea Train), the docking port, as Double Rose and Asiatic were not only closed to the public but heavily guarded by the militia, Junbei's Naval Generals and the Pacifista. However, neither of these where the main worry, at the gate, Junbei's trusted director personally screened every entrant into the island with Kenbunshoku Haki, analysing if each entrant's emotional and true reason on the island was what they proclaimed it to be, and those who didn't, well, they met a seriously grim fate. Honestly, what was to be expected, the island housed trade between Freedom Fighters and Revolutionary's across paradise, it'd be a death mission enter without a reason suitable to the Yonko's taste. Angled from every corner, Iron Lotus had a setup, that finally used it's maximum potential. In the past, no one would be foolish enough to enter Iron who wasn't a government official, so true security wasn't put in place until now. However with Junbei's new setup, the slightest error, sent the island into full alert. All of these checks are twelve hour shifts, and those who aren't screened are stuck on their vessel until the next shift commences, justice to those who enter the Iron Island without approval.


Meanwhile on Asiatic

Daisy, receives a call from her old contacts and probes from the Cipher Pol. “I thought I told you never to call this number again.” Daisy responded. “Ohoho… Information The Red King would be willing to pay for… What’s that my little fly?” Daisy inquired smiling. "I don't know much... Word from the Cipher Pol directors... is that... they're was recently a meeting into the issue of Iron Lotus... I don't know what they're talking about doing specifically, but that information should be enough." the Cipher Pol rat informed.   

BY  MIZO.❉ OF WW

3Deployment II Empty Re: Deployment II Sun May 14, 2017 4:29 pm

shootershoot

Free Agents
Free Agents

shootershoot
Empath allows the user to feel the emotions of people, not see their intentions. I can be angry at a person (emotion) and plan to yell at them (intention), but Empath would only communicate my feeling of anger.


Empath - The gift to perceive isn’t only the ability to perceive what’s in themselves, but also to perceive what’s in others. The Empath perk allows the user to feel the emotions of those who are around them as if they were there own. The ability to feel emotions can only be used on 3 person at a time at D-Rank, increasing +3 per every Haki Rank after D.
Note: Empath can only be taken as a Third or Fourth Perk.

I see u have a former Cipher Pol agent in ur ranks, but I don't see how that equates to you possessing knowledge on world government things that are 1) unrelated to her services and 2) took place while she was no longer in commission. 3) last the meeting was invite only and if she's no longer a Cipher Pol agent or nothing ICly is supplied to say she's present in the meeting for whatever reason, then I don't see how you have information about the Tres Iron Lotus meeting.

I have nothing IC to post, just gonna let my NPC cruise for the week.

4Deployment II Empty Re: Deployment II Sun May 14, 2017 4:40 pm

Siegfried

Pirates
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Siegfried
neverastain wrote:Empath allows the user to feel the emotions of people, not see their intentions. I can be angry at a person (emotion) and plan to yell at them (intention), but Empath would only communicate my feeling of anger.


Empath - The gift to perceive isn’t only the ability to perceive what’s in themselves, but also to perceive what’s in others. The Empath perk allows the user to feel the emotions of those who are around them as if they were there own. The ability to feel emotions can only be used on 3 person at a time at D-Rank, increasing +3 per every Haki Rank after D.
Note: Empath can only be taken as a Third or Fourth Perk.

I see u have a former Cipher Pol agent in ur ranks, but I don't see how that equates to you possessing knowledge on world government things that are 1) unrelated to her services and 2) took place while she was no longer in commission. 3) last the meeting was invite only and if she's no longer a Cipher Pol agent or nothing ICly is supplied to say she's present in the meeting for whatever reason, then I don't see how you have information about the Tres Iron Lotus meeting.

I have nothing IC to post, just gonna let my NPC cruise for the week.

Definition of Screened: evaluate or analyze (something) for its suitability for a particular purpose or application.

Seeing that you made no attempt to contest my screening process, you're spy is not knowledge I have, everyone who enters the island are subjected to a series of question, I never said, I'd know your intentions, I just mentioned the use of Kenbunshoku Haki in the screening process. Yeah, so, she would be in line to get into the island, Caprice will eventually 'screen her' and I'm not obligated to reveal said questions unless you have a fair chance of responding. I never directly referred to her either, but the concert hasn't started yet, so unless she's climbing the wall, at some point in this day, she's been through this gate check. So I'm going to debate this part.

Secondly, as for Daisy, I can understand if this part is questionable. First off, Daisy, if you read my back story and the arc that I ultimate reference for my revamp, was a scientist and member of the Cipher Pol. Her leaving the Cipher Pol is neither knowledge to World Government, so that in itself is unknown. How would she have access to information to do with Iron Louts? She worked their and guarded it before the invasion. Thirdly, it's the spy in the Cipher Pol Ranks, reporting to her, knowledge she's obtaining. Rear Admirals meeting certainly wouldn't be public knowledge, however, Tres Iron Lotus was World Government Turf, not Marine turf, so that would be directly under the World Government's jurisitiction, i.e. mainly, the Cipher Pol. But they failed, which I mentioned in my backstory, doesn't mean they'd be strictly scrapped from the planning, some form of Director Agent would present, trickling down the information down ranks through a regular agent sharing, is easy enough. But, I understand if this is voided.



Last edited by Lazarus King on Sun May 14, 2017 4:46 pm; edited 1 time in total (Reason for editing : Used a better definition of Screened for my point)

5Deployment II Empty Re: Deployment II Sun May 14, 2017 4:49 pm

shootershoot

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shootershoot
Lazarus King wrote:
Definition of Screened: test (a person or substance) for the presence or absence of a disease or contaminant.

Seeing that you made no attempt to contest my screening process, you're spy is not knowledge I have, everyone who enters the island are subjected to a series of question, I never said, I'd know your intentions, I just mentioned the use of Kenbunshoku Haki in the screening process. Yeah, so, she would be in line to get into the island, Caprice will eventually 'screen her' and I'm not obligated to reveal said questions unless you have a fair chance of responding. I never directly referred to her either, but the concert hasn't started yet, so unless she's climbing the wall, at some point in this day, she's been through this gate check. So I'm going to debate this part. was debating the usage of haki given the sentence it was referenced in had mention of both emotions and intentions. since we're on the same page, I got no issues. Interrogation thing is cool with me. if u wanna rp those questions out cool, if not cooler.

Secondly, as for Daisy, I can understand if this part is questionable. First off, Daisy, if you read my back story and the arc that I ultimate reference for my revamp, was a scientist and member of the Cipher Pol. Her leaving the Cipher Pol is neither knowledge to World Government, so that in itself is unknown. how would someone leaving a top secret agency like Cipher Pol, real world equivalence probs CIA not be known through attendance or lack thereof alone? How would she have access to information to do with Iron Louts? information about tres iron lotus vs information on tres iron lotus meeting. She worked their and guarded it before the invasion. Thirdly, it's the spy in the Cipher Pol Ranks, reporting to her, knowledge she's obtaining. Rear Admirals meeting certainly wouldn't be public knowledge, however, Tres Iron Lotus was World Government Turf, not Marine turf, so that would be directly under the World Government's jurisitiction, i.e. mainly, the Cipher Pol. But they failed, which I mentioned in my backstory, doesn't mean they'd be strictly scrapped from the planning, some form of Director Agent would present, trickling down the information down ranks through a regular agent sharing, is easy enough. But, I understand if this is voided. all of this is just talking about how she'd have tres iron lotus knowledge, but nothing about the meeting. Unless you actually rp with a spy in the topic or post to represent one's presence somewhere you intend to gather information, as i have with my historian, I don't see the claims of gathering information holding any ground. Because if that's the case then this topic is pointless if I can intel gather any topic without having to actually post ICly to show I or one of my NPCs was somewhere.

6Deployment II Empty Re: Deployment II Sun May 14, 2017 4:53 pm

Siegfried

Pirates
Pirates

Siegfried
neverastain wrote:
Lazarus King wrote:
Definition of Screened: test (a person or substance) for the presence or absence of a disease or contaminant.

Seeing that you made no attempt to contest my screening process, you're spy is not knowledge I have, everyone who enters the island are subjected to a series of question, I never said, I'd know your intentions, I just mentioned the use of Kenbunshoku Haki in the screening process. Yeah, so, she would be in line to get into the island, Caprice will eventually 'screen her' and I'm not obligated to reveal said questions unless you have a fair chance of responding. I never directly referred to her either, but the concert hasn't started yet, so unless she's climbing the wall, at some point in this day, she's been through this gate check. So I'm going to debate this part. was debating the usage of haki given the sentence it was referenced in had mention of both emotions and intentions. since we're on the same page, I got no issues. Interrogation thing is cool with me. if u wanna rp those questions out cool, if not cooler.

Secondly, as for Daisy, I can understand if this part is questionable. First off, Daisy, if you read my back story and the arc that I ultimate reference for my revamp, was a scientist and member of the Cipher Pol. Her leaving the Cipher Pol is neither knowledge to World Government, so that in itself is unknown. how would someone leaving a top secret agency like Cipher Pol, real world equivalence probs CIA not be known through attendance or lack thereof alone? How would she have access to information to do with Iron Louts? information about tres iron lotus vs information on tres iron lotus meeting. She worked their and guarded it before the invasion. Thirdly, it's the spy in the Cipher Pol Ranks, reporting to her, knowledge she's obtaining. Rear Admirals meeting certainly wouldn't be public knowledge, however, Tres Iron Lotus was World Government Turf, not Marine turf, so that would be directly under the World Government's jurisitiction, i.e. mainly, the Cipher Pol. But they failed, which I mentioned in my backstory, doesn't mean they'd be strictly scrapped from the planning, some form of Director Agent would present, trickling down the information down ranks through a regular agent sharing, is easy enough. But, I understand if this is voided. all of this is just talking about how she'd have tres iron lotus knowledge, but nothing about the meeting. Unless you actually rp with a spy in the topic or post to represent one's presence somewhere you intend to gather information, as i have with my historian, I don't see the claims of gathering information holding any ground. Because if that's the case then this topic is pointless if I can intel gather any topic without having to actually post ICly to show I or one of my NPCs was somewhere.

Valid. Si, I would see that being God Modding now in retrospect now that you've broken it down on the Daisy issue, voiding that part of my post with the Phone Call. I would like RP out the questioning process, so I'll give you time to type up your post and we'll go from their~ o.o//

7Deployment II Empty Re: Deployment II Sun May 14, 2017 8:43 pm

shootershoot

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Free Agents

shootershoot
As said before I'm not posting ICly. Just go on with your screening and I'll post when an actual response is needed.

8Deployment II Empty Re: Deployment II Mon May 15, 2017 12:26 am

Siegfried

Pirates
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Siegfried



Auburn Songbird - 'We're all caged bird's waiting for someone to hear our sound.'
SolarGravitas & VitasP.WingsBlitz SticksOto OtoOto Tier 3NitufiaSantufia
Nitufia - Tier 2Flight & FightCharlotte & Caprice WeaponsNico & Juju's Weapons

What made Caprice perfect for the job of running the port was neither his years of experience in being a con-artist nor his intelligence for being able to pick apart most losers lies, it was the fact that generally he had no faith in anyone period. Even in the beginning his relationship with Junbei was a means to an end, which had worked out pretty well for him. As he uttered ‘Next’ several personages passed through the screening process, nonetheless, his question progress was rigorous. A well known Freedom Fighter by the name of Rick Jackson approached the screening next, stepping off the bridge, all entries are then to advance towards the gate, as previously stated, Caprice stood in front of. The gate had a large metallic door, made of Titanium which clamped shut between entry. Rick stepped gingerly towards the entrance, along with his posse of five, each sitting in the chairs provided as Caprice began his series of questions. “Right. Welcome to Momo Baton. The Capital Island of the Iron Islands, I’m going to ask you five questions. Depending on your response, it’ll determine if you can make it onto the island, or if you’ll be shot on the spot. Question Number One-” Caprice would state before being interrupted by a nervous Rick.

“W-W-Wait! Wait a minute! Did you say shot!? How is that fair!? Isn’t this place suppose to be a haven for Freedom Fighters and Members of the Revolutionary Army?” Rick shouted. “Question Number One. How do you feel about Junbei Von Echo?” Caprice said bluntly. “The Red King!? I think it’s noble that he’d attack a government facility. He’s truly needed for the change me and my people want to bring about. Hence why-” Rick began to ramble on, Caprice interjecting, “Question Number Two, What is your reason for coming to Tres Iron Lotus?” Caprice inquired. “For the weapons of course! We came here to purchase our very own Sonic Weapon!? I heard with the right technology, we don’t even need to fight anymore, we can put our enemies to sleep with ease.” Rick shouted quickly, not wanted to be cut off by Caprice anymore. “Question Number Three, What do you believe your fated to do on these seas?” Caprice inquired. “Fate…” Rick began to ponder once again. “Isn’t that redundant, like I said, I want to liberate the people Karuruki.” Rick responded keenly. “Fourth Question. Are you aware that if you enter this island, for any other intention than stated, you’ll forfeit the ability to hear for the rest of your life?” Caprice stated, this fourth question's wording would usually be altered but generally had the same weight. “W-What kind of ludicrous question is that!?” Rick shouted nervous.

“Fourth Question. Are you aware, that if you enter this island, for any other intention than stated, you’ll forfeit the ability to hear for the rest of your life?” Caprice said, more crudely this time around. It was at this point that a swarm of emotions began to alter in the stomach's of Rick's men, before they were simply nervous, granted, everyone who went through this process aura reeked of some level of nervousness. However, it was after this question was asked, that one grunt in particular, his emotions began to run wild, he was no longer simply nervous but his aura leaked out not anxiety but fear. Gulping slightly, “I guess the rumours are true. He’s a callous man. Yes, I am aware.” Rick eventually responded. Jumping up from one of his seats, one of Rick’s grunts couldn’t handle the pressure of the questions being asked and blurted out their true reason for arriving on Iron Lotus. “It’s not the sonar weapons we are after! Surely Junbei would understand! Pacifista! Those robotic monsters that warded off the last Buster Call on this island-” before the man could complete his statement, Caprice raised his left hand, snapping his fingers, the Freedom Fighters were gunned down on the spot, rifle fire from over twenty Militia members rained down rifle slugs at Tier 4 Strength, all aiming towards the skull. Rick activated his Busoshoku Haki, guarding from the initial gunshots, giving Caprice enough time to extend his blade from beneath his sleeve, the moment his Haki faltered, Caprice lunged into mid-air, beheading six foot ten male’s head onto the floor. “Clean up!” Caprice shouted. Running from behind the gate, the bodies of the Freedom Fighters were pushed into the water below the bridge. As the grunts mopped up the blood, the General shouted.

“Next!” Caprice shouted, signalling for the next person inline to approach. This entrant seemed to be a woman, six foot nine ish, slightly shorter than Rick, and wore an eyepatch over her left-eye, a wolf skin around her waist. She was a fairly well endowed woman, her figure was quite notable, and much like before, she towered over Caprice but simple things like height never intimidated the brat. Retracting his blade, he prompted the woman to either take a seat or stand, as he had prior with Rick and his men, which in itself was a technique to determine an applicant’s level of nervousness. “Right. Welcome to Momo Baton. The Capital Island of the Iron Islands, I’m going to ask you five questions. Depending on your response, it’ll determine if you can make it onto the island, or if you’ll be shot on the spot. Question Number One.” Caprice said nonchalantly. “Question Number One. How do you feel about Junbei Von Echo?” Caprice said bluntly.

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BY  MIZO.❉ OF WW

9Deployment II Empty Re: Deployment II Mon May 15, 2017 3:11 pm

shootershoot

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(Empath Kenbunshoku Haki on a whole crew of pirates at a time and done 24/7 to screen anyone who enters the island?)

Knox was so busy talking to the person behind her in line she barely heard the person shout Next when it was her turn. Luckily the person gave her a friendly bump and gesture to proceed forward and she did. Whatever the protocol was, stand up, sit down, etc, etc. Knox would sit or stand and await questioning. When the first question was asked, she'd answer after taking a shallow moment to think of how not to deafen the interrogator with her life story. "I personally like him for the stagnancy he keeps out of the world."

10Deployment II Empty Re: Deployment II Mon May 15, 2017 7:21 pm

Siegfried

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Siegfried
OCC: Come on Poncho, I said 12 hour shifts, never said that I'm checking 24/7. But of course the militia works 24/7 outside of the checks. It used to be World Government facility. Secondly, The ability to feel emotions can only be used on 3 person at a time at D-Rank, increasing +3 per every Haki Rank after D. You gotta understand my NPC is a thief, he knows how criminals think, hence why I put him in charge of the port. You made Haki rules fam, my dude has S rank Haki. I can literally scan 15 People at this level. Scanning a crew of six is nothing. And they aren't pirates, they are Freedom Fighters, so technically Free Agents o.o




Auburn Songbird - 'We're all caged bird's waiting for someone to hear our sound.'
SolarGravitas & VitasP.WingsBlitz SticksOto OtoOto Tier 3NitufiaSantufia
Nitufia - Tier 2Flight & FightCharlotte & Caprice WeaponsNico & Juju's Weapons


"Do these people think I have all day?" Caprice thought, as the woman was seemingly in a world of her own as she chatted with a personage in the line. Attempting to lock onto to her aura, the next series of questions would determine her fate, not like he cared, she seemed to be some bimbo chick, who was clearly going through a midlife crisis, but that was an assumption, a rude one at that, and it was only based on the fact that the shift was almost coming to an end, and honestly, Caprice had enough of listening to these plebs reasons for coming to mooch of Junbei. As the woman approached, she seemed to not know either if she was going to sit or stand, irritated, the question was rattled off by Caprice. Her answer to the question was neither deep in thought nor very invested, it just seemed basic and common. Nonetheless, he continued onwards, the shallowness of her answer would be held as the base for the remainder of the screening process.  “Question Number Two, What is your reason for coming to Tres Iron Lotus?” Caprice inquired.

Noises began to trickle off from the Iron Island in the distance, the musician's were tuning their instruments. Within the crowd behind the woman, patrons who wanted to see Junbei got rowdy, clutching onto the extortionate stubs with immense glee. They began to chattered with each other, wondering how long the screening would take, if they would miss the concert, but even if they had qualms, the reality is that this was a pirates turf that not many of it's owner's kind gains grasp on, added to the fact making it to the Iron Islands costs a few million in the least. Nonetheless, Caprice continued with his questioning. Wondering if he could make it to the slot machines before closing time.  

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BY  MIZO.❉ OF WW

11Deployment II Empty Re: Deployment II Mon May 15, 2017 7:48 pm

shootershoot

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I'm not questioning ur ability to scan a whole crew. I questioning how realistic it is for someone to literally sit there for 12 hours a day and use haki to scan every person that enters your island. The NPC is Tier 2, meaning they have C-Rank Haki at best, only 75 Haki Stamina, and can scan 6 people at a time. Unless the app you linked for caprice is outdated. 15 activation fee (1 post), 10 upkeep (6 more post), 6 people per post/usage. 7 post x 6 people per post = 42 people total. And that's if you fully deplete the haki pool and face exhaustion. So basically after 42 people are screened everyone is crammed onto the ship until the next shift commences? or does the screening go on without haki for the rest of the 12 hours.

But then it's like u got a crowd behind my npc waiting to get screened, so it's just like huh? These things aren't adding up, cause each shift is supposed to be 12 hours but the screener can only last 7 post max/scan 42 people. Anyways.

IC:
Knox had nothing more to say sense the screener didn't give a remark about her answer. Not like she really desired one, she just wanted to get the whole interrogation over with. She was actually interested in seeing the Yonko's musical performance. At the next question she answered in the same fashion she answered the first. "To see Junbei Von Echo perform live and to see what kind of economic effect the trade here is having on the world."

12Deployment II Empty Re: Deployment II Mon May 15, 2017 8:13 pm

Siegfried

Pirates
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Siegfried
OCC: So, what your telling me is, that a Yonko, doesn't realistically put his most trusted crewmates to guard his island's main entrance. You think X Drake just popped up at dude's gate and no one was their to receive him? That's why I added the whole screening process in my island description for situations like this. I declare before hand that coming to my island isn't a walk in the park, why should it be? Not all turfs can be defended like this, it's just the nature of Iron Lotus.

Furthermore, I wasn't able to update my NPC's because I know how rough it is with staff now a days, that's why, I do all of my NPC's updates in my Characters updates, their Haki traits and everything. If that's a problem, I can start linking that information in my template. Caprice is actually Tier 5, all my core NPC's are. Which means that each post, I can screen 15 people a post. At 250 stamina, 23 x 15 = 345 people, if I just use Empath. I literally thought this out when doing it, I din't manifest these NPC's out of mid-air either, I paid my Beli for them v.v. I can screen 360 people over 24 posts, that's more than enough to encompass 12 hours. And that leaves Caprice with 12 hours everyday to do whatever he wants, let's assume he sleeps 8, four hours to do whatever. Plus, he's all about money and most of the revenue pass through Momo Baton. I've done nothing out of nature or of God-Modding, maybe, if your pushing for the thing with Dasiy which has been voided.

What's more unrealistic, is that your NPC, stuck in a conversation or not, literally had six men gunned down in front of her and she didn't bat an eye or showed any form emotion towards it. And as a spiritual being, I'd assume she'd value life?

Note: If you check my last post, I've been deducted Haki usage for my last few posts in my spoilers. Cheers.





Auburn Songbird - 'We're all caged bird's waiting for someone to hear our sound.'
SolarGravitas & VitasP.WingsBlitz SticksOto OtoOto Tier 3NitufiaSantufia
Nitufia - Tier 2Flight & FightCharlotte & Caprice WeaponsNico & Juju's Weapons


Another shallow response, however, this time, it made Caprice pause slightly. Reading her emotions something didn't quite add up for the lack of gusto in her response. "You want to see Junbei perform live eh... I can feel the trivial nature in your responses. Tickets for Junbei's concert cost an arm and a leg, your meaning to tell me you paid all that money to came here... to watch him perform... and not a bit of excitement entered in your heart when you said that." Caprice rattled off. "Economic effect? If it's money, I know what a greedy man's heart feels like... neither is adding up." Caprice responded. Suspicious, he waited a bit for the woman's retort, at the end of which he'd asked the third question, two feet separating the pipsqueak and the massive woman. “Question Number Three, What do you believe your fated to do on these seas?” Caprice inquired. At this stage, Caprice's suspicion had already been peaked, not enough to have her gunned down or draw a blade, but more curiosity in what was her real reason.
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BY  MIZO.❉ OF WW

13Deployment II Empty Re: Deployment II Mon May 15, 2017 8:42 pm

shootershoot

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Lmao I'm not saying to have someone screening is unrealistic. I was saying the manner at which it was done because your values aren't lining up was unrealistic. You're buggin cuz u supplied me un-updated information and i applied it to the topic is was supplied in? In turn I assumed the situation was unrealistic. Now that i've been shown what the real stuff is, it makes more sense. P.S. don't blame staff for u not updating your NPCs. Update your pages and they'll get checked when they can. Don't just not do it.

I'm not here to rp with you and fluff around. Spiritual being doesn't mean she'd cry about some strangers dying. If anything she'd be interested in your character more seeing as he'd kill people for answering a question wrong.

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Knox wasn't really interested in the screeners rebuttal towards her answer. Just because someone was present to see a musical performer didn't entail they were a fan. Given she said she was here to see the economy of the island too, seeing Junbei could very well just be a pass time or something to simply experience. Knox was a person who lived to experience things, so it did make sense in the end. But to assume just because one got tickets to see someone live, that they were head over heels and super excited to see them was kinda silly and was extremely closed minded of someone who should be open minded given the position they were given. Think about it, if you're closed minded you'd basically believe most of what anyone told you, so you'd be more inclined to believe a lie. But if you're open minded you consider the outside possibilities more, which isn't what the screener was currently doing. Perhaps that's the kind of people Junbei wanted to employ though.

Even with the money suspicions. Piracy was booming and obviously Knox was interested in the flow of money given she said she was here to see how the economy was. Pirates steal, loot, pillage, and people worried about economy have money. The fact she could have 15,000,000 Beli at the least to get here was a testament to the amount of riches she could potentially have. She could have been gifted the tickets or even stole them, the possibilities were almost limitless. Then the abilities the screener possessed didn't allow one to even feel out the type of person they were, simply read their emotions, so the comment made about the feeling of greed didn't even have much foundation.

Nonetheless Knox stayed dedicated and awaited the next question, kind of feeling a bit annoyed with how the screener was reacting to her questions. If there was an emotion to be felt, there it was disappointment. Was greed even an emotion? Not like Knox knew the screener possessed the power to read emotions, but that wasn't even important. If Knox did know, nothing would change with how she presented herself. She didn't have much to hide and regardless her answers were genuine to her character. She was interested in Junbei Von Echo and curiosity to see how the money here flowed, for she was a naturally curious individual. If this person could feel what hearts felt like, which was highly unlikely, then what they'd feel was genuine curiosity and no ill feelings. For that reason alone, Knox only had to answer the questions in a way that reflected such things and if she did and was still executed, the grounds of such a murder would be more-less faulty. Again that wasn't for her to worry about and she didn't, it didn't even cross her mind.

"My purpose on these seas are to understand the nature of man and understand this world as much as I can." Could this screener feel the heart of a liar? If so, such a thing wouldn't be felt in Knox, but then again like greed, lying wasn't an emotion, so it was mundane to even think such a thing. Funny how paranoia haunted the one with the license to murder, but not the one potentially at death's door.

14Deployment II Empty Re: Deployment II Mon May 15, 2017 9:33 pm

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OCC: Cute. First off, I never said she had a 'greedy heart', I said Caprice knows what a greedy heart feels like. Part of Greed is Desire, which is an emotion. I know greed isn't an emotion, it's a character trait, you don't know what Caprice meant by the statement about the greedy heart, the shade in your prologue is amusing. I'll get on updating my NPC's pages, pronto. And what's not suspicious about her answer? Her leading statement was, 'To see Junbei Von Echo perform live and to see what kind of economic effect the trade here is having on the world. It's not a wrong assumption if that's her leading prospect. And her emotions showed no form of interest, like none. Not curiosity, no disdain, no hate, no joy, shallowness, which is an emotion, reflects the oddness of her answer. Who feels nothing when responding, not even a bit of anxiety in exploring something new? not my fault your half assing the post, I expect better of your Pon, come' on' shun.  

shallow: to have of little depth.

I was saying the manner at which it was done because your values aren't lining up was unrealistic.

Taken From Caprice's Application wrote:
Caprice hates people, to the point where he only pretends to get along with them for his own good. His philosophy is garnered off of the principle such that, no one is genuinely honest and everyone is pretending as their best 'self'.


How this against his nature? because he's free willed doesn't mean he isn't loyal to Junbei? Caprice always stays where the money is, an island filled with goods coming in, sounds very realistic to me. Again, stop putting words in my mouth, I blamed no one, I clearly said, I did not update my NPC's pages, because I knew how much load it was, so I opted to use my update page instead. Furthermore, there's no rule that says I have to change my once approved app, if all I'm keeping track of is their statistical data. If they're is, show me. And I'll admit I'm wrong.

Look. If you feel my character's actions are unjust or his suspicions don't make sense, we can do this crow style, pull up a moderator to be the third party. No way I'm going to let PC's NPC just waltz into my island, furthermore, one that I see no application for, just a spoiler.






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At this stage, Caprice knew that the woman was growing weary of his questions, he could feel a sense of an annoyance, which allowed him to interpret so. Anyone would, honestly, being probed but unable to even know that it was occurring. However, her emotions reflected her thoughts, pondering more on the answers given, suddenly, she produced feelings of yearning, aura colours that can be aligned to curiosity. Why now, of all times, three questions in, after a series of shallow responses. Was she that annoyed with Caprice? Did she want the process over with? Even so, she was chatting away with strangers in a crowd, not seemingly paying attention to her surroundings and now, the toss up. Annoyance and Yearning. Maybe she really just wanted to enter? However, one thing about the Songbird's is that each of them have their own unique personality, Caprice's is hot headed in nature, he too was loosing patience for the flip floppy nature of the woman's emotions and her responses. Her recent response did whole true, no emotions to kill or ulterior motives. Caprice wasn't paranoid in the least, more exhausted from his shift, and even more exhausted with this woman. Freedom was the core of the Songbird's, if he wanted cut her throat, he would've by now. Unlike Juju and Charlotte, he's actually seen the evil of this world and he's not as fun loving as the others would love to be. This world is based on purely hard facts, the hard facts are as follows, she cared not about her purpose of coming, enough to answer dully. Then near the end, when called out on it, suddenly, like magic, she manifests emotions. However, he had no evidence to prove her guilty of no crime, nor did he care enough to form a gut feeling on the woman. "Fourth Question. Are you aware that if you enter this island, for any other intention than stated, you’ll forfeit the ability to hear for the rest of your life?” Caprice stated bluntly, with no intimidating aura or no form of pressure, it was a coldly placed and true statement. "Before you speak, i'll throw in this last question. Answer both or piss off." Caprice stated, slightly peeved. "All of your responses are vague. What is your affiliation?" Caprice inquired. "Freedom Fighter, Revolutionary or Misc? This is more for our records if anything else." Caprice concluded, signalling his men to open the gates. If she moved a step towards the gate before giving an answer that sustained Caprice's own curiosity, an attempt towards slashing her knee cap would occur. If uncontested, the stroke would occur at Tier 3 speeds, with Tier 3 power. If the answer was sufficient, she'd be permitted entrance into Lotus and Caprice would pickpocket her of purse, just for waisting his time with the fifth question.

(Using Pickpocket skill to steal 20% of player's beli)

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