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1Improvised Shogun Techniques Empty Improvised Shogun Techniques on Wed Aug 31, 2016 9:28 am

omeh

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http://op-piratenation.forumotion.com/t5521-one-sword-style-improvised-shogun-techniques

Tier 2:

Speed: 3

Tier 2 Skill Name: Ring of Fire
Tier 2 Skill Type: Kitsunebi-Ryu
Tier 2 Skill Range: 4 Meters
Tier 2 Skill Duration: 2 Post
Tier 2 Skill Description: The move ring of fire has an requirement before usage. The user's blade must be sheathed , as Unsheathing activates this technique. Upon drawing his blade, a small ring of fire with a diameter of 4 meters wide and 2 meters tall appears around the User. This creates existing fire in the area allowing +.5 Speed prior to the next fire skill.

Tier 2 Skill Name: Fire Serpent
Tier 2 Skill Type: Kitsunebi-Ryu
Tier 2 Skill Range: 15 Meters
Tier 2 Skill Duration: 1 Post
Tier 2 Skill Description: The flames of the user while connected gain the length of up to 15 meters and 7 meters in width. With the hilt of the blade the user controls the serpent to a certain extent.   Second Degree Burns

Tier 2 Skill Name: Fire Pillar
Tier 2 Skill Type: Kitsenubi-Ryu
Tier 2 Skill Range: 15 Meters
Tier 2 Skill Duration: 2 Posts
Tier 2 Skill Description: This move is due to the generation of flames from Jaden's blade. With a swing of his blade (best used with Ring of Fire) , he creates a thick funnel of flames 15 meters in width and 20 in height which utilizes as a defensive technique and offensive when dealing with multiple opponents. Second Degree Burns


Tier 2 Skill Name: --
Tier 2 Skill Type:  Kitsenubi-Ryu
Tier 2 Skill Range: Length of Blade
Tier 2 Skill Duration: --
Tier 2 Skill Description:--


Tier 3:

Speed: 4

Tier 3 Skill Name: Moltov
Tier 3 Skill Type: Kitsenubi-Ryu
Tier 3 Skill Range:  15 meters
Tier 3 Skill Duration: 2 Post
Tier 3 Skill Description: With the swing of his blade , he generates a thick wall of flames that creates motives to escape or corner an enemy. If touched the flames give off second degree burns. (Follows chart below)

Tier 3 Skill Name: Flamethrower
Tier 3 Skill Type: Kitsunebi-Ryu
Tier 3 Skill Range:  30 Meters
Tier 3 Skill Duration: 1 Post
Tier 3 Skill Description: From any position or stance , as long as the blade is pointed in the intended direction , the user can generate a funnel of flames 10 Meters wide / 30 In length that will cause Second Degree Burns.

Tier 3 Skill Name: --
Tier 3 Skill Type: Kitsenubi-Ryu
Tier 3 Skill Range: Length of Blade
Tier 3 Skill Duration: 1 Poste
Tier 3 Skill Description: --
 



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2Improvised Shogun Techniques Empty Re: Improvised Shogun Techniques on Wed Aug 31, 2016 11:34 am

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@omeh wrote:http://op-piratenation.forumotion.com/t5521-one-sword-style-improvised-shogun-techniques

Tier 2:

Speed: 3

Tier 2 Skill Name: Ring of Fire
Tier 2 Skill Type: Kitsunebi-Ryu
Tier 2 Skill Range: 4 Meters
Tier 2 Skill Duration: 2 Post
Tier 2 Skill Description: The move ring of fire has an requirement before usage. The user's blade must be sheathed , as Unsheathing activates this technique. Upon drawing his blade, a small ring of fire with a diameter of 4 meters wide and 2 meters tall appears around the User. This creates existing fire in the area allowing +1 Speed prior to the next fire skill.

is this ring around you or your sword?

Tier 2 Skill Name: Eruption
Tier 2 Skill Type: Kitsunebi-Ryu
Tier 2 Skill Range: 15 Meters
Tier 2 Skill Duration: 1 Post
Tier 2 Skill Description: Jaden activates this skill by thrusting his blade into the ground , and ignites his blades in a powerful volume of flames. These flames are directed into the ground causing the floor area to crack and crumble causing -1 in Speed to the opponent. Second Degree Burns

Tier 2 Skill Name: Fire Pillar
Tier 2 Skill Type: Kitsenubi-Ryu
Tier 2 Skill Range: 15 Meters
Tier 2 Skill Duration: 2 Posts
Tier 2 Skill Description: This move is due to the generation of flames from Jaden's blade. With a swing of his blade (best used with Ring of Fire) , he creates a thick funnel of flames 15 meters in width and 20 in height which utilizes as a defensive technique and offensive when dealing with multiple opponents. Second Degree Burns


Tier 2 Skill Name: Forge
Tier 2 Skill Type:  Kitsenubi-Ryu
Tier 2 Skill Range: Length of Blade
Tier 2 Skill Duration: 1 Post | Upkeep
Tier 2 Skill Description: Being able to manifest flames to a certain extent Jaden has suppressed the flames heat into the interior of the blade only heating it in a sense. This allows the user to cut up to +1 Tier more on the destruction chart , and completely destroy anything below it. Second Degree burns


Tier 3:

Speed: 4

Tier 3 Skill Name: Ring of Fire
Tier 3 Skill Type: Scorpion
Tier 3 Skill Range:  Length of Blade - 20 Meters
Tier 3 Skill Duration: 1 Post
Tier 3 Skill Description: Scorpion utilizes the point of the blade to act as a scorpion's stinger that pierces the enemy thrusting their blade through flesh and bone. The user is able to generate flames while the blade is in the body to burn the internal content of their body. Second Degree Burns | Could be Fatal

Tier 3 Skill Name: Flamethrower
Tier 3 Skill Type: Kitsunebi-Ryu
Tier 3 Skill Range:  30 Meters
Tier 3 Skill Duration: 1 Post
Tier 3 Skill Description: From any position or stance , as long as the blade is pointed in the intended direction , the user can generate a funnel of flames 20 Meters wide / 30 In length that will cause Second Degree Burns.

Tier 3 Skill Name: Loyalty to the Emperor
Tier 3 Skill Type: Kitsenubi-Ryu
Tier 3 Skill Range: 20 Meters
Tier 3 Skill Duration: 2 Posts | Upkeep
Tier 3 Skill Description: With deep connections to his blade, Jaden's blade reacts to danger around him while this skill is active. It acts like Gaara's sand from Naruto , the flames react in a defensive manner blocking projectiles and other forms of attacks up to 20 meters , through burn damage

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3Improvised Shogun Techniques Empty Re: Improvised Shogun Techniques on Wed Aug 31, 2016 11:58 am

omeh

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Ring of Fire is around me & Loyalty of the Emperor denied?


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4Improvised Shogun Techniques Empty Re: Improvised Shogun Techniques on Wed Aug 31, 2016 2:25 pm

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The speed values in the tier 2's should be .5, no?

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5Improvised Shogun Techniques Empty Re: Improvised Shogun Techniques on Wed Aug 31, 2016 3:40 pm

omeh

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I believed that it was +.5 each tier up seeing as it was .5 at tier 1


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6Improvised Shogun Techniques Empty Re: Improvised Shogun Techniques on Wed Aug 31, 2016 3:47 pm

Burdmane

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I was told there were no increases for tier 1 skills.

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7Improvised Shogun Techniques Empty Re: Improvised Shogun Techniques on Wed Aug 31, 2016 4:56 pm

omeh

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omeh
Can you provide feedback for everything else and I'll wait for pon to look at it


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8Improvised Shogun Techniques Empty Re: Improvised Shogun Techniques on Wed Aug 31, 2016 5:02 pm

Burdmane

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Sure.

I agree with Clar's opinion of Loyalty to the emperor. You'd need to be burning the things that hit you instantaneously, unless you're saying you have solid enough fire to block things physically. If you wanna make it ok, you should provide clear tierings and examples of what it can defend against.

I feel as if flamethrower should be less wide, 10 meters instead for instance.

How does eruption reduce the enemy's speed? By affecting their footing? You should understand that this is not guaranteed, as there are many different ways to move.

Your first t3 skill is named the same as your first t2 skill. I'm assuming this is a mistake?

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9Improvised Shogun Techniques Empty Re: Improvised Shogun Techniques on Thu Sep 01, 2016 2:06 pm

omeh

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Made some edits , anyone looking to review


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10Improvised Shogun Techniques Empty Re: Improvised Shogun Techniques on Thu Sep 01, 2016 5:57 pm

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Loyalty of the Emperor still kinda jacked if you ask me. I think you should start with partial blocks and move up. Being immune to so many things from a T3 skill is kinda OD.


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11Improvised Shogun Techniques Empty Re: Improvised Shogun Techniques on Thu Sep 01, 2016 6:03 pm

omeh

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Fixed ugh


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12Improvised Shogun Techniques Empty Re: Improvised Shogun Techniques on Thu Sep 01, 2016 6:04 pm

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We love you too. 1/2


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13Improvised Shogun Techniques Empty Re: Improvised Shogun Techniques on Sun Sep 04, 2016 11:02 am

omeh

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Bump moe


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14Improvised Shogun Techniques Empty Re: Improvised Shogun Techniques on Sun Sep 04, 2016 1:26 pm

Isabella

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@omeh wrote:http://op-piratenation.forumotion.com/t5521-one-sword-style-improvised-shogun-techniques

Tier 2:

Speed: 3

Tier 2 Skill Name: Ring of Fire
Tier 2 Skill Type: Kitsunebi-Ryu
Tier 2 Skill Range: 4 Meters
Tier 2 Skill Duration: 2 Post
Tier 2 Skill Description: The move ring of fire has an requirement before usage. The user's blade must be sheathed , as Unsheathing activates this technique. Upon drawing his blade, a small ring of fire with a diameter of 4 meters wide and 2 meters tall appears around the User. This creates existing fire in the area allowing +1 Speed prior to the next fire skill.

.5 increase not a full tier

Tier 2 Skill Name: Fire Serpent
Tier 2 Skill Type: Kitsunebi-Ryu
Tier 2 Skill Range: 15 Meters
Tier 2 Skill Duration: 1 Post
Tier 2 Skill Description: The flames of the user while connected gain the length of up to 15 meters and 7 meters in width. With the hilt of the blade the user controls the serpent to a certain extent.   Second Degree Burns

Tier 2 Skill Name: Fire Pillar
Tier 2 Skill Type: Kitsenubi-Ryu
Tier 2 Skill Range: 15 Meters
Tier 2 Skill Duration: 2 Posts
Tier 2 Skill Description: This move is due to the generation of flames from Jaden's blade. With a swing of his blade (best used with Ring of Fire) , he creates a thick funnel of flames 15 meters in width and 20 in height which utilizes as a defensive technique and offensive when dealing with multiple opponents. Second Degree Burns


Tier 2 Skill Name: Forge
Tier 2 Skill Type:  Kitsenubi-Ryu
Tier 2 Skill Range: Length of Blade
Tier 2 Skill Duration: 1 Post | Upkeep
Tier 2 Skill Description: Being able to manifest flames to a certain extent Jaden has suppressed the flames heat into the interior of the blade only heating it in a sense. This allows the user to cut up to +1 Tier more on the destruction chart , and completely destroy anything below it. Second Degree burns .5 increase not a full tier


Tier 3:

Speed: 4

Tier 3 Skill Name: Moltov
Tier 3 Skill Type: Kitsenubi-Ryu
Tier 3 Skill Range:  15 meters
Tier 3 Skill Duration: 2 Post
Tier 3 Skill Description: With the swing of his blade , he generates a thick wall of flames that creates motives to escape or corner an enemy. If touched the flames give off second degree burns. (Follows chart below)

Tier 3 Skill Name: Flamethrower
Tier 3 Skill Type: Kitsunebi-Ryu
Tier 3 Skill Range:  30 Meters
Tier 3 Skill Duration: 1 Post
Tier 3 Skill Description: From any position or stance , as long as the blade is pointed in the intended direction , the user can generate a funnel of flames 10 Meters wide / 30 In length that will cause Second Degree Burns.

Tier 3 Skill Name: Conqueror's Forge
Tier 3 Skill Type: Kitsenubi-Ryu
Tier 3 Skill Range: Length of Blade
Tier 3 Skill Duration: 1 Poste
Tier 3 Skill Description: Adding more temperature to the compression of flames within the blade which causes it to be heated ,  instead of it only destroying one tier higher it destroys up to two tiers higher on the destruction chart. one tier increase not 2
 

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