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1 Amazonian Princess on Sun Aug 14, 2016 12:29 pm

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Character Name: Karayan Le Fay
Link to Approved Character Karayan
Affiliation: Marines
Crew: TBD
Occupation: Weapon Specialist {Primary} | Doctor {Secondary}
Tier: 2
Bounty/Reputation: 0
World Position: N/A
Fate Perks:

  • Race Change - Allows you to register a Character that is not human. (1)
  • Cursed Hands - Grants passage to wield pieces of Cursed Equipment. (1)
  • Hard Worker - You can possess a Secondary Occupation. (1)
  • Kami Haki (Haoshoku) - Grants you access to Kami Haki. (3)


Fate Points: 0

Capabilities
Primary: Durability
Secondary: Strength
Non-Prioritized: Speed & Perception

Stamina: 250

Haki: D
Haoshoku Haki:

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  • Presence of the Emperor - When the Emperor or Empress the environment even struggles with the gravity of their existence. Presence of the Emperor when used affects the structural integrity of materials, causing them to subject to the will of the user. Breaking and crushing objects with their willpower alone in a 100 meter circumference, Presence of the Emperor has no effect on organic material. As the user’s Haki Rank grows, so also does the type of material Presence of the Emperor can effectively break.

    Presence of the Emperor Effect on Materials:

    • D-Rank
      Fully Breaks: Stock Wood
      Partially Breaks: Plastic




  • Conqueror’s Wrath - Emitting an invisible wave of their own willpower as a wave of terror, this perk renders the user is capable of stunning or knocking out opponents with a weaker will (lower EP) than themselves in a 30 meter circumference around themselves. However Conqueror’s Wrath starts out indiscriminate, affecting everyone around the user within the perk’s radius, disregarding foes and allies alike. Every rank after D the user can choose for the ability to not affect up to 3 additional people. Regardless, being stunned or knocked out can be resisted if the target is focused on the user. However if the user's EP is at least 20% above the target's EP, they will be knocked out regardless.


Kami Haki:

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  • Princesses Spite - Emitting her willpower in a veil of vantablack around her in a wave of subjection emitted from within. This perk causes objects and people to curve around the willpower induced black aura, avoiding the user fully, as none or nothing is meant to touch nobility without permission. Because it's curving around her, items would still have their same power when colliding with another object/person, and a moving person going off-balance from the pull due to their momentum. At D-Rank, Princesses Spite can cover no more than 2 meters, though it can be made to shrink smaller to the point where it's only just above her skin. However per every additional Haki Rank after D, Princesses Spite increases in size by 2 meters. Additionally, this perk at D-Rank is equivalent to a T1 defensive skill, increasing a Tier in defensive efficiency every other Haki rank past D, capping at T3 at SS-Rank. When Princesses Spite (the black aura) is struck by a Skill higher than it can defend, the Skill passes thru the defense, as well as puts the perk on cooldown for 3 post, costing the 30 Haki Stamina to reactivate.

  • Queen’s Suppression - Women often times take their anger, frustrations, even joyous emotions, out thru more passive aggressive means and Queen’s Suppression is no different. The reason the epitaph of “The Dark One” exist, is because of this Perk. Emitting her willpower in  a aura of vantablack around her, generating a deep feeling of immense despair and hopelessness as the aura washes over them as it expands (the aura subsides when reaching it's max distance). Queen’s Suppression at D-Rank encompasses a 10 meter circumference around Karayan, though no one is immune from the effects of the perk (excluding herself). As her Haki Rank increases, the circumference of Queen’s Suppression increases another 10 meters (Capping at 100m at SS), as well as allowing her to make 2 people immune to the effect’s of it (capping at 12 at SS). However, if the target(s) EP is 10% or more above Karayan's, they are unaffected by all facets of Queen's Suppression.


Devil Fruit: N/A

Skills
Link to Primary Skill Set: -
Link to Secondary Skill Set: -
Link to Tertiary Skill Set: -

Possessions
Weapons: -
Armor: -
Ships: -
Pets: -
NPCs: -
Grunts: -

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Completed Topics -
Completed Topics This Tier -



Last edited by Gypsy on Sun Feb 12, 2017 4:16 am; edited 37 times in total

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2 Re: Amazonian Princess on Sun Aug 14, 2016 1:17 pm

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app roved


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3 Re: Amazonian Princess on Tue Aug 23, 2016 1:30 am

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Updated with daggers.


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4 Re: Amazonian Princess on Tue Aug 23, 2016 9:46 am

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uh-huh


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5 Re: Amazonian Princess on Sat Oct 15, 2016 11:19 am

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Updated. This was Waffles old page.


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6 Re: Amazonian Princess on Sat Oct 15, 2016 2:17 pm

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sees good

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7 Re: Amazonian Princess on Sat Oct 15, 2016 3:30 pm

Hao itself is a 4 so kami hao only being 2 makes no sense due to its superiority in haki and the fact that its a 2 point increase over its other haki counterparts. So Kami Hao is being made 3 points to compensate because as is now it makes little sense. Its a good thing ya got that extra point XD

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8 Re: Amazonian Princess on Sat Oct 15, 2016 9:23 pm

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Tis fine. Edited.


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9 Re: Amazonian Princess on Sun Oct 16, 2016 12:06 pm

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All checks out, including the Kami Haki perk

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10 Re: Amazonian Princess on Sun Oct 16, 2016 7:06 pm

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Updated.

C Rank and 2nd Haki Perk Purchase

Link to the purchased spear and armor is linked in the update itself.


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11 Re: Amazonian Princess on Sun Oct 16, 2016 11:20 pm

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ur custom haki perk should work as a defensive skill does. meaning at D-Rank it works like a t1 defensive skill, so on so forth.


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12 Re: Amazonian Princess on Sun Oct 16, 2016 11:28 pm

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Updated and thangs.


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13 Re: Amazonian Princess on Sun Oct 16, 2016 11:29 pm

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b ool


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14 Re: Amazonian Princess on Mon Oct 17, 2016 5:03 am

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Added the 2nd Kami Haki Perk.

Queen’s Suppression - Women often times take their anger, frustrations, even joyous emotions, out thru more passive aggressive means and Queen’s Despair is no different. The reason the epitaph of “The Dark One” exist, is because of this Perk. Emitting her willpower in vantablack circumference around her. Within this domain, it creates a “deprivation tank” of sorts, killing the five senses and only leaving the spiritual sense. Within the darkness, the location of where someone is while they’re within it is thrown off, as well as their perception of time when under the veil of vantablack. Queen’s Suppression at D-Rank encompasses a 20 meter circumference around Karayan, though no one is immune from the effects of the perk (including herself). As her Haki Rank increases, the circumference of Queen’s Suppression increases another 20 meters (Capping at 120m at SS), as well as allowing her to make 3 people immune to the effect’s of it (capping at 18 at SS). Just as a Queen can uplift her people, she can also cast them in a pit of despair.


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15 Re: Amazonian Princess on Mon Oct 17, 2016 5:16 am

Hmm, so how does your will power strip away the five senses of those around her. With Will power being the driving force here the ability to strip away all but spiritual sense doesn't seem to fit in to that category to me. I think those with higher will power would also be immune because they have a stronger will a stronger defining factor. To be this doesn't seem like it fits in with the theme of willpower at all.

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16 Re: Amazonian Princess on Mon Oct 17, 2016 5:24 am

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Tweaked it a bit. It no longer kills the senses, instead makes people feel despair and hopelessness. Kinda like how Queen's Scorn makes people scared, and whatnot. More willpower-esque.


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17 Re: Amazonian Princess on Mon Oct 17, 2016 5:50 am

Princesses Spite - Emitting her willpower in a veil of vantablack around her in a wave of subjection emitted from within. This perk causes objects and people to curve around her body, avoiding the user fully, as none or nothing is meant to touch nobility without permission. Because it's curving around her, items would still have their same power when colliding with another object/person, and a moving person going off-balance from the pull due to their momentum. At D-Rank, Princesses Spite can cover no more than 2 meters, though it can be made to shrink smaller to the point where it's only just above her skin. However per every additional Haki Rank after D, Princesses Spite increases in size by 2 meters. Additionally, this perk at D-Rank is equivalent to a T1 defensive skill, increasing a Tier in defensive efficiency with every additional rank past D, capping at T6 at SS-Rank.

This is doing a bit much, The curvingis fine though i'd like some explanation on how something like a sword, or a bullet shot at high speed curves around you. Especially at D-rank, whats the limit? Does it work solely like durability and that if i were to use a tier 2 it would shatter this hao and then have to go in to a cooldown? But then it also gives you an additonal durability point? is this to the curving effect or to your body, because if its to your body how does your body become more durable if nothings ever hitting it? a point per haki rank also is iffy especially when the durability stat itself only gives it per 2 tiers/. So im issuing the same here, an aditional tier defence every 2 haki letter ranks.

Queen’s Suppression - Women often times take their anger, frustrations, even joyous emotions, out thru more passive aggressive means and Queen’s Despair is no different. The reason the epitaph of “The Dark One” exist, is because of this Perk. Emitting her willpower in vantablack circumference around her, the darkness causes the victim(s) to feel immense despair and hopelessness, as their eyes lay upon what seems to be infinite darkness. Within the darkness, perception of where one is, as well as keeping up with time accurately can occur (simply due to it being so black). Queen’s Suppression at D-Rank encompasses a 20 meter circumference around Karayan, though no one is immune from the effects of the perk (including herself). As her Haki Rank increases, the circumference of Queen’s Suppression increases another 20 meters (Capping at 120m at SS), as well as allowing her to make 3 people immune to the effect’s of it (capping at 18 at SS). However, if the target(s) EP is 20% or more above Karayan's, they are unaffected by all facets of Queen's Suppression.

This one im fine with, though i think only granting immunity to two people each letter rank, while starting with a low 10m's and rising ten each letter rank capping at 100m's instead.


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18 Re: Amazonian Princess on Mon Oct 17, 2016 5:58 am

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This is doing a bit much, The curvingis fine though i'd like some explanation on how something like a sword, or a bullet shot at high speed curves around you. Especially at D-rank, whats the limit? Does it work solely like durability and that if i were to use a tier 2 it would shatter this hao and then have to go in to a cooldown? But then it also gives you an additonal durability point? is this to the curving effect or to your body, because if its to your body how does your body become more durable if nothings ever hitting it? a point per haki rank also is iffy especially when the durability stat itself only gives it per 2 tiers/. So im issuing the same here, an aditional tier defence every 2 haki letter ranks.

The defensive portion is the only aspect to effect skills. Therefore if you used a higher ranked skill than my Haki Rank, then it would just ignore the Haki and hit her wherever. It doesn't increase durability in the slightest, objects are just pulled around the aura (depending on how far it has expanded) and exits the "orbit" of the Haki at any point. Since there is a limit to how much stamina we have, can't use it indefinitely, so a Marksman would have more bullets than I do Haki Stamina, so it's not build ruining either lol. I can go every other rank, prolly shouldn't be as strong potentially as Buso Haki anyway.


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19 Re: Amazonian Princess on Mon Oct 17, 2016 6:05 am

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Edited.

- Added Cooldown to Princesses Spite if a skill breaks it
- Lessened Princesses Spite defensive capability/growth
- Changed the immunity to Haki Rank level on Queen's Despair


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20 Re: Amazonian Princess on Mon Oct 17, 2016 6:28 am

much more comfortable

1/2ing these passives

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21 Re: Amazonian Princess on Mon Oct 17, 2016 7:18 pm

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Princesses Spite - Emitting her willpower in a veil of vantablack around her in a wave of subjection emitted from within. This perk causes objects and people to curve around the willpower induced black aura, avoiding the user fully, as none or nothing is meant to touch nobility without permission. Because it's curving around her, items would still have their same power when colliding with another object/person, and a moving person going off-balance from the pull due to their momentum. At D-Rank, Princesses Spite can cover no more than 2 meters, though it can be made to shrink smaller to the point where it's only just above her skin. However per every additional Haki Rank after D, Princesses Spite increases in size by 2 meters. Additionally, this perk at D-Rank is equivalent to a T1 defensive skill, increasing a Tier in defensive efficiency every other Haki rank past D, capping at T3 at SS-Rank. When Princesses Spite (the black aura) is struck by a Skill higher than it can defend, the Skill passes thru the defense, as well as puts the perk on cooldown for 3 post. note that the defenses don't refresh unless the activation cost is paid in full again

Queen’s Suppression - Women often times take their anger, frustrations, even joyous emotions, out thru more passive aggressive means and Queen’s Despair is no different. The reason the epitaph of “The Dark One” exist, is because of this Perk. Emitting her willpower in vantablack circumference around her, the darkness causes the victim(s) to feel immense despair and hopelessness, as their eyes lay upon what seems to be infinite darkness. remove this blinding effect, has nothing to do with haoshoku haki. sure there can be an inital wave of black aura or w.e., but no sustained darkness or w.e. Within the darkness, perception of where one is, as well as keeping up with time accurately can occur (simply due to it being so black). Queen’s Suppression at D-Rank encompasses a 10 meter circumference around Karayan, though no one is immune from the effects of the perk (including herself). As her Haki Rank increases, the circumference of Queen’s Suppression increases another 10 meters (Capping at 100m at SS), as well as allowing her to make 2 people immune to the effect’s of it (capping at 12 at SS). However, if the target(s) EP is 20% 10% or more above Karayan's, they are unaffected by all facets of Queen's Suppression.


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22 Re: Amazonian Princess on Tue Oct 18, 2016 2:01 am

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23 Re: Amazonian Princess on Tue Oct 18, 2016 2:24 am

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24 Re: Amazonian Princess on Sat Feb 11, 2017 10:12 am

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25 Re: Amazonian Princess on Sat Feb 11, 2017 10:22 am

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