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1 Kyoto S. Rikaru Updates on Sat Jun 04, 2016 5:06 pm

General Info

Character Name: Kyoto S. Rikaru
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Affiliation: Marine
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Occupation: Martial Artist
Tier: 3
Bounty/Reputation: 5,240,000

World Position: Rear Admiral

Specs

Hand to Hand (Speed Based): 4
Devil Fruit (2): 4
Marksmanship: 0
Melee Weaponry: 0

Haki: A

Stamina: 400

Skills:

Link to Primary Skill Set: Bari Bari no Mi
Link to Secondary Skill Set: 
Link to Tertiary Skill Set: 
Haki Aura: Conqueror's Haki
Devil Fruit: Bari Bari no Mi

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Completed Topics This Tier-1
Completed Topics This Tier-2



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2 Re: Kyoto S. Rikaru Updates on Mon Jun 13, 2016 7:47 pm

Current Tier 1
Oceans RP'd In: West Blue
# of Task Completed: 3(1 being an event task. She also did an arc making the count 6)
# of Other Topics Completed: None
Character Development Notes: Every since becoming a marine Kyoto has done a lot of courageous things, but most of her doings would get known upon being relocated to the 80th Branch where she stopped a Pirate Captain from trying to take over. Not only days after she would participate in a tournament made for new leiutenants. She easily won her way through and hearned herself the title of top Lieutenant on 80th Branch. Not only a couple days after she was asked by the captain of 80th Branch himself to execute an assasination of a crew of pirates that were nearing the island. Deciding that she had to listen to him she did the mission excelling in it quickly taking over the ship and destroying it. Being congradulated on good work she was given a few days off. Only a week after pirates would sneak on the 80th Branch and successfully set fire to a large housing building. 100s of people would be dead if it wasn't for Kyoto and her devil fruit powers. The captain deciding that Kyoto wasn't an ordinary person he told her to go to more branches of the goverment and work her way up to the top. (Joining blood's crew)

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3 Re: Kyoto S. Rikaru Updates on Mon Jun 13, 2016 8:18 pm

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4 Re: Kyoto S. Rikaru Updates on Thu Jun 16, 2016 10:46 am

Got Conquerors Haki from Haki Roll so adding that

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5 Re: Kyoto S. Rikaru Updates on Thu Jun 16, 2016 3:49 pm

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6 Re: Kyoto S. Rikaru Updates on Sun Jun 26, 2016 8:11 am

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7 Re: Kyoto S. Rikaru Updates on Fri Jul 01, 2016 10:21 pm

k, gonna put all my spec points into hth speed based since i just revamped my char

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8 Re: Kyoto S. Rikaru Updates on Fri Jul 01, 2016 10:24 pm

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Your template shouldn't mess with the borders of the site, remove it or fix the coding. edit ur updates accordingly to the changes, approved.


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9 Re: Kyoto S. Rikaru Updates on Fri Jul 01, 2016 10:45 pm

urm sorry. i meant power based

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10 Re: Kyoto S. Rikaru Updates on Fri Jul 01, 2016 10:46 pm

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then make ur updates reflect that .-.


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11 Re: Kyoto S. Rikaru Updates on Sat Jul 02, 2016 8:48 am

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13 Re: Kyoto S. Rikaru Updates on Sun Jul 03, 2016 1:04 pm

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14 Re: Kyoto S. Rikaru Updates on Mon Jul 04, 2016 12:46 pm

Current Tier 2
Oceans RP'd In: West Blue
# of Task Completed: 3(1 being an event task. She also did an 2 arcs making the count 9)
# of Other Topics Completed: 4 (2 of which were a topic capturing PCs)
Character Development Notes:


After the captain decided that Kyoto was far to powerful to be stationed as an ensign forever, she was ordered to go explore the world and find a crew of her own. Seeing as she didn’t have anywhere in particular to go she headed to Yotsuba Island, a marine owned island. Quickly, she would rise through the ranks on the island. A crew of Fishman led by the Infamous pirate from the Grandline Davy Jones, had come to terrorize the island in hopes to destroy it and bring it under his rule. Though, Kyoto was not going for any of that. With the help of other marines she easily took over the crew, defeating many of them before a final showdown with Davy Jones himself would erupt. Using her newly made move that was pure speed, being able to move at speeds even faster than a bullet, Kyoto would quickly defeat the man. Though, that was only a thought. Days after Kyoto had been awoken in the night by a group of man trying to assassinate her. One of the man being Davy Jones himself. A battle would erupt on the marine headquarters on the island. With some casualties she was able to defeat the man, turning them into the jail. She was quickly given the rank of Commodore due to her expertise in battle and her many hardships.


Though, her journey didn’t stop there as she would come to meet a man by the name of Anton. A man who had a crew himself that was widely known throughout the four blues, The Knight Guard. Having a civilized conversation with the captain she was able to gain entrance to his crew, becoming a member of it (if he comes back). Afterwards she would train the power withinside herself, a power that she knew she had, but didn’t know how to awaken it. Haki. After hours of meditating she had awaken the power of a Queen, now being able to subdue enemies to the point where her spirit alone could knock them unconscious. This had come to be quite a help to her as she journeyed to her father’s island in hopes to see if he knew of this “Haki”. But of course, there was always something wrong. When she had got on the island she had found that it was being attacked by pirates. Using her wits and ninja like skills alone she would quickly take out enemies one by one, before being discovered at the palace garden. There she would see that a dragon was also helping the pirates, mastering her Devil Fruit ability she would tear away the skin of the dragon hitting him with power as such.


Though, coming back to Yotsuba she had been told that it was currently on lockdown due to previous events. As she patrolled the island near the beach a lone figure would walk along the streets. After trying multiple times to tell the man to follow her he would try to escape. Defeating the man, she would take him to the jail on Yotsuba, finding out that he was a pirate by the name of “Grey”. Receiving applauds for capturing yet another pirate she had been given a few days off and a easy job at the jail itself. Though, only hours into working her shift, arrows would begin to come as a man would be killed instantly from one to the forehead. Kyoto knowing that this was a foe would encounter a man (Kaiza/Hakai) behind a tree as the two began a massive battle, destroying the land in front of the prison. Though, the Kuja had lost horribly. She had been stabbed above the knee being immobile for quite some time. Knowing that she was to rash she would try to figure out a way she could get more better, but she knew that it wasn’t something that she should rush. The captain of Yotsuba would give her permission to go to the island of Ohara. Once there 2 days into her vacation she would encounter a enemy who fought her. She had easily won the first battle, but next she and a few other marines had to take out pirates who had come from a ship. Only before having to fight the man a second time in a hard battle. Kyoto had found that the man only wanted to get her due to her influence and fame over the west blue. (5.1 Mil Rep)



Kyoto has grown gradually from the weak ensign who was scared of death. After leaving Ohara she still did not value death and hated the mere thought of it, but seeing the fishman attack Yotsuba she realized death is inevitable. She had killed many men the day of the attack and had awakened a part of her that she never thought would rise. Some marines saw this as a deadly weapon, but others didn’t. She felt corrupt. 



Though, like any other marine she still enjoys when she accomplishes something. Like when facing powerful pirate captains like Davy Jones and sending him to death the first time and prison the second time. During the battle with Davy Jones she had mastered her Devil Fruit, something she was proud of, but she knew that she could get it to further heights. Something that would take time to happen. She had many weaknesses and knew that she wasn’t immortal, but she figured that if she mastered her weaknesses she could become untouchable.



Becoming famous however didn’t heighten or lower her ego. She hated the way people treated her. Being called Kokina Seigi, a hope for the world that she wasn’t. She was only a simple woman among the other marines, and this had further broughten itself out due to her horrible loss in the prison grounds. A unknown man freed many revolutionaries from the prison, stopping Kyoto as he quickly blinded her and paralyzed her for some time. The Kuja’s pride had been hurt a lot and she felt as if she was once again a weakling. 



Though, she knew that it was only the loss of a battle she was feeling. Something that she didn’t have in a long time. She knew that with further training she could overcome her feelings and become the marine she is meant to be.


Note: Attained 2 World Positions during this tier, Commander and Commodore



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15 Re: Kyoto S. Rikaru Updates on Mon Jul 04, 2016 12:53 pm

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Youve described actions done by your character very well, but there is nothing on how your character as a person has progressed, Youve given statements of what shes done but i don't see how your characters grown. Has capturing pirates and become slightly famous caused her ego to swell? has she managed to remain humble during all the praise, how did she feel after mastering her fruit, when fighting davy jones and seeing comrades fall how did she feel upon his capture, revengful? glad? not bothered? I don't really get a feel of her. This isn't denial i just want you to show me the development your character has made emotionally not just what actions shes done and not how others see her.

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16 Re: Kyoto S. Rikaru Updates on Mon Jul 04, 2016 1:06 pm

sorry, had forgot those details...fixed

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17 Re: Kyoto S. Rikaru Updates on Mon Jul 04, 2016 1:08 pm

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Much better, if no other staff disagree

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new stats post here [post stamina request in admin section]

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18 Re: Kyoto S. Rikaru Updates on Mon Jul 04, 2016 1:10 pm

think I get 2 points so putting those in Devil Fruit and 400 Stamina

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19 Re: Kyoto S. Rikaru Updates on Mon Jul 04, 2016 2:35 pm

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denying this, go rp in more oceans. u've been in one blue the whole time u've been tier 1 and tier 2, u need to do more stuff in other places.


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20 Re: Kyoto S. Rikaru Updates on Thu Jul 21, 2016 7:32 am

Current Tier 2
Oceans RP'd In: West Blue, Grandline/Paradise (Enies Lobby)
# of Task Completed: 3(1 being an event task. She also did an 2 arcs making the count 9)
# of Other Topics Completed: 4 (2 of which were a topic capturing PCs)
Character Development Notes:

After the captain decided that Kyoto was far to powerful to be stationed as an ensign forever, she was ordered to go explore the world and find a crew of her own. Seeing as she didn’t have anywhere in particular to go she headed to Yotsuba Island, a marine owned island. Quickly, she would rise through the ranks on the island. A crew of Fishman led by the Infamous pirate from the Grandline Davy Jones, had come to terrorize the island in hopes to destroy it and bring it under his rule. Though, Kyoto was not going for any of that. With the help of other marines she easily took over the crew, defeating many of them before a final showdown with Davy Jones himself would erupt. Using her newly made move that was pure speed, being able to move at speeds even faster than a bullet, Kyoto would quickly defeat the man. Though, that was only a thought. Days after Kyoto had been awoken in the night by a group of man trying to assassinate her. One of the man being Davy Jones himself. A battle would erupt on the marine headquarters on the island. With some casualties she was able to defeat the man, turning them into the jail. She was quickly given the rank of Commodore due to her expertise in battle and her many hardships.


Though, her journey didn’t stop there as she would come to meet a man by the name of Anton. A man who had a crew himself that was widely known throughout the four blues, The Knight Guard. Having a civilized conversation with the captain she was able to gain entrance to his crew, becoming a member of it (if he comes back). Afterwards she would train the power withinside herself, a power that she knew she had, but didn’t know how to awaken it. Haki. After hours of meditating she had awaken the power of a Queen, now being able to subdue enemies to the point where her spirit alone could knock them unconscious. This had come to be quite a help to her as she journeyed to her father’s island in hopes to see if he knew of this “Haki”. But of course, there was always something wrong. When she had got on the island she had found that it was being attacked by pirates. Using her wits and ninja like skills alone she would quickly take out enemies one by one, before being discovered at the palace garden. There she would see that a dragon was also helping the pirates, mastering her Devil Fruit ability she would tear away the skin of the dragon hitting him with power as such.

Though, coming back to Yotsuba she had been told that it was currently on lockdown due to previous events. As she patrolled the island near the beach a lone figure would walk along the streets. After trying multiple times to tell the man to follow her he would try to escape. Defeating the man, she would take him to the jail on Yotsuba, finding out that he was a pirate by the name of “Grey”. Receiving applauds for capturing yet another pirate she had been given a few days off and a easy job at the jail itself. Though, only hours into working her shift, arrows would begin to come as a man would be killed instantly from one to the forehead. Kyoto knowing that this was a foe would encounter a man (Kaiza/Hakai) behind a tree as the two began a massive battle, destroying the land in front of the prison. Though, the Kuja had lost horribly. She had been stabbed above the knee being immobile for quite some time. Knowing that she was to rash she would try to figure out a way she could get more better, but she knew that it wasn’t something that she should rush. The captain of Yotsuba would give her permission to go to the island of Ohara. Once there 2 days into her vacation she would encounter a enemy who fought her. She had easily won the first battle, but next she and a few other marines had to take out pirates who had come from a ship. Only before having to fight the man a second time in a hard battle. Kyoto had found that the man only wanted to get her due to her influence and fame over the west blue. (5.1 Mil Rep)

Kyoto has grown gradually from the weak ensign who was scared of death. After leaving Ohara she still did not value death and hated the mere thought of it, but seeing the fishman attack Yotsuba she realized death is inevitable. She had killed many men the day of the attack and had awakened a part of her that she never thought would rise. Some marines saw this as a deadly weapon, but others didn’t. She felt corrupt.

Though, like any other marine she still enjoys when she accomplishes something. Like when facing powerful pirate captains like Davy Jones and sending him to death the first time and prison the second time. During the battle with Davy Jones she had mastered her Devil Fruit, something she was proud of, but she knew that she could get it to further heights. Something that would take time to happen. She had many weaknesses and knew that she wasn’t immortal, but she figured that if she mastered her weaknesses she could become untouchable.

Becoming famous however didn’t heighten or lower her ego. She hated the way people treated her. Being called Kokina Seigi, a hope for the world that she wasn’t. She was only a simple woman among the other marines, and this had further broughten itself out due to her horrible loss in the prison grounds. A unknown man freed many revolutionaries from the prison, stopping Kyoto as he quickly blinded her and paralyzed her for some time. The Kuja’s pride had been hurt a lot and she felt as if she was once again a weakling.

Though, she knew that it was only the loss of a battle she was feeling. Something that she didn’t have in a long time. She knew that with further training she could overcome her feelings and become the marine she is meant to be. After losing the battle, Kyoto got word that the Rear Admiral, Derous is trying to form a crew. Seeing as she had nothing else better to do, she headed to thew 80th Branch and joined his crew. Quickly going to the Grandline with her first stop being Enies Lobby.

Note: Attained 2 World Positions during this tier, Commander and Commodore

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21 Re: Kyoto S. Rikaru Updates on Thu Jul 21, 2016 11:04 am

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22 Re: Kyoto S. Rikaru Updates on Thu Jul 21, 2016 11:37 am

hrm done

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