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1 Steven Irving{Npc} on Thu Apr 28, 2016 7:50 pm

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Broker Of Life


Name: Steven Irving
Alias/Epithet:Hades
Race:Winged
Gender:Male
Age:55

Occupation:Melee Weaponry
Affiliation: Pirate
Devil Fruit:Hito Hito no Mi Model :Hades
Tier:4
World Position: •Underworld Broker
Equipment:
Weapons:



Equipment Name:Bident of Thantos
Equipment Class:Spear
Equipment Type: Melee Weapon{Aka Spear}
Equipment Tier:4
Spec Req.4
Equipment Description:The Bident Spear or Two pronged fork have a Length: 8.9 centimetres (maximum) with a Width: 4.94 centimetres, and Thickness: 1.56 centimetres. This spear have said to made out of strongest material available for this tier weapon.
Equipment Ability:°Seastone: Thantos otherwise known as the two pronged fork this weapon is comprised several pieces of sea stone at the tip of each fork. This allow the user to deal harm to devil fruit users, and cancel out the effect of logia fruit users once contact is made.
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°Heat Dial T4: A dial inserted into the spear allowing it to heat up turning red hot to burn his foes when he swings this function only heat up the spear itself as for hilt it isn't effectived thus Steven remain unharmed.

Impact Dial T4: A dial inserted into the hammer half of his kagutsuchi allowing it to absorb and releasing impact upon swing.

Haki Aura:Haki of Greed

General Appearance:Steven Irving have a fragile looking appearance his devil fruit had granted him a undead pale look. Something like a vampire skin complexion but a bluish skin tone, and bright blue flames acting as his hair. His appearance ever shift due to his devil fruit ability which both act as a curse, and blessing but normally Steve is seen in his hybrid form period. He is quite a tall man with a rather skinny appearance. But don't let his size fool you he is known to be a masterful user in his devil fruit abilities, his two-prolong fork, his haki abilities and the helm of darkness . Steven is a winged man of the Shandia tribe knowning the harsh ship of his tribe. He descend down to world hoping to become a man of status,and wealth.

Steven often seen wearing his black gloomy robe which consist of a gold pin that hold his robe together. Not many people would like to meet him due to his pale look not to mention his deadly abilities. But Steven appearance suggest that he a man of wisdom due to his old pale like skin. In all honesty he have been a while for a while but it been so long that he himself don't remember. His devil fruit abilities grant him many things, and his devilish appearance is one of them even though it can be consider a curse. Steven mortal appearance was forgotten due to many years of him being in him devil fruit form. He doesn't remember how his mortal face look that my friend is sad.

Height: "12,8"
Weight:329
Personality:
~Greed: Steven wants nothing but power,beli,woman,and slaves. He loves to earn his wealth by blackmailing,cheating,stealing, and killing those who oppose him. Don't get his justice trait confuse with his greed because he have his own type of justice.


~Short Temper: Just like Hades or a man on the edge just the little thing piss him off. Don't get on his bad side because once you are you wish you wasn't.

~ A Just Man:Steven despite being consider evil he is a just man. Only harming those who seek to harm his cause a man that believe in absolute justice but not the marine type of justice his gloomy version of justice.

~Loyalty: Steven isn't really consider loyal until a deal is struck. When there is no deal at best you can say he will use you like a pawn then toss you alway when your use is over with.

~ Morbid: Steven always in a state of depression due to the world order. His gloomy personality make most people refuse to be around him. His love for death, and other weird things make his allies questionable about his true goals.

~Lets be serious: Due to his morbid nature Steven doesn't have a sense of humor. In fact he rarely laughs he take his job serious that though around him that make unneeded noise irritated him.

~Grudge: Steven can hold a grudge for long periods of time. In fact of you mange to piss him off consider yourself a target for many years to come. Though Steven doesn't allow his grudges to stop his mission he would take the time out of his day to make your time there unpleasant.

~Steven Love for woman: Steven love women in general he normally set out for one female he wants then stick with her he is not a hoe he is gloomy gentleman.

~Deals:Steven Myth Zoan had rub off one of the many personalities Hades have. Steven is a man of his word,and he can't turn down a good deal. He loves to make deals with people in general thought this is consider one of his weakness. He could allow his ability to make deals to out weight his loyalty to his faction. Once Steven make a deal he keep his word,and those who break it he will find you,and punishment you.


Crew:The Abyss Pirates is known to create havoc wherever they go. This crew is made up of vile shady pirates who seeks to earn a beli or too. They are loyal to Steven, and to be honest he is like the glue of the crew keeping everyone in check. The crew is called abyss not because of there large numbers but the unquenchable thrist for the all mighty beli. It is rumor to believe Steven enslave a single giant to enforce his network of smugglers, and pirates . The abyss pirates said to hand there hands in drugs,slaves,and smuggling. After all Steven is a business man or whatever you wanna call it or him.

Specs:
Hand to Hand: 1
Melee Weaponry: 4
Devil Fruit: 4
Marksmanship 0

Haki:A





Last edited by Real Steele on Sun May 15, 2016 10:40 pm; edited 3 times in total

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2 Re: Steven Irving{Npc} on Fri Apr 29, 2016 1:51 pm

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not seeing this guy as a revolutionary, so u can edit or take the 50k


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3 Re: Steven Irving{Npc} on Fri Apr 29, 2016 2:37 pm

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Change to broker..

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4 Re: Steven Irving{Npc} on Sun May 01, 2016 5:42 am

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Bump for feed back please

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5 Re: Steven Irving{Npc} on Sun May 01, 2016 8:57 am

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Denied. 
Reward 50k

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6 Re: Steven Irving{Npc} on Sun May 01, 2016 9:22 am

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Denied do to lack of trust of the user based on the instructions of Young Metro


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7 Re: Steven Irving{Npc} on Sun May 01, 2016 9:27 am

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Nigga what instructions? I follow the template...

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8 Re: Steven Irving{Npc} on Sun May 01, 2016 9:33 am

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If you want to make edits here is your feedback. 

Feedback: We have too many humans. Haki should be lower. Also, when you were first ask to make edits you forgot to remove that part of the revolutionaries(in the appearance). And finally the crew isn't all that creative. Overall you are lacking love bro. I see why young metro don't trust you. 

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9 Re: Steven Irving{Npc} on Thu May 05, 2016 7:46 am

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I hope all is well!

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10 Re: Steven Irving{Npc} on Sun May 15, 2016 6:56 pm

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Chance3 wrote:


If you want to make edits here is your feedback. 

Feedback: We have too many humans. Haki should be lower. Also, when you were first ask to make edits you forgot to remove that part of the revolutionaries(in the appearance). And finally the crew isn't all that creative. Overall you are lacking love bro. I see why young metro don't trust you. 


You failed to make full edits. In the characters personality it still states him being a Revolutionary. As for the crew it's a tad bit vague. You can go into detail more, because saying it has the most vile races isn't much to go on. As for his equipment, how does the helmet turn him invisible? There is no clear explanation so either edit to provide said explanation or remove it completely.

Considering as many times as you were asked to edited previously this is your last chance with this NPC or it will be denied.

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11 Re: Steven Irving{Npc} on Sun May 15, 2016 10:41 pm

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K ready

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12 Re: Steven Irving{Npc} on Mon May 16, 2016 3:45 am

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Approved
Beli Awarded: 250,000
Current Beli: 370,000
New Total: 620,000

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13 Re: Steven Irving{Npc} on Thu Feb 23, 2017 1:10 pm

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Bump I wanna know can i have this broker added to World Position?


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