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2 Re: Steven Irving{Npc} on Fri Apr 29, 2016 1:51 pm

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not seeing this guy as a revolutionary, so u can edit or take the 50k


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5 Re: Steven Irving{Npc} on Sun May 01, 2016 8:57 am

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Denied. 
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6 Re: Steven Irving{Npc} on Sun May 01, 2016 9:22 am

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Denied do to lack of trust of the user based on the instructions of Young Metro


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8 Re: Steven Irving{Npc} on Sun May 01, 2016 9:33 am

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If you want to make edits here is your feedback. 

Feedback: We have too many humans. Haki should be lower. Also, when you were first ask to make edits you forgot to remove that part of the revolutionaries(in the appearance). And finally the crew isn't all that creative. Overall you are lacking love bro. I see why young metro don't trust you. 

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10 Re: Steven Irving{Npc} on Sun May 15, 2016 6:56 pm

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Chance3 wrote:


If you want to make edits here is your feedback. 

Feedback: We have too many humans. Haki should be lower. Also, when you were first ask to make edits you forgot to remove that part of the revolutionaries(in the appearance). And finally the crew isn't all that creative. Overall you are lacking love bro. I see why young metro don't trust you. 


You failed to make full edits. In the characters personality it still states him being a Revolutionary. As for the crew it's a tad bit vague. You can go into detail more, because saying it has the most vile races isn't much to go on. As for his equipment, how does the helmet turn him invisible? There is no clear explanation so either edit to provide said explanation or remove it completely.

Considering as many times as you were asked to edited previously this is your last chance with this NPC or it will be denied.

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12 Re: Steven Irving{Npc} on Mon May 16, 2016 3:45 am

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