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Primary Skill Set Name:Hard Palms and Crashing Claws
Skill Set Stat:Hand to Hand  [Devil Fruit:Not Yet Obtained]
Skill Set Information:

Byron's style of hand to hand combat is focused on the ability to strike the opponent hard with palm strikes or with his fingernails. However they are protected by special gauntlets with claws that Byron wears and allow him to utilize this style without breaking off his pedicure.


Passive:

The User due to their training with this style is slightly faster than those around their tier level. Because of this, they have a 0.5+ to their speed.


Skill Strengths:

-Quick
-Has utility as the user can alternate between palm or Rake based assaults.

Skill Weaknesses:

-Reliant on Speed, If user is crippled in any way the style suffers a serious blow.
-Reliant on overwhelming the opponent quickly, or obtaining the element of surprise.


Notes:

Notes:


Tier 1:Breaks through/Cuts Wood, Cloth, Soft things, Flesh

Tier 2:Breaks Through/Cuts Stone, Bones, etc

Tier 3:Breaks through/Cuts into and through Iron now


Tier 4:User can now actually damage steel.

Tier 5:N/A

Tier 6:N/A



(Not Strengths or Weaknesses, but rather notes. Maybe a chart to show at what rank you can cut certain materials, or perhaps a unique system to your fruit that uses points along with Stamina to perform skills.)

Tier 1:

Speed: 2

Tier 1 Skill Name:Devil's Rake
Tier 1 Skill Type: Hand to Hand
Tier 1 Skill Range:Arm's Reach
Tier 1 Skill Cooldown&Duration:2 Post Cooldown, Instant Duration
Tier 1 Skill Description:Byron delivers a rash and quick rake across whatever part of his target it is aimed at with a Gauntlet covered hand. Contorting his hand like a Cat's Claw. Resulting in multiple Cuts Across whoever or Whatever he slashes at. Guaranteed Minor Bleeding on Organic beings Unless more Durable than the attack or Armored.

Tier 1 Skill Name:Go Down Already!
Tier 1 Skill Type: Hand to Hand
Tier 1 Skill Range:Arm's Reach
Tier 1 Skill Cooldown&Duration:2 Post Cooldown,Instant Duration
Tier 1 Skill Description:Byron suddenly delivers a fast and rapid Three hit Palm Strike Combination on one Individual Target. Causing Large bruising wherever he succeeds in hitting.

Tier 1 Skill Name:Push
Tier 1 Skill Type: Hand to Hand
Tier 1 Skill Range:Arm's Reach
Tier 1 Skill Cooldown&Duration:2 Post Cooldown, Instant Duration
Tier 1 Skill Description:Byron arranges both of his arms and Presses down Hard against a Opponent or Object with the two of them together,open. Dealing heavy bruising to the area that is struck with this move.

Tier 1 Skill Name:Dual Incision
Tier 1 Skill Type: Hand to Hand
Tier 1 Skill Range:Arm's Reach
Tier 1 Skill Cooldown&Duration:2 Post Cooldown,Instant Duration
Tier 1 Skill Description:Byron changes his stance, bringing his hands together and straightening his fingers. He sends his right and left hands slashing in each direction straight forward as he rushes forward. Mimicing a quick incision, anything struck by this attack will suffer a large horizontal cut wherever it was struck.

Tier 1 Skill Name:Pincer Shot
Tier 1 Skill Type: Hand to Hand
Tier 1 Skill Range:Arm's Reach
Tier 1 Skill Cooldown&Duration:2 Post Cooldown, Instant Duration
Tier 1 Skill Description: Byron dashes into an enemy and delivers a quick Pincer shot with one hand pointed straight forward. The Pincer shot delivers a hand width sized cut upon wherever the opponent is hit with this technique.

Tier 2:

Speed:3 (Give the average speed using our Speed Tier chart of the Skills of this Tier.)

Tier 2 Skill Name:Devil Raker Drive
Tier 2 Skill Type: Hand to hand
Tier 2 Skill Range:Arm's Reach
Tier 2 Skill Cooldown&Duration:3 Posts Cooldown:Duration Instant
Tier 2 Skill Description:Byron with a sudden burst will assault the enemy with a Five Claw strong combination quickly aiming to make short work of them. As if the claws are successful, The enemy will suffer from 3 open Claw mark wounds wherever each claw strikes.

Tier 2 Skill Name:Push Jump Hammer Claw
Tier 2 Skill Type: Hand to Hand
Tier 2 Skill Range:4 Meters
Tier 2 Skill Cooldown&Duration:4 Posts Cooldown:Duration Instant
Tier 2 Skill Description:The user does a quick roll as they push their hands onto the ground before springing into the air off of them. Brandishing his "claws" quickly,Byron will then Proceed to Rake down on the opponent below him with both.

Tier 2 Skill Name:Grape Gore Grab
Tier 2 Skill Type: Hand to Hand
Tier 2 Skill Range:Arms Reach
Tier 2 Skill Cooldown&Duration:2 Posts Cooldown:Duration Instant
Tier 2 Skill Description:Byron from the side or back of an Opponent. Stick his claws into their midsection and into their neck, before throwing them violently in any direction.

Tier 2 Skill Name:Dual Death Rend
Tier 2 Skill Type: Hand to Hand
Tier 2 Skill Range:Arms Reach
Tier 2 Skill Cooldown&Duration:Two Posts Cooldown:Duration Instant
Tier 2 Skill Description:Byron pounces towards an opponent and places his claws on both of their shoulders, before raking them violently down both of their arms or straight downward from there. Leaving Five Diagonal Slashed Open wounds on each side of the area that was cut down.


Tier 3:

Speed:4

Tier 3 Skill Name:Tiger Empress Rush
Tier 3 Skill Type:Hand to Hand
Tier 3 Skill Range:Arms Reach
Tier 3 Skill Cooldown&Duration:Four  Posts Cooldown:Duration Instant
Tier 3 Skill Description:Byron begins to Madly rush at a enemy with his claw based attacks. Dealing Four Hits with his rakes. However in this combination Byron begins to contort and twist his hands around as if they were spinning. Causing this Rush to be far more effective than it's other variants.

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Tier 4:

Speed: (Give the average speed using our Speed Tier chart of the Skills of this Tier.)

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Speed: (Give the average speed using our Speed Tier chart of the Skills of this Tier.)

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Tier 6:

Speed: (Give the average speed using our Speed Tier chart of the Skills of this Tier.)

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Tier 6 Skill Type: Fighting Stat(s) Involved
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Last edited by Breakfree on Wed Apr 06, 2016 4:30 am; edited 19 times in total

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@Breakfree wrote:Primary Skill Set Name:Hard Palms and Crashing Claws
Skill Set Stat:Hand to Hand  [Devil Fruit:Not Yet Obtained]
Skill Set Information:

Byron's style of hand to hand combat is focused on the ability to strike the opponent hard with palm strikes or with his fingers,almost as if they were claws. It focuses upon quick and rapid attacks to disable the enemy. Overwhelming them with various palm strikes or clawing hard into them with the users finger nails/Fingers.

This style also uses defensive grapples so far, in which the user utilizes the momentum and force the opponent throws at them, against the enemy.

Passive:The user has stronger palms and stronger fingers than that of a normal person. Due to the durability of those parts the style requires.

The User is Innately fast because of their style. As a result, they are slightly faster than those of their tier. how much faster?

Skill Strengths:

-Quick
-Has Some Utility what kind of utility, this is way too vagu

Skill Weaknesses:

-Reliant on Speed, If user is crippled in any way the style suffers a serious blow.
-Reliant on overwhelming the opponent quickly, or obtaining the element of surprise.


Notes:

Notes:


Tier 1:Skills from this style will inflict decent damage, could easily destroy low grade metals like copper, and dent minorly materials such as Iron. Can damage things like stone,but not fully break them at all. On people these skills have Decent trained forc ebehind them, Capable of small to moderate wounds/bruising/Cuts.Grapples at this level would be very basic,or defensive

Tier 2:Skills from this style have amped up,All previously mentioned materials are broken with ease except for Iron, Skills from this style have more penetrating force in their strikes. Rakes or claw like attacks from this style now can inflict deeper,more moderate lacerations.

Tier 3:Things are getting serious,Skills from here destroy all previously mentioned materials and dent steel. Palm based attacked of any kind now radiate force on whoever is struck by them to nearby parts. A Blow on someones abdomen would radiate damage to other parts near it such as their Pelvis for example. Rakes or claw strikes from this style can now deal deep lacerations on people or organic beings.Grapples at this level would have high levels of force.

Tier 4:Palm based attacks of any kind would feel almost like an Impact dial has directly struck the foe's very core upon impact. Grapples in the Art Begin to Progress to more offensive versions, Claws from this Tier become like sword slashes nearly. Inflicting Horrendous cuts on whatever is struck by them.Can now destroy steel.

Tier 5:All attacks at this tier break through most materials except for diamond.However diamond can now be effected. Skills also break bones and through tissue with relative ease. People become like paper nearly to this styles claws. Palms are like Ton hammers to the body of whoever is struck by this.

Tier 6:Skills of this level break through literally anything except seastone quickly. People become even softer than paper to claws of this style. Palm strikes on anything would rupture its very being almost.
too strong for a speed based skill set, no diamond destruction, steel sounds reasonable for Tier 6



(Not Strengths or Weaknesses, but rather notes. Maybe a chart to show at what rank you can cut certain materials, or perhaps a unique system to your fruit that uses points along with Stamina to perform skills.)

Tier 1:

Speed: 1 as this is speed based this can be 2

Tier 1 Skill Name:Devil's Rake
Tier 1 Skill Type: Hand to Hand
Tier 1 Skill Range:Up Close, in meters please and in all following skills
Tier 1 Skill Cooldown&Duration:3 Post CoolDown:
Tier 1 Skill Description:Byron delivers a rash and quick rake across whatever part of his target it is aimed at. Contorting his hand like a Cat's Claw. Resulting in multiple Cuts Across whoever or Whatever he slashes at. Guaranteed Minor Bleeding on Organic beings Unless more Durable than the attack or Armored.

Tier 1 Skill Name:Go Down Already!
Tier 1 Skill Type: Hand to Hand
Tier 1 Skill Range:Up Close
Tier 1 Skill Cooldown&Duration:5 Posts
Tier 1 Skill Description:Byron suddenly delivers a fast and rapid Three hit Palm Strike Combination on one Individual Target. Causing Large bruising wherever he succeeds in hitting.

Tier 1 Skill Name:Turn Around (Every now and then I feel a Little bit Lonely)
Tier 1 Skill Type: Hand to Hand
Tier 1 Skill Range:Up Close
Tier 1 Skill Cooldown&Duration:2 Turns
Tier 1 Skill Description:Whenever an Enemy Initiates an attack or comes directly at Byron,this becomes avaliable. The technique allows him to quickly side step under or around th etarget depending on their stance and movement. Using their own momentum, Byron manages to slip behind them and with a Sudden Push. Slams them by the neck onto the ground. this should be limited by the opponent's attack speed, to make clear this does not work against every kind of attack

Tier 1 Skill Name:Dual Incision
Tier 1 Skill Type: Hand to Hand
Tier 1 Skill Range:Up Close
Tier 1 Skill Cooldown&Duration:3 Posts
Tier 1 Skill Description:Byron changes his stance, bringing his hands together and straightening his fingers. He sends his right and left hands slashing in each direction straight forward as he rushes forward. Mimicing a quick incision, anything struck by this attack will suffer a large horizontal cut wherever it was struck.

Tier 1 Skill Name:Eye Incision
Tier 1 Skill Type: Hand to Hand
Tier 1 Skill Range:
Tier 1 Skill Cooldown&Duration:4 Turns
Tier 1 Skill Description:[Move is only available if being attacked] Byron Dashes towards the enemy that is assaulting him and with quick precision will attempt to face plant them. However he will sink his Nails into their eyes instead of latching his fingers onto the upper part of their face. Dealing heavy damage to that area or even blinding them. same problem as the previous skill

Tier 2:

Speed: (Give the average speed using our Speed Tier chart of the Skills of this Tier.)

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Speed: (Give the average speed using our Speed Tier chart of the Skills of this Tier.)

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Speed: (Give the average speed using our Speed Tier chart of the Skills of this Tier.)

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Tier 5:

Speed: (Give the average speed using our Speed Tier chart of the Skills of this Tier.)

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Speed: (Give the average speed using our Speed Tier chart of the Skills of this Tier.)

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@Breakfree wrote:Primary Skill Set Name:Hard Palms and Crashing Claws
Skill Set Stat:Hand to Hand  [Devil Fruit:Not Yet Obtained]
Skill Set Information:

Byron's style of hand to hand combat is focused on the ability to strike the opponent hard with palm strikes or with his fingers,almost as if they were claws. It focuses upon quick and rapid attacks to disable the enemy. Overwhelming them with various palm strikes or clawing hard into them with the users finger nails/Fingers.



Passive:

The User due to their training with this style is slightly faster than those around their tier level. Because of this, they have a 0.5+ to their speed.

The User possesses Sharper than usual nails because of their training of this style. Allowing them to utilize their nails as a weapon in ways that others cannot, alongside them not breaking easily compared to a normal person's nails. even if rather weak this is 2 passives in 1

Skill Strengths:

-Quick
-Has utility as the user can alternate between palm or Rake based assaults.

Skill Weaknesses:

-Reliant on Speed, If user is crippled in any way the style suffers a serious blow.
-Reliant on overwhelming the opponent quickly, or obtaining the element of surprise.


Notes:

Notes:


Tier 1:Skills from this style will inflict decent damage, could easily destroy low grade metals like copper, and dent minorly materials such as Iron. Can damage things like stone,but not fully break them at all. On people these skills have Decent trained forcebehind them,but are focused more so on speed Capable of small to moderate wounds/bruising/Cuts. no metal at Tier 1

Tier 2:Skills from this style have amped up,All previously mentioned materials are broken with greater ease except for Iron, Skills from this style have greater speed now. Rakes or claw like attacks from this style now can inflict deeper lacerations, and move quicker.

Tier 3:Things are getting serious,Skills from here destroy all previously mentioned materials (Except Iron)and dent steel minorly. Palm based attacked of any kind now radiate force on whoever is struck by them to nearby parts. A Blow on someones abdomen would radiate damage to other parts near it such as their Pelvis for example. Rakes or claw strikes from this style can now deal deep lacerations on people or organic beings.Alongside reaching a much larger speed.Attacks from this style now reach even higher speeds.

Tier 4:Palm based attacks of any kind would feel almost like an Impact dial has directly struck the foe's very core upon impact. impact dial is too vague, Claws from this Tier become like knife slashes. However the style can barely damage steel still.

Tier 5:Skills of this category are capable of rapid as hell speed. Claws and Palm Strikes are nearly unidentifiable to those with an untrained eye or around this tier. At this tier moves can damage steel,but they are incapable of fully destroying it in one go.

Tier 6:Skills of this level are capable of large amounts of blows in under a second. Clearing through almost multiple people in short bursts and in seconds with the immensivley quick handwork the user will possess. Palms and Claw slashes from this style and Tier come in the blink of an eye practically.
now you turned your damage chart half way into a speed chart? please describe the damage you do, I suggest you take a look at other people's damage charts



(Not Strengths or Weaknesses, but rather notes. Maybe a chart to show at what rank you can cut certain materials, or perhaps a unique system to your fruit that uses points along with Stamina to perform skills.)

Tier 1:

Speed: 2

Tier 1 Skill Name:Devil's Rake
Tier 1 Skill Type: Hand to Hand
Tier 1 Skill Range:Arm's Reach
Tier 1 Skill Cooldown&Duration:3 Post CoolDown: I suggest 2 Cooldown "instant" duration for all your simple skills
Tier 1 Skill Description:Byron delivers a rash and quick rake across whatever part of his target it is aimed at. Contorting his hand like a Cat's Claw. Resulting in multiple Cuts Across whoever or Whatever he slashes at. Guaranteed Minor Bleeding on Organic beings Unless more Durable than the attack or Armored.

Tier 1 Skill Name:Go Down Already!
Tier 1 Skill Type: Hand to Hand
Tier 1 Skill Range:Arm's Reach
Tier 1 Skill Cooldown&Duration:5 Posts same as above
Tier 1 Skill Description:Byron suddenly delivers a fast and rapid Three hit Palm Strike Combination on one Individual Target. Causing Large bruising wherever he succeeds in hitting.

Tier 1 Skill Name:Push
Tier 1 Skill Type: Hand to Hand
Tier 1 Skill Range:Arm's Reach
Tier 1 Skill Cooldown&Duration:2 Turns same as above
Tier 1 Skill Description:Byron arranges both of his arms and Presses down Hard against a Opponent or Object with the two of them together,open. Dealing heavy bruising to the area that is struck with this move.

Tier 1 Skill Name:Dual Incision
Tier 1 Skill Type: Hand to Hand
Tier 1 Skill Range:Arm's Reach
Tier 1 Skill Cooldown&Duration:3 Posts same as above
Tier 1 Skill Description:Byron changes his stance, bringing his hands together and straightening his fingers. He sends his right and left hands slashing in each direction straight forward as he rushes forward. Mimicing a quick incision, anything struck by this attack will suffer a large horizontal cut wherever it was struck.

Tier 1 Skill Name:Pincer Shot
Tier 1 Skill Type: Hand to Hand
Tier 1 Skill Range:Arm's Reac
Tier 1 Skill Cooldown&Duration:4 Turns same as above
Tier 1 Skill Description:[Move is only available if being attacked] Byron dashes into an enemy and delivers a quick Pincer shot with one hand pointed straight forward. Almost as if meant to mimic a mini Spear. The attack pierces through flesh past the skin and a bit into the tissue, leaving a horizontal open wound on wherever struck,unless covered by armor or the target is more durable. how is this the only tier 1 skill that does serious damage? really can't say much about this till you finish your damage chart, still find it questionable strong for a tier 1 skill

Tier 2:

Speed:3 (Give the average speed using our Speed Tier chart of the Skills of this Tier.)

Tier 2 Skill Name:Devil Raker Drive
Tier 2 Skill Type: Hand to hand
Tier 2 Skill Range:Arm's Reach
Tier 2 Skill Cooldown&Duration:3 Posts
Tier 2 Skill Description:Byron with a sudden burst will assault the enemy with a Five Claw strong combination quickly aiming to make short work of them. As if the claws are successfull, The enemy will suffer from 3 open Claw mark wounds wherever each claw strikes.

Tier 2 Skill Name:Push Jump Hammer Claw
Tier 2 Skill Type: Hand to Hand
Tier 2 Skill Range:4 Meters
Tier 2 Skill Cooldown&Duration:5 posts
Tier 2 Skill Description:The user does a quick roll as they push their hands onto the ground before springing into the air off of them. Brandishing his "claws" quickly,Byron will then Proceed to Rake down on the opponent below him with both.

Tier 2 Skill Name:Grape Gore Grab
Tier 2 Skill Type: Hand to Hand
Tier 2 Skill Range:Arms Reach
Tier 2 Skill Cooldown&Duration:3 Posts
Tier 2 Skill Description:Byron from the side or back of an Opponent. Stick his claws into their midsection and into their neck, before throwing them violently in any direction.

Tier 2 Skill Name:Dual Death Rend
Tier 2 Skill Type: Hand to Hand
Tier 2 Skill Range:Arms Reach
Tier 2 Skill Cooldown&Duration:Two Posts
Tier 2 Skill Description:Byron pounces towards an opponent and places his claws on both of their shoulders, before raking them violently down both of their arms or straight downward from there. Leaving Five Diagonal Slashed Open wounds on each side of the area that was cut down.


Tier 3:

Speed:4

Tier 3 Skill Name:Tiger Empress Rush
Tier 3 Skill Type:Hand to Hand
Tier 3 Skill Range:Arms Reach
Tier 3 Skill Cooldown&Duration:Five Posts
Tier 3 Skill Description:Byron begins to Madly rush at a enemy with his claw based attacks. Dealing Seven Hits with his rakes. more like 4-5 at best However in this combination Byron begins to contort and twist his hands around as if they were spinning. Causing this Rush to be far more effective than it's other variants.

Tier 3 Skill Name:
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@Breakfree wrote:Primary Skill Set Name:Hard Palms and Crashing Claws
Skill Set Stat:Hand to Hand  [Devil Fruit:Not Yet Obtained]
Skill Set Information:

Byron's style of hand to hand combat is focused on the ability to strike the opponent hard with palm strikes or with his fingers,almost as if they were claws. It focuses upon quick and rapid attacks to disable the enemy. Overwhelming them with various palm strikes or clawing hard into them with the users finger nails/Fingers.



Passive:

The User due to their training with this style is slightly faster than those around their tier level. Because of this, they have a 0.5+ to their speed.

User has more durable than usual nails. how hard?

Skill Strengths:

-Quick
-Has utility as the user can alternate between palm or Rake based assaults.

Skill Weaknesses:

-Reliant on Speed, If user is crippled in any way the style suffers a serious blow.
-Reliant on overwhelming the opponent quickly, or obtaining the element of surprise.


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Tier 1:Moves are relatively basic, Can pierce through or bruise/cut flesh depending on the technique. Can also destroy or greatly damage wood if used on that. Wouldn't really be able to do much against most metals, strikes are quick.

Tier 2:Moves of this tier from this style have a better chance of harming the more basic metals such as copper or aluminum, the user is now capable of damaging and destroying stone, but the moves remain predominantly speed based. User now cuts flesh as well easier, palm strikes leave larger bruising on impact.

Tier 3:Moves of this tier from This style strike even faster. In terms of damage the user can now break through most previously mentioned metals and stone with ease, however the user will only be able to dent and partially damage materials such as Iron. Claw/Rake based moves leave moderately deeper cuts than the previous tier. Palm Strikes are capable of fracturing bones now.


Tier 4:In this tier,All moves are very precise and rapid, like a surgeons hand mixed with lightning. However the user lacks strength,but can now break through materials such as iron. In this tier Palms fracture bones quickly, while claws cut like knives almost.

Tier 5:Skills of this category are capable of rapid as hell speed. Claws and Palm Strikes are nearly unidentifiable to those with an untrained eye or around this tier. At this tier moves can damage steel,but they are incapable of fully destroying it in one go.Here claw/rake moves cut through people as if they were paper nearly, while Palm strikes in this tier can shatter bones with ease.

Tier 6:Skills of this level are capable of large amounts of blows in under a second. Clearing through almost multiple people in short bursts and in seconds with the immensely quick handwork the user will possess. Palms and Claw slashes from this style and Tier come in the blink of an eye practically. User can now destroy steel and any metals or materials weaker than it. Claws/Rakes will shred through people in instants almost, while Palm strikes while leave severe internal ruptures in their wake depending on where the opponent was struck.



(Not Strengths or Weaknesses, but rather notes. Maybe a chart to show at what rank you can cut certain materials, or perhaps a unique system to your fruit that uses points along with Stamina to perform skills.)

Tier 1:

Speed: 2

Tier 1 Skill Name:Devil's Rake
Tier 1 Skill Type: Hand to Hand
Tier 1 Skill Range:Arm's Reach
Tier 1 Skill Cooldown&Duration:2 Post Cooldown, Instant Duration
Tier 1 Skill Description:Byron delivers a rash and quick rake across whatever part of his target it is aimed at. Contorting his hand like a Cat's Claw. Resulting in multiple Cuts Across whoever or Whatever he slashes at. Guaranteed Minor Bleeding on Organic beings Unless more Durable than the attack or Armored.

Tier 1 Skill Name:Go Down Already!
Tier 1 Skill Type: Hand to Hand
Tier 1 Skill Range:Arm's Reach
Tier 1 Skill Cooldown&Duration:2 Post Cooldown,Instant Duration
Tier 1 Skill Description:Byron suddenly delivers a fast and rapid Three hit Palm Strike Combination on one Individual Target. Causing Large bruising wherever he succeeds in hitting.

Tier 1 Skill Name:Push
Tier 1 Skill Type: Hand to Hand
Tier 1 Skill Range:Arm's Reach
Tier 1 Skill Cooldown&Duration:2 Post Cooldown, Instant Duration
Tier 1 Skill Description:Byron arranges both of his arms and Presses down Hard against a Opponent or Object with the two of them together,open. Dealing heavy bruising to the area that is struck with this move.

Tier 1 Skill Name:Dual Incision
Tier 1 Skill Type: Hand to Hand
Tier 1 Skill Range:Arm's Reach
Tier 1 Skill Cooldown&Duration:2 Post Cooldown,Instant Duration
Tier 1 Skill Description:Byron changes his stance, bringing his hands together and straightening his fingers. He sends his right and left hands slashing in each direction straight forward as he rushes forward. Mimicing a quick incision, anything struck by this attack will suffer a large horizontal cut wherever it was struck.

Tier 1 Skill Name:Pincer Shot
Tier 1 Skill Type: Hand to Hand
Tier 1 Skill Range:Arm's Reach
Tier 1 Skill Cooldown&Duration:2 Post Cooldown, Instant Duration
Tier 1 Skill Description: Byron dashes into an enemy and delivers a quick Pincer shot with one hand pointed straight forward. The Pincer shot delivers a hand width sized cut upon wherever the opponent is hit with this technique.

Tier 2:

Speed:3 (Give the average speed using our Speed Tier chart of the Skills of this Tier.)

Tier 2 Skill Name:Devil Raker Drive
Tier 2 Skill Type: Hand to hand
Tier 2 Skill Range:Arm's Reach
Tier 2 Skill Cooldown&Duration:3 Posts Cooldown:Duration Instant
Tier 2 Skill Description:Byron with a sudden burst will assault the enemy with a Five Claw strong combination quickly aiming to make short work of them. As if the claws are successful, The enemy will suffer from 3 open Claw mark wounds wherever each claw strikes.

Tier 2 Skill Name:Push Jump Hammer Claw
Tier 2 Skill Type: Hand to Hand
Tier 2 Skill Range:4 Meters
Tier 2 Skill Cooldown&Duration:4 Posts Cooldown:Duration Instant
Tier 2 Skill Description:The user does a quick roll as they push their hands onto the ground before springing into the air off of them. Brandishing his "claws" quickly,Byron will then Proceed to Rake down on the opponent below him with both.

Tier 2 Skill Name:Grape Gore Grab
Tier 2 Skill Type: Hand to Hand
Tier 2 Skill Range:Arms Reach
Tier 2 Skill Cooldown&Duration:2 Posts Cooldown:Duration Instant
Tier 2 Skill Description:Byron from the side or back of an Opponent. Stick his claws into their midsection and into their neck, before throwing them violently in any direction.

Tier 2 Skill Name:Dual Death Rend
Tier 2 Skill Type: Hand to Hand
Tier 2 Skill Range:Arms Reach
Tier 2 Skill Cooldown&Duration:Two Posts Cooldown:Duration Instant
Tier 2 Skill Description:Byron pounces towards an opponent and places his claws on both of their shoulders, before raking them violently down both of their arms or straight downward from there. Leaving Five Diagonal Slashed Open wounds on each side of the area that was cut down.


Tier 3:

Speed:4

Tier 3 Skill Name:Tiger Empress Rush
Tier 3 Skill Type:Hand to Hand
Tier 3 Skill Range:Arms Reach
Tier 3 Skill Cooldown&Duration:Four  Posts Cooldown:Duration Instant
Tier 3 Skill Description:Byron begins to Madly rush at a enemy with his claw based attacks. Dealing Four Hits with his rakes. However in this combination Byron begins to contort and twist his hands around as if they were spinning. Causing this Rush to be far more effective than it's other variants.

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are you sure you only want 1 passive? In case you don´t I guess 1/2


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Generally speed passives are only given to zoans/animals or notable speed based skill sets. If this is a speed based then your strength will cap at tier 4 [steel].

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Alright. Fixed it.

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