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1The quest to gain Resurrection (Done) Empty The quest to gain Resurrection (Done) on Thu Mar 03, 2016 4:51 pm

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Arc Type: Standard
Arc Name: The quest to gain Resurrection
Arc Tier: 4
Sea: East Blue
Island: Louge Town
Arc Description: Some interesting news has come across Zanji's ears. he has heard tell of rumors of that the mayor of Louge town is throwing a contest. The grand prize is the fabled Yomi Yomi no mi devil fruit somewhere on the island and the fruit is guarded by a a terrible beast like creature who has claimed it as a natural source for light defeat it and the prize is yours! But it is not that simple there is only one map and the old lady Yukino is reluctant to give it out get the map only the strong may acquire it and they must face him and his men. Once that is completed the final task and fight shall begin  for the battle for the Yomi Yomi no mi against the genetically created creature and the main prize.

Beginning:
Task Name: Gathering Intel on the beast
Tier:1
NPC or PC:npc
Location: Louge Town
Crew, Team, or Personal: solo
Description: Zanji and his crew have arrived on Louge Town and its time he and his crew mates went out and did some investigating about the claims of the devil fruit sighting are true question the towns folk and gather information and report back to the crew about the findings. But beware there are some shady contestants out there who wish to slim the competition.
Enemy Details:11 tier one contestants
Boss: None

Task Name:The Competition grows more fierce (part one)
Tier: 2
NPC or PC: npc
Location: Louge Town
Crew, Team, or Personal: Crew
Description: Many people have signed up for this contest and have already gotten a head a start upon  the crew take them down to slim the competition in the outskirts of town.
Enemy Details: 25 tier one grunts 2 tier 2's Contestants
Boss: no

Middle:
Task Name: Ambush slimming the Competition
Tier:2
NPC or PC: NPC
Location:Louge Town
Crew, Team, or Personal: Crew
Description: Zanji and his crew have been followed out into a path leading through the forest which leads to the location of the old woman who holds the map and are ambushed by some competitors that want the Mera Mera no mi take em out or incapacitate them!
Enemy Details: 5 tier contestants 5 t1 contestants 2 t2 Contestants
Boss: No

Task Name:Fishman Attack
Tier: 3
NPC or PC: npc
Location: East blue
Crew, Team, or Personal: Crew
Description: A roving crew of fishman have arrived upon louge town and have begun to lay siege to the towns people hoping to get the location of the map out of the mayor during the contest Turn back to help the townspeople before it is to late
Enemy Details: 10 t1 fishmen grunt 6 t2 fishman captains 1 t3 fishman
Boss: no


End:
Task Name: Get the Map!
Tier:3
NPC or PC:PC
Location:Louge Town
Crew, Team, or Personal: crew
Description:Finding a map to the location of the cave where the beast lies in wait guarding the precious Yomi Yomi no mi take it by force from the reluctant owner! For She genetically created the creature out of a desire to try and create eh first human made giant but sadly it was a failure but she still views him as her creation.
Enemy Details:  15 tier one grunt contestants 1 tier 3 boss
Boss: Yeah

Boss Details:

Boss Name: Yukino
Tier:3
Description:
Pic:
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yukino appears as thoroughly aged woman, wearing martial arts clothes and occasionally a purple cap bearing a manji with the characters for 'master', which reflects ancient Buddhist tradition. She had shoulder-length wavy pinkish gray hair and brown eyes she stands at the height of four foot one but do not let her small demeanor fool you!
Devil Fruit: n/a
Haki Aura:  yes
Equipment: T2 wood bow staff
Specs:3 in rokushiki 2 in melee weaponry 1 in haki


Task Name: Attack of The Guardian Beast!
Tier:4
NPC or PC:PC
Location:Louge Town
Crew, Team, or Personal: Crew
Description: The time has come Zanji and his faithful crew have made it through the perilous trails of getting to the location of the beast that guards the fruit. Inside the cave the beast awaits any who dare try to get it's shiny source of light, across the entrances and even the insides of the cave are littered with fragments of animals and some humans who have dared to enter its cave. who will come out victorious!?
Enemy Details: 1 t4 boss 10 tier one enslaved humans 8 tier 2's enslaved humans
Boss: yes

Boss Details:

Boss Name:Dinkleberg
Tier:4
Description:Pic Of creature
Pic of Guardian:
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Standing at a outstanding 9 and a half feet tall. Francis dark skin of grey scales matching the color of stone. Francis  possess short and powerful legs to carry him long distances and short but powerful arms that are capable of great feats of strength. Though capable of understanding and using human speech francis has more animal tendencies such as a violent temper and protective of what it claims as it's own.
Devil Fruit: n/a
Haki Aura:  yes
Equipment: t3 hammer shaped club
Specs:4 in hand to hand 4 in melee weaponry 1 in haki



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2The quest to gain Resurrection (Done) Empty Re: The quest to gain Resurrection (Done) on Fri Mar 04, 2016 5:26 am

Isabella

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Your tier 3 needs to be far harder, your tier 4 needs more than just a single tier 4 boss. Grunts etc would suffice. He's a tier 4, haki should be applicable even if weak. Tier 2 club/hammer shoudl be tier 3 minimum. Tier 3 should have a tier 3 boss.

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3The quest to gain Resurrection (Done) Empty Re: The quest to gain Resurrection (Done) on Fri Mar 04, 2016 9:45 am

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Zanji wrote:Arc Type: Standard)
Arc Name: The quest to control Fire
Arc Tier: 4
Sea: East Blue
Island: Louge Town
Arc Description: Some interesting news has come across zanji's ears. he has heard tell of rumors of a contest that is going on in his hometown. The grand prize is the fabled mera mera no mi devil fruit somewhere on the island and the fruit is guarded by a a terrible beast like creature who has claimed it as a natural source for light defeat it and the prize is yours! But it is not that simple there is only one map and the man is reluctant to give it out get the map and find the location and claim the fruit.

This info is very vague and I don't see any real effort! Who's doing a contest? Who is "the man" that seems reluctant? Is he a part of the contest? Are there other contestants?

Beginning:
Task Name: Gathering intel on the beast
Tier:1
NPC or PC:npc
Location: Louge Town
Crew, Team, or Personal: crew
Description: Zanji and his crew have arrived on Louge Town and its time he and his crew mates went out and did some investigating about the claims of the devil fruit sighting are true question the twons folk and gather information and report back to zanji
Enemy Details:5 tier zero grunts 6 tier one grunts
Boss: None

A very tame first. You can do better. This is a t4 arc and requires more difficulty. Who are these grunts? I didn't see anything about the enemies in your description. Are they other contestants? You got on the island and started investigating? Has the contest started? Are they actually in the contest?

Insert a task for this part. A tier 4 task should have more than four tasks in it as a tier 5 is "10+" (see: **Arc System**)

Also, I don't mind there being weak npcs but there need to be stronger ones as well. I don't want to see any more tier 0 anythings.


Middle:
Task Name: Ambush slimming the competition
Tier:2
NPC or PC: NPC
Location:Louge Town
Crew, Team, or Personal: Crew
Description: Zanji and his crew have been followed out into a path leading through the forest which leads to the location of the man who holds the map and are ambushed by some competitors that want the mera mera no mitake em out or incappcitate them!
Enemy Details: 5 tier zeros 5 t1 2 t2 grunts
Boss: No

Spelling, dear god, fix the spelling!

Also, the competitors. You'll have to stop them before approaching the "man". They are dynamic as well and at least their leader would have his own stats. Insert t2 or 3 boss description, and no tier zero crew mates. Tier 1 and up from here.


Task Name: Get the Map!
Tier:3
NPC or PC:PC
Location:Louge Town
Crew, Team, or Personal: crew
Description:Finding a map to the location of the cave where the beast lies in wait guarding the precious mera mera no mi take it by force from the reluctant owner!
Enemy Details:  6 tier zero grunts 5 tier one grunts 1 tier 3
Boss: (Is there a boss?)

Again who's the man? If he's reluctant then he should be a dynamic NPC with stats. Insert tier 3 Boss description here, t2 sub-boss, tier 1 henchman. He can be a roshi or sensei or however you want to explain it. Give him depth. I wanna see weapons, df maybe, a overall skill type. NO T0 anythings. Turn all those tier 0s into tier 1s.

End:


Hold your horses. There was only one other team trying to get the devil fruit and/or map? Not buying it. You need more task to flesh out this arc and luckily for you, you've created quite the scenario for it. Insert tier 3 task here. 1 Boss, 2 sub-bosses, and henchman. And give them some depth. Again, you have dozens of dfs to insert, weapon ideas, motives,.

Task Name: Attack of The Guardian Beast!
Tier:4
NPC or PC:PC
Location:Louge Town
Crew, Team, or Personal: Crew
Description: The time has come Zanji and his faithful crew have made it through the perilous trails of getting to the location of the beast that guards the fruit. Inside the cave the beast awaits any who dare try to get it's shiny source of light, across the entrances and even the insides of the cave are littered with fragments of animals and some humas who have dared to enter its cave. who will come out victorious!?
Enemy Details: 1 t4
Boss:  yes



Boss Details:

Boss Name:Francis
Tier:4
Description:Pic Of creature
Pic of Guardian:
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Standing at a outstanding 9 and a half feet tall. Francis dark skin of grey scales matching the color of stone. Francis  possess short and powerful legs to carry him long distances and short but powerful arms that are capable of great feats of strength. Though capable of understanding and using human speech francis has more animal tendencies such as a violent temper and protective of what it claims as it's own.
Devil Fruit: n/a
Haki Aura: n/a
Equipment: t2 hammer shaped club
Specs:4 in hand to hand 5 in melee weaponry

Why is there a troll here? Is this a minkman? If its a minkman, then give it more minkman qualities. If not, help me understand.

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4The quest to gain Resurrection (Done) Empty Re: The quest to gain Resurrection (Done) on Sat Mar 05, 2016 10:06 pm

Alaric

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Edited ughh my brain hurts

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5The quest to gain Resurrection (Done) Empty Re: The quest to gain Resurrection (Done) on Mon Mar 07, 2016 7:52 am

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6The quest to gain Resurrection (Done) Empty Re: The quest to gain Resurrection (Done) on Thu Mar 10, 2016 2:47 pm

Alaric

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Link to IC Task:Task
Link to Task Reg: Task registration
Post Count:2 (wc required wordcount done.)
Additional Bounty or Rep. Notes. prolly not

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7The quest to gain Resurrection (Done) Empty Re: The quest to gain Resurrection (Done) on Fri Mar 11, 2016 4:26 am

Isabella

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Nice, fluid movement between the crew, good story lined up.

Zanji - 100,000 beli - 75,000 bounty.
Fury - 100.000 beli - 60,000 bounty
Lunette - 120,000 beli - 80,000 bounty
all gain 2 exp
1 event ticket awarded to all

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8The quest to gain Resurrection (Done) Empty Re: The quest to gain Resurrection (Done) on Fri Mar 11, 2016 7:08 am

My bad, graded the tasks and posted the grading in different places.

25,000 beli
2 exp
30,000 bounty.

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9The quest to gain Resurrection (Done) Empty Re: The quest to gain Resurrection (Done) on Thu Mar 24, 2016 7:44 pm

Alaric

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Link to IC Task: Part One complete
Link to Task Reg: Boom
Post Count: Wc exceeded ( Saldly will left the site so he was unable to finish his last post)
Additional Bounty or Rep. Notes. Extra berri for being apirate captain for me

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10The quest to gain Resurrection (Done) Empty Re: The quest to gain Resurrection (Done) on Sat Mar 26, 2016 1:40 pm

All o yall get: 70k bounty, 90k Beli, 2XP


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11The quest to gain Resurrection (Done) Empty Re: The quest to gain Resurrection (Done) on Wed May 25, 2016 9:32 pm

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Link to IC Task: Completed task
Link to Task Reg: Boom
Post Count: Wc exceeded ( Saldly fury poofed left the site to my knowledge and so i finished the task solo.
Additional Bounty or Rep. Notes. Extra berri for being  a pirate captain for me

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12The quest to gain Resurrection (Done) Empty Re: The quest to gain Resurrection (Done) on Wed May 25, 2016 9:39 pm

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t2 Task ambushing the whatevers gets!

175,000 beli and 85,000 bounty plus 2 exp


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